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Posted: 20 years ago
#91

guli44 you are doing a fantastic job...👏 👏 👏

Me thinks that you should take over the reigns of TD... 👏

Or better still - start another serial under the name of "Meri Manzil Meri Disha" and hire Ashish and Chhavi to play the lead roles 😆😆😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i totally agree with rm_apple 😆 😆 😆

keep up te good work and write the next part soonnnnnn 👏
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u ARE GOING A GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP

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Part 24

Everyone is shocked to listen to this!

Disha: No you are mistaken it probably looked like him! Everyone just goes back and keeps talking. Everyone goes to sleep and Sia is still not convinced she keeps seeing flashes of the picture and Vijendra in jail.. Now she is determined to find out the truth so the next day she goes to jail

Gargi: Hello Sia.. what's wrong you seemed tense?

Sia: I am trying to find out if that man over there is Disha's father!!!

Gargi: Why?

Sia: becuase everyone kept on telling me that he was dead

Gargi: Maybe he is

Sia: No i am not willing to except this...

Gargi: Then why dont you find out!

There is a officer coming...

Sia: Excuse me

Officer: Yes..

Sia: Can you please tell me who this man is?

Officer: Yes, his name is Vijendra (Sia is shocked and officer tells the story) This man came to us one day and begged that to put him in jail.. he has done nothing wrong so we had no choice but to do it!!

Sia: Can i take him home with me?

Officer: Sure i dont have a problem.. he hasnt done anything!

Sia goes by him....

Sia: Excuse me....

V looks up...

Sia: Can i take you home with me?

He's all surprised!!

V: No i am fine where i am!!

Sia: please!!! i beg you.. (She starts pleading and begging and after a couple of mins.. he agrees)

The officer opens the door and Sia takes him home They both go and Vihendra sees Saigal house and has flash backs about Dk!!

V: Are you the bahu of this house??

Sia: Yes i am!!

So he thinks that she must be Sia's wife!!

Sia comes in the house crying (Dk, Ved, and G are not there they have gone to the office)

Sum: SIa, what happened? why are you crying?

Disha: Sia what happened?

Suhas: Please dont cry tell us what happened to you??

Sia moves aside and everyone sees V and like Suhas and DIsha are having a heart attack!!!

Disha: Dad!!!!!!!!!!😭

Suhas is like i am dreaming or something!!

V is wondering why are they here!!!

Suhas goes and touches him and is like crying like crazy! They both hug!! Disha goes up to him and hugs him too!!

V: What are you guys doing @ D.K. Saigal's house?????

Everyone is shocked.... Sum and Dhruv are like what's he talking about!

Dhruv: I am his father!!!!

V is like all confused and doesnt know what to say or do!

Disha: I am married to him!

V: (is shocked) WHat?????????

Suhas: yes, they both got married..

He is like so mad and furious...

Suhas: How are you here......

V: i was coming out of Dk's office i was really mad him and then i was coming home the driver lost control of the car and i flew out and rolled out of the car and when i got to see it was Sukanya to planned all of this....

Everyone is shocked

Suhas: WHat?????????????????????😡

V: yes and it was all her planned to have me killed

Disha: But... where were you???

Sia: I will tell you that, (She tells them and they are all crying)

Dhruv: But what about Sunny?

V: I dont know! (he doesnt know whether he is still mad @ him) but why are you guys here??

Suhas tells him the story and everything!

SUhas: I am not going to spare her!!!!😡

V: I am not either!!!!

Disha: (Looks at Sia) Thank you so much!! i am so sorry that i doubted you!!!!

V: But if you are not Dk's wife then who's wife are you?

Disha: SHe is Ved's wife... Dk's brother!

V: How did you know who i was?

Sia: I saw a photo in Bhabhi's purse and i told them yesterday that i saw you!

V: he sits and like Dk is going through his head and Disha brings out Khushi and Dhruv (junior) and V is happy but like is still confused can Dk change you know...?)

G and Ved come in and G sees V and is shocked and cries and hugs him!!!!

Sia: (tells Ved): HE's the one i was talking about yesterday he is Disha's father!

Ved: Namaste Uncle!!

V is like everyone is here but where is Dk!!

Disha: Dad why dont you take rest?

Sum: Yes,,,, why dont you take rest?

V goes inside Suhas's room and Suhas follows him

V: I hated Dk so much... and now he's my Son-in-law????? how can that be?

Suhas explains every single thing to him from the marriage, to the running away, about his parents and V is almost convinced but is still heh!

V: Can a person change so much??

Suhas: I have seen it for myself... He is a good person!!!

Disha is in her room and is crying when Dk comes in.......

DK: DIsha??? what happened? why are you crying?😕😳

Disha: My My (stuttering) My ...

Dk: My what??

Disha: Dad...........

DK is shocked...

Dk: Dad?? what happened to dad?

Disha: Not daddyji

Dk: Disha i dont understand what you are saying??

Disha is trying to tell him and V comes in

V: Mr. Dk Saigal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😕

Dk gets up and is shocked to see him and is all confused!!

Disha: (crying) Dk... my dad is......... alive! 😭

Dk cant believe his eyes!

V: Disha, can you please step out for a little while please???

Disha is confused and leaves!

V: So.. you have married my daughter??

Dk: I cant believe you standing in front of me today!!

V: I know that you got blamed for my murder?

Dk: Yes... but you know that i didnt do anything!!

V: I know i have told everyone the truth is was Sukanya

Dk is shocked

V: Look Suhas has told me everything about you... Now the question is Will I except you as my Son-in-law or not?

Dk: Well...

V: (Raises his hand) Well... i dont know! i am a little confused! Everyone hear loves you! You taken care of my family very well..

Dk: It was my duty and i love Disha very much!!!

V: Well you are going to have to give me time... Whether i want to or not I am going to have to stay here!

Dk: Well i wouldnt want you to go anywhere else! And by the way i would like to Apologize on what happened that day!!!!!!! If you can find it in your heart to forgive that would be great if not i can understand!

V: (smiles and leaves)

Dk sits on his bed and feels like he has seen a ghost and thinks about how was blamed for V's death, etc....

DIsha comes back in and sits next to Dk.......

Disha: What did daddy say?

Dk: Nothing!

(V is coming back and is listening to their convo)

Dk: You must be really happy now... Now we have one more family member!!

Disha: (Smiles) Yes.... i am very happy!! We have something in common our dad's our back with us!!

Dk smiles and puts his arms around her!!

Dk: You know i am very happy your dad is back!!

Disha: me too!!

He kisses her and V looks at them and is smiling! and goes back!

Suhas: What happened?

V: Can a person change so much like DK?

SUhas: i saw it with my own eyes and you will have to believe it to! I mean he's taking such good care of us!

V: Yes i know!

Suhas: I am the most happiest person today!!!

They both hug, V looks for something and Suhas is wondering what's he looking for? He looks and Looks goes out and comes back. and fills her Mang w/ Sindoor and shes like crying and happy and they both hug!!

Priya comes in

Priya: I am sorry mom i came w/o knocking.. (she looks confused and who is this man)

Suhas: This is Vijendra, my husband! (Priya is shocked because she thought he was dead)

Priya goes and takes his blessing

Suhas: She is our daughter-in-law!! She is G's wife!

V: Oh.. G has really good taste!!!!

Priya Blushes😳

Ved and Sia's Room:

Ved: You have given here everyone happiness.. what do you want?

Sia: I have already got it!! 😳

Ved: What?

Sia: You and this family!

Ved: But i want to give you something more.....

Dk walks in!

Dk: Yes... we want to give you something!!!

Sia: I dont want anything.. it was my duty! nothing else!!! I am the daughter-in-law of this house too i have responsibilities too!!!

Disha: But i dont know how i can repay you!!!!!!!!!

Sia: Bhabhi.. dont embarrass me!!😳

All four of them talk and V was listening again!! (Spy lol) V was looking @ Dk the whole time! he walks off and sits in the living room

V: (Himself) Well Dk has won everyone's heart! I think he won mine too! WHat has he not done for Disha and Suhas and he gave G a job @ his company.... Just then he gets up from there walking towards his room and not paying attention and bumps into Dk...

Dk: I am sorry!!! i shouldve watched where i was going!

V: Its okay i got lost somewhere and wasnt paying attention!

Dk: I am sorry.. Goodnight!

V: wait.. Dk i have seen and also believe that you a very nice person....

Dk is surprised on what he is saying!

V: I want to forget everything that has happened between us and start a new relationship!

Dk: But we already are family... your my father in law (Aww😳😳😳)

V: And believe it or not you are my Son-in-law!!!

They both smile and they hug each other!!!!!!! Disha has heard and seen everything!!

Disha: Hello... I dont get any hugs!!

Dk And V: Well...

Disha is shocked

Disha: Fine i am not talking to either of you!!!!!!

Dk: Disha...

Disha: No!!! I dont want to listen!

V: But Disha.. OKay here (He hugs her and she's smiling) Happy!!!

Disha: Yes!!

V goes off

Dk: (He hugs her too from behind) I am a happy happy man today!!!

Disha: And i am happy because you are happy!!!!!

They both walk inside thier room and look outside w/ Dk's arms around Disha and are looking up at the Sky!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The End! FOr today that is!!! Night NIght.. USA my time!! and its 10:29 p.m. so i will cont tomorrow night!!! THATS WHEN I WILL UPDATE.. I UPDATE MY NIGHT TIME!!!!!

HOPE YOU ENJOY AND TO BE CONT.!!!😃




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Posted: 20 years ago
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very very good . waiting for the next part eagerly
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Part 25

V is up and thinking about a way to punish Sukanya and Suhas sees this

Suhas: What happened?

V: Nothing i cant sleep i am thinking how to punish Sukanya for what she did!

Suhas: Yes she will surely get punished for what she did!!

V: But there's only one way i can think of and this is to take her to court!

Suhas: Court??

V: Yes.. but you will sue her not me! If you go and do all of this she will have confidence that you are crazy and she will surely win because i am already dead

Suhas: But will it work?

V: Yes i am sure!!!!

Suhas comes to Bhonsale House

SUkanya: WHy have you come back here??

Suhas: Dont worry i am not here to come back i just wanted to give you something!

She hands her the court papers

Sukanya: What is this?

Suhas: I am suing you for the murder of my husband!!

Sukanya is shocked and tells her she is crazy and they have a long fight and she leaves!!!

After she leaves Anil comes and asks her what happened and she tells them that Suhas is suing them for killing Vijendra and he tells her that there's no way we can get caught because this happened 3 years ago and they have no proof!!

Suhas was listening to this the whole time outside and she taped it!!

Suhas comes backs

V: what happened?

Suhas: Nothing, i put everything on tape!

Disha: Where did you go Aai?

Suhas: I found out from Sukanya that she really did do it!!

Dk: Dont worry i will get you the best lawyer there is!!!!!

V: It's okay i will find one!!

Dk: No trust me on this i know some very good lawyers!!!!

Disha goes check on the kids and Suhas goes with her

V: Look if you get a good lawyer i will pay you back

Dk: Why are you embarrasing me by saying this?? Dont worry about the fees!!! I will take care of everything!!!! You excepted me as your son-in-law now just leave it up to me!!!

He leaves and V is happy that he has a good son-in-law!

Next day, Sukanya and Anil has gotten a good lawyer but Dk has gotten the best one there is!!!!!

Now the court case will start in 2 weeks!!

V: I dont know how to thank you Dk!

Dk: Its ok you dont have to thank me whats so ever!

Everyone is just there and is talking Khushi is watching Dk and sees that he's laughing and not looking at her... (She's 1 1/2 she can walk and all she wants is Dk😳) Khushi tries to get Dk's attention but he's not looking!

Ved: Hey brother.... Look at this....

There is a article about the court case and Anil and Sukanya think they are confident that they will win!!

Dk: Dont pay attention to this... There is no way they are going to win!!

Disha: Yes.. Dont pay attention to this non sense

Khushi keeps looking at Dk and is getting annoyed and busts out crying everyone is like whats the matter with her... People try asking her to come by them but she says no So Dk comes over and right away she goes by him...

Dk: I will go take a walk with her!! you guys stay here

Dk picks her up and they go for a little walk! Khushi goes to sleep on Dk's shoulder and he comes back in the house... Dk goes to put her to sleep but Khushi is holding on to his shirt really tight! He finally makes her let go and she starts crying and Dk has no other option but to take her with him and she goes to sleep next to him! 😛

2 weeks later:

The court date arrives and everyone is there in court except for V becuase he will pop up later on!

The defense starts their case 1st...

He tells everyone how this is all stupid and bogus and theres no point coming here because there is no proof that my clients committed murder etc....

Sukanya's lawyers brings all these witnesses and like they think that everything is going there way!! DIsha, Suhas, etc... are all sitting there and has no reaction because they know that everything's going to be in their favor

It is now the Prosicution's turn! Their lawyer starts saying these people tried to killed Vijendra so He brings up his 1st person Sukanya

Lawyer: Now Sukanya, you say that you didnt kill or try to kill Vijendra?

Sukanya: Of course not he was my husband's brother

Lawyer: Then on the day he got killed it was your car that hit him

Sukanya: How could it be? I dont even know how to drive and plus i was gone somewhere else!

Lawyer: Did you have any fights with him?

Sukanya: No we were all happy living together!

He justs keeps asking her questions and then he plays the tape and everyone listens to it Sukanya says that isnt me and shes just arguing

Lawyer: What if i told you that V was alive today and he explained what really happened that day?

Sukanya: Well he isnt is he?

Lawyer: Well suppose he was, would the things you said match with his!

Sukanya: (nervous😕) why yes! But he died so he cant

Lawyer: Okay you say since he's dead he cant, well i have one witness that testifies that you really did plan all of this!

Sukanya thinks this is Suhas but she's telling herself she wont be able to do anything!

Lawyer: My lord, i want Sukanya to stay up here and i want permission to bring my lasy and final witness and maybe all of this will end!!!!

Judge: You have my permission😉😊

Lawyer: Thank you! I want to bring in my last and final witness and that person is none other than Vijendra himself...

Sukanya and Anil's face are turn all different colors and they are like what the hell i thought we killed him, etc...

Lawyer: My lord, (he tells everything about V and what happened to him on that day and how he was in jail etc.. and Then V tells them the whole story)

After 1 hour break.. the Judge comes to a conclusion:

Judge: After listening to everything i hearby giving Sukanya and Anil Bhonsale Life in prison for attempted murder for Vijendra Bhonsale.)

Everyone is happy and crying @ the same time!!!!!!!! Dk, Disha, Suhas and V are all relieved!!!!!!!

Sukanya: YOu will pay for this!!!!! (She tells everybody(

Dk: You wont be able to do anything.. you will finally be in the place where you belong!!!!!!

The cops take them both away (anil and SUkanya) they are in different cells and Gargi sees them and is laughing @ Sukanya!!


Everyone goes home to Saigal house...

V: thank you very much Dk for everything!!!!!!!!

Disha: Dad are you going somewhere?

V: well now since they are both in jail.. the house is mine and i think we should go back!

Disha is sad but realizes what he said is true!!!! They pack up their stuff (V, suhas, g, and priya) and they head back to their home where they finally belong!! Disha and Dk help them and take them home.....

Afterwards Dk and Disha are going back home.. and Disha is crying in the car

Dk: DIsha i know you are upset but you know what dad said was right

Disha: Yes i know but everyone was under one roof!

Dk: Look we will go visit them everyday dont you worry!!

Disha: Yeah but it wont be the same.. these past couple of weeks i enjoyed so much because everyone was there! Now it will incomplete!!!!!

Dk: Incomplete? You have me, mom dad ved, sia, and the kids how many more people do you want?

Disha: Yes i know but i will miss them not staying with us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Dont worry they will be happy!!!!

Disha (lies on his shoulder's in the car and they get home)

Sum: Is everything okay?

Dk: Yes ma.. they unpacked and everything is now okay!!

Sum: how about you Disha, are you okay?

Disha: Yes i am okay!!😃

Khushi comes behind dk and hugs him and she wants him to pick her up and Dhruv (Junior) comes and Disha picks him up! Dk sits on the couch with Khushi and she falls asleep again on Dk

Sum: You know Khushi is very attached to you!

Disha: yes she is daddy's little girl!!

Dk: And your point.... 😉

Disha: nothing

Dk: well look at Dhruv he's momma's boy!!

They just laugh

Ved and Sia' room

Sia: what do you want a boy or a girl?

Ved: I dont care.. what ever it maybe as long as it is healthy i dont care!

Sia: Me either! i want a healthy child too!

Ved: We are going to be parents before we know it!!!

Sia: Yes!

Next day Sia goes for a little shopping and she notices that she is being followed by these guys she walks faster and faster and she's about to run but she bumps into someone really hard and its Ved

Ved: Sia what happened?

Sia: SOme guys are following me!

Ved: Who?

They guys just turn back the other way and Ved follows them he listens to their convo cuz they are on the phone

Person #1: Sorry maam your work couldnt be done.. Her husband came along...

Ved is like who's he talking to

#1: DOnt worry Porineeta Madam. you work will be done we will kill her!!!

Ved is hell of Shocked and tells Sia to go home and not coming out of the house and tells her that Pori is behind all of this..... He wants to her pay for deeds and gets an idea

Ved: (calls up Pori) Hello Pori!

Pori: Ved?? i cant believe it's you!!!!!!

Ved: I wanted to see you tonight!!!! will you join me?

Pori: really?? of course i will!!! What about SIa?

Ved: Dont worry about her!! she wont know anything!!!!

Pori is all happy!!!!! And thinking he's finally mine!!

Ved; My work here is done.. (talking to Sia)

Ved: Now wait and watch i am going to make her dance to my tunes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved has an evil smile and Sia smiles too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

The end!!!!!!!!!!!!! Night Night... will write tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Please Post comments and tell me what you guys think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#97
Very good gulli44... pls continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks for another great episode
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey noice stury👏

will definitely wait for the next part😳

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
very nice story

keep it upp, and write the next part soooooooooooooon

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏

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