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Posted: 20 years ago
i have just finished reading ur story! u r the most creative person i have heard about!!!! plz continue...i am realli looking forward to this 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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loved every single chp. 👏 👏
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Part 101

Dhruv (junior) and Khushi.. see these really cool bicycles..

They really want them

They ask Disha for them but she says no!!

They both are sad!!!

Then they ask Dk for it.. But Disha gives him that you better say no look and he also says no

They beg and bed

K: Why?? Please??? They are really cool!!

Disha: No!!

Dk is like why i am dragged into this!!!

They keep begging and Neha pops out and Dk sees her....

He's lost w/ her and then he just gives in and says yes!!!

They both hug him!!

He gets lost in the hug... and when he looks she isnt there!!

Dk is really missing her!!! But doesnt know she's there!!

Dk goes into his room

Neha comes...

Dk: I think i have really lost it...

Neha: Lost what?

Dk is amazed cuz she talks!!!

DK: Neha??

Neha nods

Neha comes closer

Neha: I am sorry daddy!! I yelled at you like that!!!! I shouldnt have!!!

Dk: You had the full right too.... i deserved it

Neha: No you didnt!!! Now promise me you will never be sad again!!!

Dk: I promise!!

Neha runs and leaves

Dk thought that was a dream

when she leaves Disha comes in

Disha: Who were you talking to???

Dk: MY angel!!

Disha: Who?

Dk: Neha!!!

Disha: WHere?

Dk tries telling her but he says forget it!!

DIsha smiles...

In the middle of the night...

Neha screams loud cuz she has a bad dream

Dk is wondering who the heck is screaming

Disha hears it as well

They both get up...

Neha is bunched up in the corner

Dk turns on the light and sees Neha

Dk: Neha??????

Dk is shocked!!!!

Neha is crying and comes and runs up to DK!!!

Dk: What are you doing here???

Neha: I live here!!!

Dk: Neha!!!??/

Disha: She is right... We were all playing a trick on you!!

She tells him everything!!!

Dk: So?? I wasnt seeing an illusion!!

Disha: No!!!

Dk: I will get you on this one Disha!!!!

Disha laughs!!!

Neha is still scared....

They turn off the lights and Neha comes in Dk and Disha's room

He puts her in the middle....

She is still shaking.... a little bit but Dk calms her down

Disha and Dk are looking at her

Dk: The kids are something arent they?

Disha: Yes they are!! For our happiness they did this!!

Dk: So in that case they do deserve the bikes!!

Disha: If you say so!!

Its late and they fall asleep!!

Neha is closer to Dk then to Disha!!



Sorry you guys i have to cut it short... my eyes arent staying open!!! I will cont 2morrow for sure!!!!!! sowwie!! 😭
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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you shld really consider becoming a writer
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Posted: 20 years ago
cont soon guli its k atleast u were able 2 write well luved as susual cont soon👏👏👏
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Wicked Stuff Guli, c0nt s00n 👏 👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
so DK finally nos!! tat was really good!! plz cont soon!
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Part 102:

It back to normal at Saigal house!!!!

Everyone is enjoying themselves smiling and having a great time!!

The want to redecorate their house and paint it again!!!

So they decide to send the kids to grandparents house!!

Sum and Dhruv (senior) dont take part cuz they are old.... so they decide to stay w/ Sia's parents!!!

Dk's kids are w/ Suhas and Vijendra

And everyone else is where they should belong!! 😕 😕

All three couples take part in this!

They want to give it a new look too!!

So they pack their things up w/ the help of their servants' help and they put everything to a storage!!

(Keep in mind that now their house is completely empty)

They dont keep cash in the house either so.... they dont have nuthing!!

They start...

They buy paint and start painting and everything is having lots of fun!!

Next door: (i have to update on them as well)

Poonam is now 5 months preg!

She is beginning to show!!

She has learned a lot from them.. and w/o their mother interferring everyone is learning something new about everybody!!

They are all closer than ever!!

Everyone loves Poonam..... and she likes them as well

Poonam tries to work but no one lets her..

She cooks still but they dont want her to they want her to relax!!

They know that she doesnt care about herself.... only for others!!

They all know how she took care of Anand.... and they are all grateful to her

@ thier home the mom is still complaining... the real true reason is no one has really talked back to her!!

But now.. since they are together if she says anything she will pay for it... they arent scared anymore!!

Mom gets lonely and decides to pay a visit

She gets there and everyone is shocked to see her

She sees how everyone was happy and what not!

Poonam comes out and see's her and she is shocked

Mom sees that she is pregnant

Mom: So this is why my family left me... becuz you are pregnant... you want people to feel sorry for you that you cant do anything on ur own so you called them here!!!

Everyone is getting irritated!!

Poonam just listens!!

Mom: I thought maybe you have changed but i guess i was wrong!

Poonam really gets furious....

Poonam: (yells) YOU KNOW WHAT I HAVE HAD IT UP TO HERE W/ YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is shocked!

Poonam: WHAT DO YOU THINK OF YOURSELF..??? I DIDNT WANT ANY HELP.. ANAND CALLED THEM THEY AGREED... I CAN TAKE CARE OF MY HOUSE, MY HUSBAND, AND MY FUTURE CHILD W/O ANYONE'S HELP!!!!!!! I WILL PROVE THAT TO YOU TO!!!!! FROM NOW ON... I WILL COOK AND CLEAN... AND NO ONE WILL HELP ME!!! UNDERSTOOD??

Anand's bhabhi: But Poonam....

Poonam: NO.. MOM IS HERE INSULTING ME.... THEN I WILL SHOW YOU WHAT I CAN DO!!!!

Anand: No.. you will not... Mom.. please leave!!

Mom: She wants to show me...

Everyone is like are you out of ur mind?

Dad: This is why... our family cant be together... because of you!!

She is shocked!!!

Dad: As ur husband i command you to leave!!!!

She is like oh no you didnt!!

Poonam: NO!!! SHE WILL STAY HERE UNTIL I DELIVER MY CHILD.... NO1 WILL HELP ME.... STARTING TOMORROW... I WILL DO EVERYTHING MYSELF!!!

She walks out.... and everyone gives Mom an evil look and they too walk out

Mom is just there!!

Saigal house:

They are still painting...

Its a big house

Everyone talks and share some good laughs!!!

They take a lunch break

The gals prepared lunch for them....

They forgot one thing.....so Disha goes into the kitchen and she gets it....

But she doesnt realize there is a towel by the gas.....

The gas is still on because they are boiling water for something.... (dont ask i dont even know my self.. just go w/ the story)

Disha just leaves the kitchen..

Everyone is eating

Then there is a big noise outside..

The gals are scared....

The guys go check it out....

There are just kids playing w/ these big popping things..

In the kitchen.. the towel moves a little and it catches on fire...

Then everything around it catches on fire

The gals go and check it out...

Disha stays and cleans up..

Slowly and Slowly the whole kitchen is on fire...

Disha smells something. burning but she thinks its from outside...

Everyone is outside the house...... not even by the gate

Then Disha turns around and sees the fire is on kitchen she screams..... so loud

But no one can hear her

Then there is something is the kitchen thats flammable and that explodes like crazy and suddenly it spreads eve more

Everyone sees smoke coming from somewhere

Dk realizes it from thier house

Disha is shouting because she cant escape

They all run and see their house is on fire

Dk tries to run but they stop him

Dk: Disha??????????????????????????????????

Disha: DK/??????????????????

Dk is trying to get inside

Disha is panicing

The firefighters get there

DIsha is screaming she cant go anywhere

Dk doesnt take any chances and he runs inside.... through the fire!!

He grabs Disha........

They decide how to escape cuz everything is coming down... slowly

Then they decide to run as fast as they can

They run out and Dk's body is on fire

He drops on the floor and rolls and the fire stops

Disha is crying and crying

Everyone is looking at thier home burning..........

Its still up but inside its a big mess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All of them are standing in a line watching

Dk has gotten burned on his back

Disha sees this and is shocked!!

The Ambulance is right there and they take care of it

Disha is crying and is yelling its all my fault.. its all my fault!!

But they think its an accident...

Disha: Its my fault!!!!

Dk: What did you do??? You didnt do anything!!

She still feels guilty...

Dk consoles her and she hugs him

Now they are thinking now what??

They have to rebuild the house....

The firefighters finally stop the fire

There is nothing left!!!!!

But there wasnt anything anyways!!!

Now they have to build another house......


OKay the end!!!!

Preview:

The builders tear down wat ever's left and they start building another home!!!

DIsha still feels guilty but no one is angry w/ her!!!!!!!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
hohohoh, it's baby boom in TD. disha madam is desparate to have baby, here poonam is expecting
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