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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

fabulous... interesting.. amazing... really very confuse as what word will suit for this story

very different and new concept ... i really loved it

the way you have presented it... awesome👏

feeling very connected to this story...

eagerly waiting to read it more...

update soon

thnx for pm

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Okay, so another story, out of the blue moon! Nevertheless, it is really interesting and has a darker side to it. This is actually my very first time on such a concept, and I am pretty eager to read ahead. As you rightfully said, it seems a bit confusing here, but let's see how the future updates sew the story. Just one question, from where do you get such beautiful concepts? I am always awe-struck reading your works, and this time is no exception. Also, the way you express em, is flawless! Albeit, continue soon, thanks for the PM, and let em coming in! :D All the Very best for the story! :) I know you'll rock it!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Brillaiant concept Anki di..
This was fabulous..
We all loved it very much..
This was so much of fun reading it around..
Di yea claer kar dsho nah.. Will the whole story be from the girlvs POV ki woh bhi random hi hoga...
And the way the chlidren love their mother seems so sweet..
Thanks for the pm..

Do continue

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice!!!
Update soon!!!
Thanks for pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nice start dii👏

loved ittt😃

continue soon😳

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome story...thnx for d PM

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

excellent...😊

ur works are always unique...& ur writing is unexpectdly amazing...👏

a dark theme...😳

pain is clearly visible in their laughter even...

their life is full of grief... that they try n find jokes n happiness in their actual living time of a day... when they are able to breathe...😭

the rising torture of everyday made her mom to request--- to write a novel... maybe to take out frustration in first place...😵

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
thats a total surprise😲

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it looks interesting...

as in its a genre i don't like lekin the theme looks so convincing...

the better way... that it concerns... the topics i like...

its a common theme,,,,,,,,,, u know how everything affects a person...

i read an english chapter jismein women had written their stries...

am not able to say it... main baad mein aapko ache se bataunga..

Don't you love my surprises? I still haven't gotten a proper reaction out of you for this one. And I am gonna hold you to it.

Common? Seriously?

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti
:O :O :O

The story !!... I just can't wait to read more !!..
Shit u have written it so well ...
I am feeling short of words actually ...
ek hota hai na ? Bilkul apne waali feeling aati hai!! ...bilkul vesa !!

Samara "SINGH" !! 3:) here .. Well ahem ahem ek aur singh is king hoing yahan hehe

But still i can assure you !!.. it is one of my fav story lines .. scholarly typs .. I have been reading many of them!!..
And i'm so looking forward for it !!

Do update soon !!..

Love You
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