ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#5 V.V.IMP Pg170 14/04

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-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

really god you are awesome...
and your updates are ofcourse worth stalking...
i had the dark sky of mine...and your ff each and everyone of them
are like stars of my sky...that shone soo bright...
pawn update was beautiful...saw the possessive of arnav a lot
and i just love khushi in this ff...only because of her innocence...
her antics...her gestures...her understanding so pure...serene
thanx for embedding your stars in my dark sky...
ps:my feelings for your writing...Love you a lot...APPY DII...

Edited by anamika90 - 12 years ago

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the-crazy-girl

@the-crazy-girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

really awesome, I like it so much...
Khushi innocence...but thought she will discover about Arnav very soon and why he has marry her, by that time, Arnav will fall in love (he's already so in with her) with her but when she will discover, she will maybe try to leave him...don't know...
hope Arnav will start to love her even more and more and more...😳

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Natasha333

@Natasha333

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Wooww...U updated finally !!

Nice Update !!

waitng for extension !!

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aazzz

@aazzz

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

ohhhoo lovely and cute update

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

reserv

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the whole update was amazing...

so many emotions in one go...

from the beginning...

Arnav's possessiveness towards Khushi...when Khushi feels happy for that...

but at the same time she still confused about the night before...when she had her first but most rough encounter...

Khushi felt Arnav's possessiveness...but she still yearn for the warmth...which she missed last night...

Arnav being cautious of the fact that Khushi being nice with Shyam may raise another chance to get taunted from Anjali and others...

Khushi's confusion and Payal's reassuring...

Arnav hets what wants...but the way he behave with Khushi at the last part...made the day...her innocent touch is not bothering him...but giving him pleasure...that was something really touching...

Edited by heavenspirit - 12 years ago

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mayvs34

@mayvs34

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Hmm something big gonna happen now.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Omg Arnav n flying kiss... Wow he is starting to fall for khushi ... Love it

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

adorable khushi and her innocence at the same time it is so painful that she is going through so much at the same time not aware of the reality around her, sometimes ignorance is the bliss that is the case of khushi, she is happy because she doesnt know the reality.

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

OMG, you've updated! Thank you so much, Appy! 🤗 Fabulous chapter! Arnav is so protective and possessive! Awww, loved the flying kiss part! Never thought Arnav would show this soft side! My heart went dhak, dhak, dhak!! So now Khushi is getting really curious as to why the ladies in RM are treating her so poorly. You are doing an amazing job with this FF! Keep up the great work, Appy! 👏