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oh tats really very interesting.......... 😕
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awesome Guli!! plz cont soon!! kya twist hain!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
This story is excellent you should become a writer 😛 good job keep it up 😆 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
plz cont soon....i am REALLI lokking forward to ur next part!!!!! 😊
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Part 103

Disha is looking at the house and is just shocked

She cant believe it..

Everyone else cant either but no one is blaming Disha!! Because its not her fault

But she thinks it is

Disha just goes on her knees

Dk is consoling her

DK: Dont feel bad its not ur fault!!

Disha is crying

Disha: Yes it is.. look at what i did!!!

The house is a total mess

They tear it all down and there is nothing left but empty space

The guys get together and calls up people to rebuild the house but in a different way!!

They make the plans out and everything and they start the next day

Dk and Disha are staying at Bhonsale house

Sia and Ved are staying at Yash and Naina's house (her parents)

And Suraj and Preity are staying w/ her parents as well!!!!

It seems like they are all Ghar Jamai's!!

Disha is still sad and is not able to concentrate on anything

Dk tries telling her but no use!!

Disha: I have done this!!! Look....becuz of me why should every1 else suffer!!!

Dk: Who is suffering? No one is blaming you and its not ur fault!!

Disha wants to believe that but she cant

Dk: Hey we lost our home Disha... but we didnt lose anyone!!!!! As long as my whole family is there i dont even care if we live in a house or not!!!!

Disha hugs him!!

Poonam is doing all the work

Anand is getting so mad.....

Anand comes to his mom

Mom is just looking at him

A: IF anything.. and i mean anything happens to Poonam or the baby then i will never forgive you..... and i will consider you dead!!

She is shocked!!!!!

Anand just walks off!!

Poonam is cooking and doing everything

She is even washing dishes

Everyone is getting so mad and they cant see Poonam doing all of these things!! But she is handling it well!!

She has done everything

Mom is jus there

Anand just pops out

Anand: No.... i am not going to tolerate this anymore

Everyone is like what is he talking about

Anand: Everyone wants to eat right? Then you make what ever you want to eat!!

P: What are you saying?

A: Yes you will not cook for anyone What ever they want they will make themselves!!

Dad: I Like the idea!!!! I can cook!!!

Everyone else agrees

Mom isnt to happy she came here to relax!!!

A: And you all wash ur own dishes!!!

P: But what about the food...

A: We will have it today but after tomorrow.... everyone is by themselves!!

SO thats what happend

They all cook different things!!!

and they eat all at the same time

Mom is still deciding what to eat... and she's in the kitchen she hasnt done anything

Everyone is enjoying their food!!

In the meantime... they share foods w/ each other w/o mom knowing!!!

Saigal house is being rebuilted..

It is looking nice!!

Its bigger and better!!!

They have added a total of 8 rooms!!!!

Dk and Disha

Ved and Sia

Suraj and Preity

Sum and Dhruv (Senior)

Khushi, Divya and Neha

Dhruv (junior) and Rohan

And the quints!!!

And the last room is a guest room

The guys go and check on it everyday after work

Disha is still like whatever and trying to keep her mind off of it!!!

3 months later

The house is finally built.....

Every corner and inch is there!!

The guys bring thier belongings back and set it right!!!!

Some things are let go.. but the for the most part its still there!

They arrange all the pictures and their rooms the way they want it to be!! and Surprise the gals!!

They work really hard on it

Then its time to move in...

Everyone is present

Disha is nervous!!

Oh and By the way The gals are blindfolded cuz they dont know what the house looks like....

Disha is a lil excited but still iffy!!!

Then the guys take them in the house... they still havent seen it

Then at the count of three 1, 2, 3... they see and they love it!!!!!!!!!

They are speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All of them smile!!!!!

They havent seen thier bedrooms yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Okay the end!!!!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
great work gulli 👏
please update soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
great job.... 😛 thanks a lot for ur wonder ful writing........ 👏
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Part 104

(Yesterday i forgot to mention Dev..... he will share the room w/ Rohan and Dhruv (junior) i totally forgot until i remembered today!!!!

Everyone staring the house from the inside

Well the gals are

They go to thier rooms and are like amazed!!!!!!

Their rooms are bigger and better!!!!

All of the rooms have a couch and everything..... and its huge!!!

They are all the same size just different designs!!

They have their couple picture Blown up and is put above the bed!!

Their kids pictures are around the room!!

The gals just love it!!

Dk: So what do you think?

Disha is crying

Disha: I love it!!

Disha hugs Dk!!!!

Sia and Preity also like theirs as well!!

The kids come and see thier house looks different!!

Dk tells them what happened!!! And said that they have a brand new home!!

The kids go inside and are shocked!!!!!!!

They love the place

They go into their rooms and see all the toys and what not and are happy!!!!

Everyone smiles!!

Dev and Neha see how far Dk and DIsha's room is away from theres

It is a bit far!!!!!!

They both wonder whether they will be able to manage!!!! i mean the other two are there but you never know!

Sum and Dhruv love it!!

Their room is a little old fashioned.. cuz they are old!!

They made a big mandir..........

Disha is thrilled!!!

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The gals see the kitchen

Disha isnt there... she is the mandir

The kitchen is big and they put in a dishwasher and everything!

Disha sees where everyone is...

Dk: Disha.. come here and see the kitchen...

Disha is scared!!

Disha: Um... no i will look around

Disha starts walking and Dk grabs her arm

Dk: Where do you think ur going?

Disha I was just...

Dk: you were just avoiding the kitchen!!!! Come on.. let bygones be bygones!! Come on!! Nothing will happen!!

It takes a while but he finally convinces her!!!!

Disha goes in and loves the new kitchen!!!

She gets adjusted to it!!!!!!

All three look around...

Next door:

Mom is getting irritated cuz she to cook her own food!! Because of Anand's bright idea!!

Everyone is sharing their foods and are having a ball!!

Everyone gets up and mom finally eats!!

Poonam washes the dishes!!!

When Mom finishes eating....

She goes into the kitchen and sees that Poonamis washing dishes!!!

She just goes there and puts her plate.. no one says anything!!!

Poonam is like whatever!!

Mom leaves the kitchen

Poonam starts getting dizzy and faints on the floor...

Anand checks on Poonam and is shocked that she has fainted

He calls for help

Everyone helps her and lifts her up

The doc comes

The doc checks

Everyone is worried!!

Doc comes out and tells him that her BP is very high and its dangerous for her and her baby!!!!!! She has to control on her working habits and eat healthy!!!!!

He begs them and tells them to take care of her!!!

Everyone agrees!!

The doc recommends some medicine and Anand picks them up!!!!!



The End!!!
I will cont tomorrow!!!!

Preview for tomorrow:

Dhruv(junior) comes home w/ a black eye from skool............ and everyone is shocked!!!!!!!!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
thanks for the wonderful update 👏
write soon 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
thx a lot....i love ure story... 😛 ...plz continue soon.....

hmm...i wonder wt happened 2 Dhruv.... 😆

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