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Part 70

Dk and Disha are walking along the road..... Disha sees a nearby temple and they both go.....

Disha: Come on Dk...

Dk: Disha.. you are that i dont...

Disha: No.. not today!!!! Dont say that!!!

Dk: Okay.. anything for you!!!!

Disha and Dk take off their shoes and they both go inside...... Disha lowers her head and closes her eyes and is praying....

Dk: (himself.. looking at the statue) You know that i have never believed in you... yet everything that i always wanted you have given to me... i am very thankful for that!!! I just have one favor to ask.... Whatever Disha asks for.. please give it to her!!!!! If anything ever happens to me.... i want Disha to live a good and happy life!! She is very precious to me.....😳 Disha deserves the best!!!!!!!

Disha opens her eyes and looks at Dk....

Disha: What did you ask for????

Dk: That if anything happens to me..

All of a sudden she puts her hand over his mouth...

Disha: Dont you ever say that again!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: What??

Disha: Nothing will happen to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk just smiles!!!

Disha: I have full faith!!!!!

They both start leaving and Dk looks at the god again...

Dk: (Himself) You heard her.. she has full faith.. what do you say???

After a couple of seconds.... a flower falls on the floor and Dk smiles.....

Dk: Thanks!!!!!!😉

Next day:

Pori.. (yes.... i brought her back) has escaped from jail..... w/ the help from her jail mate friend!!!!!!!!

Pori is dangerous.. cuz she is carrying a gun.......... she has gone crazy i tell ya.....

Everyone is at home at the Sehgal house... and they Pori's picture comes up on the news

Dk: Hey put up the volume...

Suraj puts up the volume

News Reporter: We have just gotten word that a woman by the name of Porineeta has just escaped from jail and we need your guy's help... if you see her anywhere please contact the police right away!!!

Sia is like scared to death now!!!!!!!!

Ved: Dont worry!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Wonder where she will go!!

After a couple mins...... Everyone looks by the door and Pori is standing there w/ a gun and everyone is shocked!!!😕

They all stand!!!

Pori: Now where will you guys escape now?

Ved: Are dare you come here??

Pori: You all ruined my lives... and i now i am going to spare you!!!!!!!

Sia: (Screams so loud) PORI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pori: HEy dont yell... i know how to yell to!!!

Sia: You fight is w/ me cuz i know how you hate me so much!!!!!!!!!!

She walks Closer and closer to her

Pori: I am warning you.. you better stay back

Ved: Sia.. dont come closer!!!!

Pori: Hey shut up!!!!!!!!!

Sia: Who the hell are you to tell him to shut up???

Pori: You better mind your langauge... i have a gun and i am not afraid to use it!!!!

Sia: Really??? If you want to shoot someone.. than shoot me!!!

Ved: No Sia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Sad)

Sia: Pori...... dont you harm anyone......... i am warning you!! If you want to shoot someone today.. then let it be me.. but you will not harm these people!!!!!!!!!

Ved: Are you crazy??

Sia walks closer and closer and Ved is saying no.. and Dk and Suraj are holding him back.. cuz Pori has a gun

Sia: What are you waiting for????

Pori: No.. this is some trick... i am not falling for anyone.....or you!!!!

Disha... has her cell phone in the back where no can see.... she is dialing the police..... police then listens and he they rush to the Sehgal house.......

The police comes and Pori shoots one police person in the arm and everyone gets scared.....

Pori: Put the gun down.......

The main guy tells all the guys to put their guns down!!!!!!!!

Pori: Now where was I?

Sia: (yells) Now stop messing around.. go ahead.. what are you waiting for?????

Ved: Sia what are you doing????

Ved is going really crazy cuz he doesnt want to lose Sia..😭

Pori: You guys have made my life a living hell...... now i am going to make your life.. the same way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pori holds up the gun to Sia's head and Everyone is scared to death and no one knows what to do..............

Sia closes her eyes......

All of a sudden..... Ved runs and is holding on to Pori's hand.. and they are fighting back and fourth... Ved is trying to grab the gun....

After a couple of mins.... there is a gun shot...... and it shoot's someone...... Pori and Ved are shocked....... and Ved takes advantage.. and grabs the gun and throws it to the police.....


The person that got shot is none other than Dk....

Disha: Dk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

He gets shot in the arm..... they are looking at him......... The police grab Pori really quick and take her to jail....

Dk however is rushed to the hospital and everyone is worried for his condition...........

The doctor comes out:

Disha: How is he????????

Doctor: There's nothing to worry about he is out of danger... but he will be wearing a cast.. he wont be able to do things on his own.. so you will have to help him..... he cant move his arm at all.... it will take about one month for it to get better!!!!

Everyone is relieved...Disha is like i dont care.. as long as he is okay.. i am willing to do anything!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone goes in to see him.. he is sleeping....

Disha is looking at him and is crying!!!!

Everyone lets him rest but Disha stays there....

Dk opens his eyes

Disha: Dk...

Dk: Hey... i am okay no need to worry... Ouch!!

Disha: Careful!!!!!

Dk: You're here.... it'll be fine!!!!

Dk is released from the hospital and is brought home.... Disha informs the kids not to come close and they all understand.......

Dk rests on his bed.. cuz he cant really move much and cant do things on his own.....

Disha takes care of him....

Disha: What do you need?

Dk: No Disha.. i dont want you to run back and fourth for me....

Disha: Dk.... i am here...... you let me know!!!

Dk: You arent my maid.. you are my wife!!!!!!!!!

Disha: As a wife.. its my duty!

Disha leaves and go and gets Dk's food..... She starts feeding him slowly by slowly... after he is done.. she goes and puts the plate back..... He grabs the water.....and is about to fall off the bed

Disha: DK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What are you doing?????????

Dk: I just wanted a glass of water

Disha is literally crying..........

Dk doesnt want to be reminded that he cant do things on his own!!!!!

Disha helps Dk drink water and she slowly lies him down on the bed!!!

Disha is just looking at him... Poor guy... cant move that much!!

Dk gets up after 1 hour.... He walks slowly and Disha is helping him...


He sits down w/ everyone and they just talk.....Sia cant look at Dk and goes into her room and starts crying... Ved sees and follows her

Ved: Hey.. dont cry!!!!!!

Sia: I cant see Dk Bhaiyya like this!!!!!!!!

Ved: Hey it wasnt done on purpose....He is okay isnt he?

Sia: I guess so!!

Ved: Do you know how scared i was for you??? What if something happened to you? i wouldve died!!!!!!!! I cant live w/o you Sia!!!!!!

Sia hugs him!! 😭

Sia: I didnt want her to hurt anyone.... so i took charge!!!!!!!

They both keep talking!!!

Its night time.. and Dk has to change....

Disha helps him change.. yet it very difficult to change his shirt.. its a normal t-shirt..... she takes it off slowly and carefully........

Dk goes to sleep and cant sleep properly he could only sleep on one side......

Disha knows that he is uncomfortable but she cant do anything about it!!!!!!!!!!

1 month later:

Dk's arm is better............ and Dk is relieved

Dk: Only i know how this past month was!!!!!!

Disha: You're all better now!!!!!!! I am so happy!!!

Dk: Thanks to you!!!!!!!

Disha: Your welcome!!!

Dk: I have wanted to something forever but i couldnt....

Disha: What??

Dk: Give you a hug!

Disha 😳😳😳

He gives her a big hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk goes back to work..... and its the same ole days again!!!!!!!



NIGHT NIGHT GUYS... I WILL CONT TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 20 years ago

Ur story was gr8 thanks and please continue soon!

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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks alot

for another great part

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
VERY VERY GOOOOOOOOD PLZ CONT SOOON👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
thnx 4 another nice story!!!!!👏 gud job adding a PORI twist!!!

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