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Posted: 20 years ago

😃hey guli

😊this story is actually moving foreward unlike the real serial👏

😃like the way its written😉

love KP😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
nice job!! keep on going!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
Great story plz cont soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Aww another sister 😛

Family iz getting huger and huger

Soon DK and Dish will be naani /naana and daadi / daada 😉

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Posted: 20 years ago

AWSOme work!!!!!!!!!!!!

please continue soon!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
u have a great story going
please continue!!!👏
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👏👏

like the allergic part, 😆

wayse, i'm also allergic to but not dogs, any animal fur makes me sick but no rashes hehe😆

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Part 72

Next Day....

Nisha is making a triple layer chocolate cake.... mmmmm😃

Dk, Ved, and Suraj.... walk in

Dk: Hey you guys cake....

They are about to touch it..

Nisha: No....Dont touch!!!

Dk: Why??

Nisha: Its not for you!!!!!

Ved: Then who's it for?

Nisha: You really want to know?

Suraj: Yes!!!

Nisha: For my sweetest, dearest, and kindness bhabhi's in the whole world!!!!

Dk: Why??? What about us? Are we that too?

Nisha: Well...

Just then the three gals walk in

Preity: Whats going on?

Disha: Cake!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Hey no cake for you!!!

Disha: Why? 😡

Nisha: Bhabhi's i made this cake for the three of you!!!!!

Sia: Really??

Nisha: Yes

Dk: But we want some to!!

Nisha: Well let them decide...

DIsha, Sia, and Preity are standing and Dk Ved and Suraj stand behind them!!!!

Sia: What's the occasion??

Nisha: Just felt like it!!

Ved: Hey.... dont we mean anything??

Nisha: You do.. but my bhabhi's are special!!!

Dk: And we are not?

Nisha: I just feel sorry for them!!!

The gals laugh!!!

Dk: WHy???

Nisha: Cuz they married you!!!!

DK: Hey.. disha made the right choice in marrying me!!! Right?

He puts his arms around her......

Disha: Well....

Dk: Well what??

Nisha: Bhaiyya.. stop forcing her!!!

Dk: What am i doing?

Ved: Hey.. we love our wives very much!!!!

Suraj: Yeah.... so now can we get some cake??

Nisha: ask them!!!

Suraj: Please??? (to preity)

Preity: Well i dont know!!!

They have laughs!!!

They sit on the table and eat cake... Dk and Disha are sharing!!!!! 😳😳😳

Nisha: Disha.... what made you marry bhaiyya? I mean look at him!!!

Disha: (laughs)

SO does everyone else!!

Nisha: You both also.... (sia and preity)

Disha: I had no choice.....i didnt want to!!

Dk: What what what???😕

Disha: Oh stop it!!! I made the right decision in choosing my life partner!!!

Sia: Yes.. we all did!!!

Dk: I love Disha very much!

Disha blushes!!!!

Dk: Okay.. now no more cake for you!!!

Disha: Dk!

They enjoy themselves and have their laughs

Nisha is just looking at them and seeing how much love they all have for each other!!!!

Dk and Disha decide to take a little walk...

Dk: Disha.. can i ask you something??

Disha: Anything!

Dk: How much do you love me?

Disha is stunned.... shes confused

Disha: i love you more than anyone else.....you mean everything to me! Why??

Dk: Sometimes i feel like ur too good to have a person like me!!

Disha: Hey dont ever say that!!!!! I made a good decision!!!!!!

Dk: You know i love you so much!!!! and i cant imagine if you werent with me... i wouldnt the person i am today!!!!!!

He kisses her on the forehead and she closes her eyes!!!!!

Disha: Promise me. that you will never leave me.... and always give me this love!!!!

Dk: I promise!!!!!!! there is no way i can live w/o you!! its just impossible!!

Disha hugs him and cries!!!!!

Next day:

Nisha is looking at a magazine full of cars... she is just looking and looking and finds a car that she likes a lot and puts a big circle around it.....

She tears it and looks at it

Nisha: Man i wish i had this car... but i know i am not going to get it!!

She puts a little note on it.... My future car.... i know i wont get it.. but i can dream cant I??

She leaves it on the table and walks off

Ved comes into her room just to talk... and he looks on the table and finds that page and he picks it up and shows Dk and Suraj...

They look and are sad because she didnt ask them for it!

Ved; You know she's not going to ask!!

Dk: I know thats what is making me sad!!

They just look at each other!!!!

3 days later:

It is Raksha Bandhan......... Disha goes to the Bhonsale house and ties one on Gautham....... gives her cash!!!! after a couple of hours she comes back home!!

Preity goes and she also ties it around her 2 brothers... and she gets cash!!!

Its not like they want anything.... they just love thier brothers

Sia doesnt have any brothers..... 😭😭😭

Anjali and Rohan come and she gives them all a hug!!! Anjali sees Nisha...

Anjali: Who are you?

Dk: Dont you recognize her?

Anjali is looking

Anjali: no..

Ved: She's our other sister!

Anjali: Other sister??

Dk: She is Nisha!!!!

Anjali: Oh My god!!!!!!!!!!!!

They both cry and they both hug!!

Anjali and Nisha tie a Rakhadi (they thing they tie)

Anjali: So where's my present?

Nisha: Yes Bhaiyya.. what do we get?

Dk: Well... nothing!!!

Both at the same time: WHat???

Ved: We thought long and hard and didnt come up w/ anything!!!

both are sad!!!

All three of them laugh!!!!!

Nisha: What's so funny?

Dk: Well we both got you the same gift.. so the other one wouldnt think that we love you more!!!

Suraj: Yes.. so both of you close your eyes

Ved: And no peaking!!!!!

Everyone doesnt know what they got them so are they are confused..

They take them outside and everyone sees and they are all shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Ok Ready on the count of three........ 1...................................

Ved: 2........................................................... .

Suraj: 3.................................................... Open ur eyes

They open their eyes and are in a complete surprise.......

Anjali: Bhaiyya.. this.........

Nisha; I Dont believe it!!!!

They both got matching cars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The one that Nisha liked!!!

Nisha: I cant take this!!

Dk: Nothing is coming out of your mouth... you will take this!!!!!!!!!!!!

They both hug all three of them............

Nisha is hugging Ved...........

Ved: Hey.. you cant hide anything from us!!!

Nisha: You saw?

Ved: Yes!!!!!!

Nisha: I love you guys so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They all go back inside and everyone insist and that Rohan and Anjali stay for dinner so they do!!

Everyone is talking and Anjali goes into the bathroom.....

The rest of the gals are preparing dinner.......

Its been 15 mins and Anjali still hasnt come back yet....

Rohan checks in the kitchen

Rohan: Where's Anjali??

Nisha: Isnt she over there?? she's not here

Rohan gets worried....

Everyone looks for her..... and cant find her...

Dk opens one of the bathroom door and finds her lying on the floor and is shocked......

Dk: Anjali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I found her.....

Everyone is tensed....... A doc comes and tells everyone to go outside of the room and she wakes up a little bit and the doc asks her questions....and stuff.... he runs a couple of things.... and tells her that she is pregnant!!!!!!!

Anjali is shocked and happy!👏

Doc comes out and tells everyone and they jump for joy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They have dinner and Anjali just sits and rest.... her and Rohan go home and tells everyone the news and are all happy!!!

Disha is lying on the bed and lost in her own world..... Dk sees her and comes on top of her and kisses her....

Disha: Dk what are you doing?

Dk: Hey got the perfect chance so i took advantage!!

Dk is just kissing her

Disha: Someone might see!!

Dk: DIsha.. everyone is gone to sleep!!!!

Disha: The kids might come in

Dk: Disha.. nothing is going to work today.. i have got you all to myself!!!!!

Dk just kisses her on the neck

Disha tries escaping..

Dk: Oh no you dont...Where are you going??

Disha doesnt answer😳

Dk: Thats what i thought!!!

Disha sits up and fixes her sari cuz she hasnt changed it.... and she tries getting up but Dk grabs her hand and pulls her down... and she looks at him and they both stare for a while........

Disha tries saying something but he puts his finger on her lips..... and he comes closer and he kisses her on her lips..... and shes frozen but later on she gets into it and they both have a passionate kiss.........


Next Morning:

Disha and Dk are sleeping and they both wake up and Disha tries getting off from Dk but her mangalsutra gets stuck in his shirt and he has this naughty look to his face...... and Disha just 😳

Disha takes it out....

Disha; Can you let go please?

Dk: No..

Disha: Please...let go!!

Dk: Give me one good reason!

Disha: Dk.....

Dk: Okay okay.. i will let you go!!!

She gets up and looks at him and they both smile at each other!

Couple of months later:

Everyone talks about how Nisha should get married....... Nisha is a little shocked but doesnt mind.....


Couple of weeks later:

There are people that are interested to see Nisha.....

The guys side are at home getting ready...

(Guy's name is: Amar)

Amar: Look for the last time.. i am not getting married to anyone!!!

A's mom: Look we have discussed this already... forget about ur past and move on.. these are nice people and we wont get this kind of purposal anywhere else!!.

Amar is sad because he's already in love w/ this girl but it turned out be that she is no more... well thats what his mom said!

Well the family comes to Sehgal house and everyone is introduced

Nisha is getting ready in her room.... and is wearing something simple.....

Sia goes and get Nisha

Amar isnt smiling at all and his parents are just yapping away like crazy!!!!

Sia brings Nisha out........ All of a sudden Amar and his parents look up and are shocked to see Nisha.. Nisha is shocked to see Amar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!


Amar's mom: YOu?????????????????

Dk: You guys know each other?

Amar's mom: She's ur sister??

Dk: Yes!!!

Nisha is just dumbfounded........and is confused at the same time........Amar stands up and looks at her and they both stare at each other's eyes!!!!! It turns out that the girl who Amar loved was none other than Nisha!!!

Nisha: Bhaiyya... i dont accept this proposal.........

Dk: But why???

Nisha: Because these people disresprcted me!!!!!! and have no manners what so ever!!!

Suraj: What?????

Nisha: Yes Bhaiyya...... they insulted me in front of the whole world.. because i was a middle class girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amar is shocked because he had no clue...... Nisha was given the impression that Amar was in love w/ someone else and he ran away and eloped!!!!!

Amar: Nisha.. what are you saying??

Nisha: I am telling you the truth!!

Amar: Ma... you told me that Nisha died in a car accident!!!!!!!!!

EVeryone is shocked.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Amar: Why did you lie to me?

Nisha: What????? She told me you were in love w/ someone else and you eloped w/ her!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Wait just a minute!!!!!!!!!!!! Nisha.... were you two in love??????????

She's quiet!!!

Ved: Nisha..... Brother has asked you something.. why arent you answering

They keep bugging her about it and she finally explodes

Nisha: YES!!!😡 We were in love!!!!!!!!!!! but she (Pointing at A's mom) broke us up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amar: Why mom???

A's mom: Because she's a middle class girl

Dk: Listen lady......... (Lady oh no he didnt 😆) dont you ever talk about her that way again!!!

Ved: Are we middle class people????

A's mom looks down.....

Dk: SHe is our sister.. and i will not tolerate anything said against her........ How dare you insult her!! I want you to get out of my house!!!!!!!!!

Suraj and Ved try calming him down!!!!!!!!!!

Amar doesnt care.... what Dk is saying....

Amar: Thank you Dk.. at least someone showed her the door.....

Dk is like.. whoa!!! what a brave man!!!

Amar: Now.. i hope you understand what she went through... he walks off 1st and his mom and dad are embarrassed!!!

Nisha is crying and she cries on Disha!!!😭

Nisha tells them the story of how they fell in love and she hasnt been able to forget him.... but she didnt want to say anything!!!! and his mom ruined them both cuz of the status!!!!!!! but deep down inside she knows that he still loves her!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nisha: I know he still loves me!!!!!!

Everyone is just speechless

Amar comes home and is fuming in anger and is letting his mom have it!!!!!

Amar's mom is like i dont wat to say!!

Amar: You ruined my life mom!! i will never forgive you!!!!!!!!!

He goes upstairs to his room and is just crying!!!

Nisha is on her bed crying as well

Both of them are having flashbacks of when they were in love and having a nice time w/ each other!!!!!

Amar calls Nisha....

Nisha: Hello??

There is silence!!!!!!

Nisha: Hello!!!

He wont say anything!!! He closes his eyes and has tears rolling down his cheeks!!!!

Nisha: Amar i know its you!!!!

Nisha starts crying😭

Amar: (stutters) Nisha.....

Nisha: Why did you call?

Amar: I want to meet you somewhere right now!!

Nisha: No...

Amar: Please???

Nisha: NO.....

Amar: I beg you!! i just want to see you once!!!!!

Nisha agrees.. she quietly sneaks out of the house and meets by a near by park....

Amar comes there 1st.. followed by Nisha...

They look at each other for a while and both of them are crying....

Amar really wants hug her.... but is scared... so is Nisha..

Finally Nisha cant control her emotions and she hugs him and after a couple of sec.. he hugs her too.....

Amar: I missed you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you Nisha..i really love you!!!

They hug and cry and tells the other one how much they missed each other.....

Dk is just having flashbacks of what Amar's mom said..

Dk is so mad😡

Disha: DK.. dont worry about it to much!!

Dk: All this happened to my sister and i couldnt do anything about it!!!

Disha: Dont stress over it!!

Dk keeps talking about and he starts crying and he cries on Disha and she consoles him!!!

Nisha comes back home quietly and so does Amar.. Amar doesnt even care.....

Nisha is thinking whether to tell Dk or not......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


OKAY YOU GUYS NIGHT NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I NEED SOME IDEAS FOR ROMANTIC SCENES FOR THE 2D'S IF YOU DONT WANT TO BE EMBARRASSED... WHICH YOU WONT BE.. JUST SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE... BUT PLEASE RUNNING OUT OF IDEAS.. I WOULD WRITE TONS OF ROMANTIC SCENES BUT I DONT HAVE ANY!😭 SO PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS A BUNCH!!!!


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Posted: 20 years ago

THAT WAS JUST TOO GOOD

THANKS

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Posted: 20 years ago
grat, cont soooooooooon 👏

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