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Posted: 20 years ago

hey

such a sweet story😉

cont. please👏

love KP😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
awww it soo swt! continue soon!
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Part 59

Suraj is sleeping close to Priety he is facing her but she has his back turned to him... The alarm clock rings all of a sudden and she gets up shuts it off and quickly turns around and wakes up Suraj by accident....

Priety is a little 😳 cuz she didnt realize she was sleeping next to him the whole time

Suraj: How are you feeling?

Preity: Better!

She gets up but Suraj grabs her hand...

Suraj: Whats the rush?

P: I have to take a shower! (All quietly)

Suraj: and if i say no!

P: Well your going to have to some time

Suraj: Yeah but not right now!

He pulls her and she falls on him and they look at each other for a while and she smiles and turns another way 😳

Disha is getting ready and her cell rings its Rano.... Disha talks to Rano but she is talking very loudly on the phone and talking a lot...... Dk wakes up and is like no!!!😆😆😆

Dk: Disha..... Go out please!!

Disha: Hold on Rano!! What did you say something?? I am talking to my sister!!! if you dont mind!

Dk puts his pillow over his ear......

Disha is talking and laughing and Dk is getting really annoyed and he quickly gets up

Dk: Okay okay you win!!!!!

Disha talks softly now.... they just have their little talks!

Dk comes out of the shower

Disha: (Comes from behind and hugs him) I am sorry!!!

Dk: (Doesnt say anything)

Disha: Oh so now your not going to talk to me?

Dk: (Still doesnt say anything)

Disha: Oh come on Dk..... you know i cant stand it when your quiet like this!! I am sorry!!!! I promise i wont do it again!!!

Dk is putting on his tie but Disha comes from behind and puts in on him...

Disha: Please say something this silence is killing me!!!!!!

Dk: (Doesnt say anything)

Disha: Fine we will play this your way.. i wont talk either!!!

Dk kisses her on the forehead b4 leaving but still doesnt say anything!!

Disha: Did he really get that mad? (thinking)

The kids come back home.. (Khushi, Dhruv, and Divya) they meet suraj and preity and like them!!

Dk and Ved come home from work and Dk is beyond tired today!! You can tell his is eyes he goes into his room and lies down..... 5 mins later he falls asleep!

The bahu's set the table and Disha goes and calls Dk.....

Disha: Dk.. get up... Dinner! Come on!!!

Disha wakes him but hes not waking up!

Disha: he's really sleeping...

She checks just in case he doesnt have a fever he doesnt! She comes back out!

Ved: Where's brother Dish?

Disha: He's sleeping!!

Ved: He had a really bad headache today!!!!

Disha is shocked!

Disha: What??

Ved: Yeah..... he took asparin but i dont know if that helped or not!

Disha seems worried!!

In the middle of the night.... Dk gets up and goes into the kitchen to get something to eat..... he makes a little noise and Disha wakes up... she sees that Dk isnt there and she comes out...

Dk got some leftover dinner and is eating

Disha: Are you still mad @ me from this morning???

Dk: (Nods his head no)

Disha: Oh please say something!!!!!

Dk: (Laughing and nods his head no)

Disha: You know i will make you talk b4 you get up

Dk: (Nods his head no) 😆

Disha: You think this is funny..... right???

Disha gets up goes into the kitchen grabs a couple of ice cubes comes behind Dk and shoves it on the back of his shirt!!!!!

Dk: DIsha what did you do?

Disha: see i made you talk!!

Dk: You know i would've done that longer if you hadnt done that!

Disha: Were you that mad?

Dk: I was never mad... i just wanted to see how long you would last b4 you did something!

Disha: Your silence kills me!!!

Dk finishes having his midnight snack and they both go to bed!!!!!

Suraj is not able to sleep because he keeps thinking about all the times he was mean to Preity and its haunting him like crazy! He turns around but she isnt there he looks everywhere..and finds her on the floor again and Suraj is looking in aww...😳 but also is sad!😭😭😭

He comes and picks her up and puts her down slowly... and he goes to sleep

Next Morning:

Three Bahus are singing Bhajan again and everyone gets up.. even Lazy Boy Dk!!! 😆😆😆 They all come there and stand.... As soon as they finish all three turn around and see everyone and Preity has that extra smile cuz Suraj is there too😃!!!!

They go back into their rooms to take showers

Disha is cleaning and throwing out some of DK's old clothes

Disha: How could he still keep this clothes??

They are ripped jeans and shirts that he hasnt wore for ages

Dk: Hey what are you doing???

Disha: I am cleaning out your closest... Why dont you throw away these clothes Dk?? They are so old!

Dk: Hey they are not old!! They are antique!! They are my comfy clothes... Me and Ved use to wear these!

Disha: Well i havent seen you wearing them so i am throwing them out!!

Disha takes the clothes and Dk is following her and they are arguing!!! Sia and Ved are coming out of their rooms and they are also arguing!

Dk: Hey whats all the fuss about?

Ved: Brother.. Sia wants to throw out my clothes

Dk: So does Disha!!

Sia; Well we are right!! These are old.. you guys dont wear them anymore!!

Dk: Yea.. but still... leave them!

He starts whining so does Ved!

Sum: Hey hey what is everyone fighting about?

Dk: Ma... can you tell Disha

Disha; One min. Dk.. Mummyji me and Sia are throwing out their clothes... their really old clothes that they keep but arent wearing them!

Sum: What?

Dk: Yes ma.. can you please tell them not to?

Sum: I have been trying to do that for ages and you guys finally did it!

Dk: What?

Ved; Oh come on please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sia: No!! 😡😡😡

Dk: Disha.... come on!

Disha: No...

Both of them are sad!! (But its funny) 😆

Disha goes back to her room

Disha: Finally its clean!

Dk is thinking

Disha: Look it was for the better!!!

Dk: Yeah i know but still

Disha: You'll thank me one day!

Dk: We'll see!!

Disha: (Gives him a big smile😃😃😃)

Dk: (laughs)

Disha: See ur smiling!!!

Dk: Yeah because i cant resist urs!!

Disha puts her head on Dk's shoulder!

Disha: I Love you!!!

Dk: (silent)

Disha; YOu dont love me?? 😭😭

Dk: I'll get back to you on that one!

Disha; What??? (Hits him on the shoulder and they both laugh)

Dk: You know i love you too!!!!

Preity is in her room reading a book as always

Suraj: (grabs the book)

P: Hey!!

S: DOnt you get bored of reading!!

P: Nope!

S: Well i do!!

P: You dont even read a book!

S: Exactly!!

P: So whats up?

S: Lets go out today somewhere!

P: Where?

S: Anywhere!!! You name it!

P: I dont know!

S: No today i am not excepting no for an answer... we are going out.. and thats final!!

P: Okay..... what ever you say!!

He puts his head on her thighs and they just talk!

They go out for dinner!!!


Gautham and Priya make a surprise visit.... (They have 1 boy and she is 7 months pregnant)

Dk: Arre G???

G: Hello Dk!!! How are you?

DK: I am fine.... what a surprise visit!

G: I thought i surprise my sister today!!

Dk: Hi priya how are you/

P: I am good thanks!

Disha comes and G hides

Disha: Bhabhi!!!!!!!!! Oh my god!! How are you?

Priya: I am good Disha...

Disha: Where's G?

G is behind her and is saying sshh

P: Well what can i tell you?

DIsha: Why????

P: He left me and went away!!!

Disha; What???? (Shocked)

P: Yes... we were having too many fights!

Disha: He left you in this condition!!

P: IT was the best for us!!

Disha: I will have a talk to him.....

Disha gets really mad.. from behind G picks her up and swings her

G: Gotcha!!!!!!!!!

Disha: G???????? Is this a way to meet you sister??

G: Hey that was all priya!!!

They laugh and they both hug!!

They stay and chat for a little while and then they leave!!!

Suraj and Priety come back from dinner and go into their room

Suraj puts his arms around Preity

P: What are you doing?

S: Spending quality time w/ my wife!!

P: I can see that!!

S: You know i am very very very happy today!!!!!

P: Why?

S: Cuz i have you by my side!!!!

P 😳

Suraj turns her around and looks at her and she looks down and is getting nervous he kisses her on the forehead, on the cheeks, and finally kisses her on the lips and she hugs him tightly and the lights dim..... and you know next

Disha is looking in the kitchen cuz she left some chocolate bar on the counter top and she cant find them and shes craving for it badly!!!!

Disha: Wheres my candy??😃😃

Dk: Disha.. what are you looking for?

Disha: My choco... i left it here!!

Dk: Oh.. you mean this!!

He has them in his hands...

Disha runs to him but he doesnt give it!

Disha; COme on Dk give them please????

Dk: No.. too much is not good for you!

Disha: Please!!!!

Disha starts chasing him all over the house and its a little cat and mouse game and he goes into the room and Disha is throwing pillows at him and everything and finally Disha grabs him

Disha: PLease Dk.. give it!

Dk: No..

Disha: Come on i will do anything!

Dk: ANything???? 😳

Disha: Yes..

Dk: Okay.. you have to give me a kiss

Disha: Kiss??????

Disha quickly kisses him on the cheeks...

Disha: Okay now give it..

Dk: Not there?

Disha: What?

She kisses him on the forehead....

Dk: Not there!!

Disha: Then where??????

Dk: Right here (On the lips)

Disha: Are you crazy??? No!!

Dk: Okay then!

He opens the choco bar and sits on the bed and starts taking little bites and Disha wants it so badly... She comes and sits next to him

Dk: You know you have really good tastes in choco.. this is really good!!

Disha: Dk...... its mine.. i saw it 1st! (Talking like a little kid)

Dk: Hey sharing is caring!! okay here... puts his towards her mouth but takes it away!!

Disha: Dk!! please!!!!😃

Dk: no....

Disha tries getting it but she misses!!!

Dk is about to take another bite but quickly Disha beats him to it.. but Dk removes it and he ends up kissing her on the lips!!!!!!!!!!!

DK: well i finally got what i wanted!!!

Disha 😳

Disha: Now i can i have it?

Dk: That was so nice... One more!!

Disha: Dk????😡

Dk laughs and lets her take a bite!!!

Dk: Disha... what did i say?? no much sugar.. not good for you!

Disha; SO??

DK: and plus you have started getting a little fat!

Disha: Fat???? me??? no way!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DK is laughing and Disha is giving a sad look!

Dk: Okay i am sorry!!!

Disha: NO.. you called me fat!

Dk: You're not fat!!!! and even if you were i think you would still look beautiful!!!!!!

Disha smiles and hugs him!!! 👏

The End!!!!!!!!!!! I will cont tomorrow!! night night!!!


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Posted: 20 years ago
👏!!the story is excellent plz continue soon!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

excellent story. please keep going

there nice and long. love reading it

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

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Posted: 20 June 2005 at 5:58am | IP Logged
good one
extrmely true
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Posted: 20 years ago
Awesome it is getting better each time!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

awsome !

pleaze continue😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
the story is fab and really grat, keep it upp, and write the next part soooooooooooon 👏👏👏

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