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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 68

(HEY YOU GUYS... SO SO SORRY... I HAD AN ANNUAL SHOW TODAY CUZ I DO INDIAN CLASSICAL DANCING SO SINCE THIS MORNING.. I WAS BUSY!!!!!! BUT NO MORE)

Disha is still trying to figure out what Dk is hiding from her and it is killing her.. Disha is looking everywhere thinking that she might find it

Dk: Disha.. what are you doing?

Disha: Um.. nothing

Dk: I know what you're looking for....

Disha: No you dont!!

Dk: Disha.. the thing i am hiding from you.. you will never find!

Disha: But wat is the most important day of your life???

Dk: There are a lot but there is one that really stands out tall!!

Disha: When will i find out....

Dk: I am not going to tell you.... but please dont worry about it......

Disha: You have kept something from me!!!! Its killing me

Dk: Disha... you know me like a book... but if you dont know something ... it doesnt mean it is something bad... it could be something good!!

Disha: Okay Okay!!! I give up... but will i get it!

Dk: Not anytime soon!

Disha stops searching and she lets life go on!!!!

Couple of months later:

Preity is 4 months pregnant and Preity is huge..... at only 4 months .....and her and suraj go for a checkup to the doctor to see if everything is okay!!!!

Doc: Well this is something!!!!!!

Suraj: Is it bad?

Doc: Well you decide!

Suraj: I dont understand....

Doc shows them

Doc: Well.. you see this thats ur baby's head.... and then there are these over here

Suraj: what is that??

Doc: Well the reason why Preity is big just as 4 months is because she isnt having 1 child!

Suraj: Twins???? 😃

Doc: I'm afraid not....

Suraj: Then?

Doc: You see she is have quintuplets!!!!! (5)

Suraj and Preity are like shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Preity: What???????

Doc: Yes!!!

They are like in shock!!! but are totally excited!!!!!!!!

Doc: Now... you must take full rest now and you cant handle stress.... and you can move but not too much

They both leave and are in total shock! They come home but they dont say anything!

Sum: What happened?? How was the checkup?

Suraj: Badi mom... it was surprising and shocking

Dhruv: What happened?

Suraj: Um.. how do i put this? Preity and I arent have 1 child!

Disha: Twins????

They nod their heads no

Dk: Congratulations.. Triplets!!!

Suraj: Nope!!!

Sum: Then????

Suraj: Preity is having Quintuplets!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Whoa!!!!!!

Everyone hugs them.. and is excited....

Dk decides to build an extra room in that big house and have a nursery!!!!! and Suraj and Preity agree to it.. But Suraj thinks that they should move because as it is.. there are way to many people but Sum sweet talks so they stay!!!

3 months later:

It seems like Preity is getting bigger and bigger she just gets tired and tired.... she just sits cuz she cant walk a lot!!! i mean only 2 more months before the big d-day!!

Dk, Ved, Sia, and Disha w/ Suraj make the whole nursery.. they have 5 cribs w/ cupboards and everything!!!! The room is finally done!!!

Disha and Dk's room

Disha: So... when do i get my you know what?

Dk: Disha? If you keep bugging me.. i am not going to give it to you!!

Disha: What could it be?

Dk: Its my love okay!!!!!!

Disha: Dk....

Dk: Look i will give it to you dont worry!!!

Disha: When?

Dk: From today..... in one year and some months

Disha: 1 year????????? 😕

Dk: Well about 2...

Disha: 2?? Why so long

Dk: because!

Disha: Fine!

Dk: Disha.. i am not going to let the cat out of the bag so soon!!! I mean you can wait.. its something small anyways!!

Disha: Small or big.. it doesnt matter!

Dk: I mean when you think about its no really that important anyways!

Disha: So then why dont you want to tell me?

Dk: Because you can wait... and trust me its really something small..

Which is true.. its something small.. but to Dk i guess it means a lot cuz he loves Disha so much😉😉😉


1 month later:

The babies cant wait to come out so preity is in severe pain so she is rushed to the hospital........ she is screaming and shouting like crazy and the nurses are calming her down..

Everyone is in the hospital and is worried for her.......

Preity starts pushing and they hear Baby # 1 cry..... After 3 mins later.. there is 2nd cry........

Suraj is pacing back and fourth....... cuz he doesnt know whats going on!!

After 5 mins later Baby # 3........... The doc is like sweating over here....

Preity doesnt want to find out the gender... she wants to find out w/ Suraj.....

After a couple of mins... Baby #4........

Afterwards.. there is a complication w/ the last baby...... Doc has to be very critical...... Preity is nervous.. but Doc tells her to relax...... after 20 mins...... there is a last and final baby!!! Preity is sweating like crazy and is very tired!!!!!!!!!

Doc comes out and everyone is anxious!!

Doc: Congratulations... you are now a proud father of 5 healthy babies!!!

Suraj is thrilled and hugs everyone!!!

Doc: Preity wants to see you and she doesnt know the gender as of yet because she wanted to you be w/ her when she knew!!!

Suraj goes meets her as she is resting!!

She opens her eyes and they smile at each other.......... 5 nurses walk in and they all have a baby in their hands and both of them look and smile....

Suraj: Wait.. if you dont mind... can i have my whole family here??

They think about it and they say yes!!

Everyone is in and now..... time for the genders..... from Left to Right........and from oldest to youngest!

(Boy, Girl, Boy, Girl, Boy)

Suraj: Three boys and 2 girls!!!!!!!

Everyone is smiling and are all happy!!!!!!!

Suraj: Now what should we name them??? 😕

Oh man this is gonna be hard!!

Okay the names are:

Boy # 1: (oldest) Raj

Girl: 2nd oldest: Seema

Boy: 3rd oldest: Rahul

Girl: 4th oldest: Radha

Boy: Youngest: Akash

"That was hard😆"

So they all go home and now there are so many people in one household!!!

Disha and Sia both help her out w/ Sum.. cuz Preity cant take care of them by herself.. the guys help out as well but not as much!!!

Couple of days later:

Disha and Sia are out shopping for some things..... After sometime Disha looks up and sees this man..... and Disha is shocked... this so called man was her ex-boyfriend..... She broke up wid time because he was really mean and treated her badly.... Disha doesnt tell Sia anything but tells her to hurry up.. so they can leave.. Sia is like whats wrong with her?..... but later on they leave.....

The Guy spots her and is running after her but isnt able to catch up to Disha.... Disha is thrilled that she got away as fast as she could!

When she gets home.. she starts getting flashbacks of him and how their relationship was good but then went hay wire cuz he was so mean...... Disha just gets scared that he doesnt come near her..

This guy by the name of Ricky.... tries his way to locate Disha.... but he keeps getting no luck......Since he found her he wants her back into his life again.......

One day Ricky is just walking and Disha is walking the oppisite direction and they bump into each other and Ricky is happy but Disha is scared!!😕😕😕

Ricky: Arre Disha??

Disha: Looks down

Ricky: Wow.. you're still the same!!

Disha: What do you want??? 😡😡

Ricky: Nothing.. cant i say hi!

Disha: Look i dont have time i have to go

Disha starts walking and he pulls her arm

Disha: How dare you touch me?

Ricky: What did i do wrong?

Disha: Look.. i am a married woman... so i suggest you stay away!

Ricky: Married???😕😕😕

Disha: Yes!! Happily married!!

Disha walks off w/ a mean smile.. but Ricky doesnt care he will get her at any cost!!!!

Disha is thinking how is he here?? And now she has to stay away from him!!!

Ricky is thinking.... I want Disha back at any cost!! i dont care what i have to go through!

Ricky applies for a job where DK works and Dk seems impressed and hires him!! (he doesnt know who he is)

Ricky and Dk become friends and Ricky comes over to Dk's house for dinner!!!

Disha comes out and sees Ricky and is shocked....... and Dk introduces the both of them.. Disha feels uncomfortable and Ricky feels happy.. cuz now he knows where she lives!

W/o anyone knowing Ricky keeps staring at Disha and she doesnt like it...

Afterwards he leaves.........

Disha: You know i dont like him!!

Dk: Why?

Disha: (She doesnt want to tell him) I dont know.. it doesnt feel right!

Dk: He's a good man!! just give him a chance!

Disha is like no he's not!!!

Ricky starts coming there often..... while Dk isnt there and Disha doesnt like it at all!

1 month later:

Disha is in her room cleaning up things and Ricky comes in there when she turns around she is scared and shocked

Disha: what are you doing in here???

Ricky: I came to see you!!

Disha: Get out now!!!!!

Ricky: What how can you talk to me like that? After all... i get what ever i want!! and i can do what ever i want!

Disha: This is my house.. so i suggest you leave

Ricky: I am not going to leave!! I want you Disha.. only you!!!! I will take you somewhere far away and we will live a happy life!!

Disha gets even more scared😕😕😕

Ricky keeps coming closer to her when she keeps moving back!

Disha: Look.... i dont love you!!!!!

Ricky acts all crazy.........

Disha: Look please leave!!!!

Ricky: no i am not!!!

Just then DK comes home...he is walking towards his room and he comes closer and sees Disha but hears a man's voice he sees that it is Ricky and Dk is wondering what's he doing?

Disha: Look i am asking you for the last time.. you better get out of hear now!!

Ricky: Dont you understand i love you!!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!

Disha: It was my mistake that i ever met someone like you to begin w/!!

Then she starts talking about the past so now Dk knows that they were going out and how he treated her really bad!!

Ricky keeps walking towards her and Disha is about to have a panic attack.......

Ricky is about to touch her... when Dk arrives there and pushes him back!

Dk: How dare you come inside my room?

Disha: Dk.. he..

Dk: I heard everything!!!

Ricky: Look...

Dk: You better stay out of Disha's life! I am warning you... you hurted her once

Ricky: Disha loves me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Who are you kidding?

Ricky: Well she does!

Disha: I dont!!!

Ricky gets all mad and throws tantrums and he's about to slap Disha.... but Dk grabs his hand and punches him hard on his face😃

Dk: No one.. and i mean no one ever raises their hand on my wife...... he picks him up and freaking beats the crap out of him!!!!!!! and kicks him out!!!!!!

Disha is still like nervous.......

Dk: Why didnt you tell who he was?

Disha: I was scared that you

Dk: I trust you completly Disha!!!!!!!! You dont have to hide anything from me!!

Disha smiles a little bit and she hugs Dk!!!!!!!!!

11 months later:

The quints... turn 1 they throw a grand party for them!!!!!!! Everyone is there.. they cant believe that one year has passed.........w/ all the crying and not sleeping properly but they made it!!!

Everyone enjoys the party.....


Next day:

Disha is just cleaning her room again...... she is putting Dk's clothes away and his cleaning his things because he is so messy!!!

Disha gets frustrated and takes everything out of there (Where he puts his clothes) and starts from the beginning... when she empty's it out... there is a 2nd handle inside of it... she seems confused and turns the handle.... when she does she finds a small box... she looks at it for a while and opens it..... on top it is written " To Be Given To Disha On Our 10th Anniversery!"

Disha is thinking that maybe this is what he was hiding from me!

Disha is just looking at it.. when Dk walks in and catches her!

Dk: DIsha?????

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Okay you guys night night!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am really tired.... i will cont tomorrow!!!!!!!!!


stonex thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
thanks alot for another brilliant piece
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Posted: 20 years ago

Excellent! 😉

Wonder whats in the box 🤔

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Posted: 20 years ago

gud job on the story

can't wait 4 the suprise!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
relly very gooooooooooooooood, keep it up
👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write the next pargt soooooooooooooon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago

you are gr8...plz continue soon!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
oh wow keep goin i really wanna noe wat happenz next!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 69

Disha is shocked and she is looking at Dk... she hasnt opened it yet

Dk: What are you doing?

Disha: I was...

Dk: You were what???

Disha: I was cleaning this out...

Dk: Cant you wait. i told you that you will find out..

Disha: I wasnt thinking about that.. i saw that everything was all over the place do i decided to clean this

Dk takes the box and snatches it...

He walks out and DIsha is really sad.....

Dk isnt mad cuz there was nothing in that box anyways....

Everyone is eating and Disha is just sad.. she doesnt even look at Dk.. Although Dk keeps staring at her but she doesnt look..

He's sad too.. 😭😭...... Disha gets a little teary and she goes inside the kitchen............

Preity is feeding her little dumplings...... they are really good kids.. and are well behaved!! (Thank God)

Its that time again.. The rain.. w/ the thunder and lightening.......


Disha and Dk are sleeping but they arent facing each other.... Disha is getting really scared and she is also crying...... she is holding on to her blanket cuz she cant stand the noise.. she keeps getting nightmares.. she wants to hug Dk cuz she feels safe..... but she wont... cuz she thinks he's still mad

Dk has his eyes closed but he's not sleeping....

Couple of mins later Dk hears a little sniff and he sits up to look at Disha.. but she quickly closes her eyes.. .when he looks he cant tell she was crying...... He goes back to sleep....


The windows are open and they are opening and closing and Disha doesnt have the guts to wake up... Dk wakes up and he closes them!!!

When he goes back he sees Disha shaking like crazy... he comes closer and he puts his hand on her arm..

W/in 1 sec she quickly turns around and hugs him........... and crying even more

Dk: Hey...... dont cry!!!!!!

Disha: (Still crying)

Dk: I was never mad at you!!! There was nothing inside the box...... You know i cant get mad at you!!!!!!

Disha is just listening!!!

Dk: I am sorry!!.... you know i cant keep anything here cuz you will find it!!!

Disha gets a little happy and is still holding on to him...... after a while she goes to sleep peacefully!!!!! while still holding on to him!!!

Next Day:

Preity, Sia, and Disha.. are playing w/ the quints.... Dev is just running around playing by himself.... Neha is in a cradle while Disha is watching her as well

Divya, Khushi, and Dhruv (Junior) come home from skool

Disha checks everything like she always does and she finds a note... in Khushi's backpack from her teacher....

It says that Khushi got into trouble for pushing another kid in anger...... so she got into trouble!!!

Disha: Khushi.. is this true?

Khushi: Mommy.. it wasnt my fault!!!

Disha: I dont care whose fault it is .. you dont push anyone like that!!!!

Khushi: He was making fun of me....

Disha: SO.. what gave you that right to push him!!!

Khushi: Please dont tell daddy!!

Disha: I am.. i dont keep anything away from him!!!

Khushi: But..

Disha: No buts... now go into your room

She walks off and stomps her feet going into her room

Disha: Khushi😡😡!!! Dont give me an attitude...... you understand...

Khushi looks her and walks off!!!!

Dk comes home

Dk: Disha.. why are you yelling?

Disha: Because your daughter pushed a boy today and got into trouble by the teacher!!!

Dk: What????

Disha: Yeah... and she told me not to tell you!!!!

Dk goes and sees her

Dk: Khushi...

Khushi looks at him stands still and is really nervous!!

Dk: What happened at skool today?? You got a note from the teacher..

Khushi: He made me so mad!!

Dk: Yeah.. but that doesnt give you the right to push him....

Khushi: Yea daddy.. but

Dk: Your mommy and i have taught you better!!!! Now i dont want anymore notes from your teacher you understand!!!

She nods her head!!!

Dk: Now thats my girl!!!!! And why did you give mommy an attitude.. cuz you didnt want me to know? Why??

Khushi: CUz i was afraid that you might yell at me!!

Dk: You know i would never yell at you! but keep in mind.. what ever we say to you. its for the better.. you got that!!

K: Yes!!!!

K gives DK a hug!!😳😳😳

Dk goes and sits on the bed..cuz he's had a hard day at work.... Disha comes over and sits next to him

Dk: I talked to her everything's fine!!!

Disha: Yes.. but i didnt like her attitude

Dk: She's a kid!!!

Disha: So.. i know i didnt teach her

Dk: Oh you think i did😕

Disha: I didnt say that!!!

Dk: But thats what you meant??

Disha: Dk....

Dk: Disha.....

They both laugh!!!

Dk: Oh dont worry about it!!



Disha starts to think about that gift again.... She already has a clue.... that his most important day was when they got married...... and it will 10 years.. in about a 1 year now!!!..........

But the question is.. what's in that box??

Disha: It could be anything... car keys maybe?? Keys to something important..

She just keeps talking to herself.. and DK listens

Dk: Disha.. i am not buying you a car!! and there are no keys!!!

Disha: (surprised) I was just...

Dk: thinking about what i have keeping from you!!!!

Disha; Yes!!

Dk: This thing.. i will give you a clue..... its something about you... yet.. the gift is for me!!

Disha: I Dont understand...

Dk: This thing... i have kept for 9 years now... and i was planning to show.. what i have been doing on our 10th anniversery...

Well cuz now she knows that she was gonna see at the big 10

Dk: Now.. you have 1 more year to go.. i think you can wait!!!!!!!

Disha: No i want it now!!!

Dk: But you wont get it!!!!!

Disha: Fine i will wait!!!!!😕


Suraj is playin w/ his kids.. and Preity is just really exhausted and she is resting.. taking care of 5 kids is not easy!!!

Rahul beginds to cry... and Preity wakes up

Suraj: I have got this. you take ur rest.. look at you.. you seem like you havent slept for ages...

He takes him out and calms him down....

Preity literally falls asleep and she doesnt wake up.... Suraj tries waking her up but she is knocked out.....

Suraj takes care of everything in the middle of the night because Preity does need a break!.......


Mr. Dev sees a shadow in his room... its a tree but he thinks its some monster and he gets scared and runs out like crazy and he jumps between Dk and Disha.....

Dk feels it and wakes up all of a sudden

Dk: What happened??

Dev: There's a monster..... in the room... (He's three now..... so he cant talk but not as well)

Dk takes Dev and he's standing behind Dk and peaks out and Dk explains that its the tree so he puts him back to sleep...

Dev doesnt let go of Dk's hand...then he falls asleep so he gradually walks out....

Dk goes back and Neha starts crying so she picks her up.. he quiets her down after a couple of mins....... And he puts her down...

Suraj is taking care of his kids as well.... The men in that house are on double duty!!!


10 months later:

It is finally Dk and Disha's 10th anniversery..... they have been married for 10 years.. yet they still look young!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: happy anniversery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Happy Anniversery!!

Dk: These past 10 years have the best!!!!!! and theres more to come!!!!!

Disha: I Have been waiting for this day to come forever!!

Dk: Well just wait... today you and me are going out for a nice romantic dinner.... just you and me!!!!!!!!

Disha: And.....

Dk: You will see it tonight!!!!!!!!

Everyone greets them and everyone hugs them!!

Dk and Disha are having a nice little quiet dinner..........


Afterwards... they are sitting there just talking...... Dk takes out the same box.. which Disha found and he puts it on the table...........

Disha looks at it.....

Disha: So what's in it???

Dk: Open it and see....

Disha opens it really really slowly!

She sees that there is a gold bracelet inside...... w/ 10 charms...

Disha: This....

Dk: This is what i have kept from you for 10 years......

Disha: Why so long??

Dk: You see.... every year on our anniversery... i have added a charm to that and i want to keep adding more to it!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!

Dk: I have kept this inside the house....... but the reason why you didnt find it.. was because i put it where you would never think of....

Disha: Where??

Dk: Dad's room!!!!!!!!! I never told them about it... i just had it there!!!

Disha: You have done this every year????

Dk: Yes.. each charm represents something...... in the past 10 years that we have been married... they are different.. one's a heart... cuz i love you so much... next.. its a baby.... cuz of our kids... and so on........

Disha wants to put it on.. but its too nice to wear...................

Dk: Now i will keep adding i dont care if it wont fit...but i will keep adding!!!!!!!! Because i love you Disha... you cant even imagine what my life is like if you werent in it!!!!

Disha gets all emotional!


SHe keeps staring at each charm.. cuz it was representing that one year and what had happened!!!!!!!!!!its a symbol....

Dk: What you think?

Disha: I would never imagine something like this!!!!!

Dk: The happiest day of my life was when i married you!!! and i will never forget that day!!!

Disha: Mine too!!!!!!!

Dk: Forget about my birthday.. or anything else..... My anniversery means the most to me!!!!!!!!!

Disha starts crying!

Disha: You love me that much??

Dk: Even more!!!!!

He justs keeps staring at her...... and she looks up.. and they just look into each others eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They start walking along the road and just go down memory lane!...

They are remembering the good and bad times!!!!!!!!!


Okay you guys.... i have to go to sleep.. i have to wake up early!!! So i will cont tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bye!!! keep those comments coming!!!!


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Great story plz continue soon!
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thanks alot

it was another awesome piece

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