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Posted: 12 years ago
Well!! What can i say!?

This was well expected!! for her to realize ... for him to realize !!!
there has tp be some trigger for things to progress!!
so here it is ..

Thanks for the update dear!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh No He managed to hurt her again..

Did Arnav really dated La ? nd forgot abt tat?😲

sry i manage to catch ur ff very rarely.. U r really gud.. Nice one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am glad that La came and shared about her so called dating with Khushi because this just makes the story move forward in leaps and bounds.
She has finally acknowledged her feelings for Arnav which is quite a big thing for her.
So now she is crying in the middle of the road ...and Arnav will not be far behind with her gift!
This should lead to a good confrontation !
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Posted: 12 years ago
it hurts man...wer is this heading??????????/a heartbreak...nmooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
no arshi at all
la what u did n arnav be honest at least urself
don't play with poor soul's heart
feeling bad for khushi
really liked ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooh noo!! What is arnav gonna do
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh you write so beautiful...khushi must be heart broken ...we know that last time arnav was thinking about khushi when he was out with lavanya...but he done the mistake of not clarifying with lavanya...he is in a mess now...please update soon
Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .sakshi.

Dude!..do you have any idea how well you write! 😉

I came across the story last night..and could not sleep until I read it till the last chapter!😳

In the starting..the story is so cute!..with Arnav getting attracted to Khushi's lemon fragrance. And then Arnav giving Khushi lifts daily!..loved their cute cute conversations!..I still remember Khushi telling Arnav, 'Amma says you will be killed drowning in pond if you have just one morsel.' I still cant stop laughing remembering that! LOL! That was seriously nice! 😆

and then the way you wrote how they both were attracted towards each other and then their almost (se thoda zada) kiss! OMG!! Im still in that dreamy world! I could imagine everything happening! Haashh! But this Aman!!!!..Argghhh!😡

But glad they both took that moment in a positive way!!😃

And then when Arnav's phone was left with Khushi..I thought Anjali will call..and she'll get to know about Khushi and then she'll also join hands with Devi Maiyaa..and bring both together!😆

But then both ended up in same room!..Wow!..when Arnav was under Khushi's bed hiding, and Buaji in their room, my heart was beating faster and faster thinking what would happen if now Arnav's phone rang and Buaji will catch him hiding!! LOL!😆 Their would have been a lot of drama! 😛

But I loved your version!😉 we got to see a naughty naughty Arnav! 😳 I wish that their had been a good night and take care kiss!😳

While sleeping also, I was thinking of what will come next in the story! And moreover, I also had a short dream in which Khushi was their in Arnav's room and was hiding in his washroom because unexpectedly Anjali popped up in his room! LOL! 😆

I know, I think a lot!..and I also know that my thoughts are very stupid! But plz excuse them!😳

I am so much in love with this story! Looking forward to next update! Update soon! 😊

and plzz PM me when you update it!

PS- Did I tell you that I am in love with your version of Devi Maiyaa! 😉

Girl!
I am flattered & blushing .. and really thinking hard what to say you in reply. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Can I just hide my face instead?? EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I loved your dream ...! 😆😆 You really dreamt that? Can I just borrow it & use it somewhere in my story??? 😆😆 I will credit you .. promise!
Thanks you soo much for such wonderful words. You have no idea how you have encouraged me. I am not a very confident writer, to be honest. So each word of appreciation really means a lot to me.
Welcome on board .. and keep reading! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww ... And their 1st MU
AWSOME
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww O...i am all senti for khushi...😭 eagerly looking forward to the next update...😊

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