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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
u knw Anky...all d time i felt like as if m reading a fanfic novel...i mean really... Dt ws a compliment by d way... 😆 ... Nywaz...so its just a genric stry haan...cool...i liked d concept...got confused at some parts too...hehe... Wil b wating for further chapters...

Aisa?? sacchi FF novel hi lagi.. :P hadd hai!

DO tell me which parts were confusing, ok? And I'll try to explain them better next time.

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sana11
this sounds really interesting😃 update the next and do pm me dear😃

I am so happy that you found this worth reading! Thank you!

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Okay, so another story, out of the blue moon! Nevertheless, it is really interesting and has a darker side to it. This is actually my very first time on such a concept, and I am pretty eager to read ahead. As you rightfully said, it seems a bit confusing here, but let's see how the future updates sew the story. Just one question, from where do you get such beautiful concepts? I am always awe-struck reading your works, and this time is no exception. Also, the way you express em, is flawless! Albeit, continue soon, thanks for the PM, and let em coming in! :D All the Very best for the story! :) I know you'll rock it!

Nivs!! I updated TATM btw.. Please usse check out kar lena! I'll wait for your comment.

Exactly, trust me, I wasn't planning this one at all. And now because of this, two of my works have taken backseat. But hey, I am kinda quirky when it comes to writing.

This is my first time writing such a theme, and I am terribly scared as how people will accept it. But your comment made me feel good, as you said you are eager.. that makes me eager to write!

I have a concept ka dukaan next to my building. I go there shaam ko and buy it. It's only Rs. 15 per kg and If you bargain, he'll come as down as Rs. 10 per kg.. Hehehehe!!

I am falling in love with your comments. So please keep em coming too!

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani
fabulous... interesting.. amazing... really very confuse as what word will suit for this story
very different and new concept ... i really loved it
the way you have presented it... awesome👏
feeling very connected to this story...
eagerly waiting to read it more...
update soon
thnx for pm

Haahaaahaa!! Do settle on a word soon, and tell me. After all, meko bhi toh pata chale kaisi hai story.

Am glad you are eager for this one. Thanks!

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: zona_malik
SUPRISING..

bt interesting..

update soon.

Good Surprise or Bad Surprise?

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: asmaju
Brillaiant concept Anki di..
This was fabulous..
We all loved it very much..
This was so much of fun reading it around..
Di yea claer kar dsho nah.. Will the whole story be from the girlvs POV ki woh bhi random hi hoga...
And the way the chlidren love their mother seems so sweet..
Thanks for the pm..

Do continue

Thanks Asma! Who "we all" loved it very much?? Accha I haven't decided on that. But most probably it's gonna be on Samara's POV only...

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: yogini64
excellent...😊
ur works are always unique...& ur writing is unexpectdly amazing...👏
a dark theme...😳
pain is clearly visible in their laughter even...
their life is full of grief... that they try n find jokes n happiness in their actual living time of a day... when they are able to breathe...😭
the rising torture of everyday made her mom to request--- to write a novel... maybe to take out frustration in first place...😵