The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 12

Hey Muskaan ,

Awww...
Muskaaan...
U hav just updated my favourite part...
Sooo happy to read it...
The reunion part is the most emotional one ever...
The way arjun slept on the kings lap...
Really touching...
⭐️
Loved the way arjun made riya confess her fear...
That was so intelligent..
Afterall,he is acp arjun...!!!!!
And yes...,arjun set sik free for a reason...
Hope he makes riya trust him again...
Sik will come back for riya,that's sure...
😲
And also...the love &emotions u penned down in this update is beyond words...
Hats off...
And thank you sooo much for that pm...

wow!! so riya's desperateness was because of this!! i am happy arjun figured it out n make her admit!! i hope he can make her feel secure... no more kidnapping i want arjun to kill sik in front of riya...

hate that sik to the core!!! cant imagine how much riya suffered!! poor girl

flashback was soo touching!! arjun lost his ma!!

loved arjun-mr rawte scene.. ofcourse how he refer to them as 4 sons!! btw arjun's dad is also very sharp.. hehe how came he knew about choree eavesdropping on them??

so arjun set sik free... its good too.. arjun also should come out of his fear n should be able to protect riya... n he can!!

rathore is a true friend... lol he too started to pass nasty comments...lol

next time i hope riya will b really ready n wont push him away... its always arjun who gets pushed away.. hope atleast in future riya would b bold n ready enough to take the next step!! 😆

please update soon... i am expecting a lot more romantic ariya scenes... 😉 n good punishment for sik 😡

first of all kaan pakad ke sry actually haath pair bhi pakad ne ko tayari hu mai mere... actually the thing is I had forgot my password for wordpres... tabse itna locha Hua ki puch hi mat... and fir I have hardly got any time these to spend time online aaram se...

u won't believe it I still haven't read last update of urs.. m so behind I know only one chapter and now two... but seriously me jaan much kar nahi karing ye... haalat and curfews karva rahe h mujhse... m sorry...

*runs to pg 12 to read ur note and then will fix my password thingy right away..

P.S sorry once again and Haan sorry no colourful texts majburi hai cell se ol hu kya karu *lightly sobs...

Chal jaldi comment karungi... I will try to make it up to u pakka plomise...

did I ever say I love u... I know is bar mere naam ka warrant nikala hoga tune isliye maskofying itna saara hehe * just kidding I really mean it m sry

Muskan dear first of all thank u fr d mail..
i hv a request hope u fulfil it
if u wont its ok..
cos u r an amazing writer
hats off to u..
i want a sng in next update..if possible
beautiful n lovely sng
o saiyan frm agneepath..

Nw abt update..
u made me very emotional during arjun past..
u knw i listen d sng meri maa mumma of kailash kher
n den meri maa of tzp..
hope u heard dat sngs..
me cry badly!.
its so painful..
beautiful description of a child mother relationship
claps

Muskuuu what do u mean aake chala gaya aarey there's few more hours dear hehe

Di I hav commented on ur blog...
N here too I lyk to say dat I loved ur chap... It ws beyond awsum...
Arjun's past n his desire f fatherly ... Accusation for killing his own mother ... Witnessing his own mother's death.. Finding riya in dat same situation...killing his own self n become arrogant jst to hide iz own fear jst made me damn emotional...
While reading I was jst imagining d same things n it made me cry...
D way riya sufferd n her insecurities n sik will cme n take hr away ws lyk dat kil dat sik...
Though I loved d way arjun wanted riya to cme out f hr fear so freed sik ... But I fear if our arjun nt abl to save riya as she iz tooo weak... Jst dat much fear crept ...
Dis story has become our lyf story rather dan fiction... Jst loved ur wrk.. Awsum
Continue soon
N Thnku for pm :)

Nw thank u fr d wonderful bond btw father son relationship
thank u fr clearing it as i asked abt in my previous coment..
i loved d kaka arjun relationship most..
sam a grt frnd..
aww mr. rawte had four sons..too gud..
poor doctor..ariya awesum..

Heyy...Aapi! That was a faab update!
The sensetv relation between mother-son and father-son...you showd it amazingly! That was a vry emotional part of the update. And it's true, king-prince also share a simpl father-son relationship, which may fade away, but never leavs!
Mr. Rawte is a realy sharp king indeed! He sensed shree-chotu's presence...which even ETF chief sameer rathod was unabl to!

Aur haan, Rathod nasty jokes bhi marta hai!!! Dekhne me to lagta hai unhe sirf logo ko dhamkana hi aata hai...par actual me to unhe bohot kuch aata hai!!!!

And yes, Our akdu prince Arjun sahab is also not less also. He was smart enough to make Riya confess what was the real prob!! Claps for that!

And last jhatka...Arjun set Sik free??? To make Riya feel safe... Hmmm, that was definitly a daring step.

Let's hope for the best!!
All in all, fantastic update!

And yes, I totally agree with your dhamkis. Caz, itni mehnat, itni waqt laga ke ek update karne ke baad jab reply nehi milta, taab bohot bura lagta hai. Readers ke liye hi to writers likhte hai. Readers to padhke maza le lete hai, to kya wo log writer ke khatir ek comment nehi kar sakte?? Writers ko update ke baadle me aur milta hi kya hai? Aur ek comments ke ilawa writer ko aur chahiye hi kya???