SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16) - Page 56

Originally posted by: Sangs49

waiting for update!

I like to share my feeing about the story...La should be the first to know that Arnav has feelings for Khushi... may be because of her call at night, somehow she will know that Arnav phone was with Khushi and Khushi forgot to tell him about her call when he was with her... making her 2+2 and good in maths.

well what ever you shell out for us in this cute story ... it would be good and better my logical mind could ever imagine so please write you next update soon!

Oh no. This was so heartbreaking! Poor Arnav, he was feeling so happy and acting like a teenage boy...so innocent, genuine, hopeful, happy...gosh I just feel awful for him. He really needs to work on his communication with Khushi. And poor Khushi, she was feeling so happy what with the gift and now she's feeling so heartbroken. I feel so awful! And I think Lavanya is just misunderstanding him...
please update fast!

poor Khushi... always heartbreak for her...

iss misunderstanding ko kya
naam doon??????
now tike for ASR to emerge and claim KKG

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

farah, iam a new reader of your work

thanks to samiya for her email with this link - iam indebted to her for the same

wonderful going farah

iam in love with this SS

i love the way you write - all emotions beautifully penned

i love the way u narrate Devi Maiyaa's reactions to arshi's acts

great writing and great story -

would love to read more of this story and hence will keep a track of this thread

if possible, pls pm me when u update next

priya

Feeling so bad for Khushi..
This uncertainity , Heartbreak is so confusing and painful..

I wish Arnav to speak to her soon

sad😭😭😭 loved your writing ,even i cried at kushi's heartbreak 😭

*pokerface* what just happened!?
*glares at 'DM'* what, don't tell me u don't know this would happen!

aaa! whyyy!
what's happening! and I swear if Arnav scolds KHUSHI for this, us deserves to be plonked on the head >.<

Superb ... I feel sad for Khushi ... So confusing for such a sweet soul

Originally posted by: Arshix144

I have read a large number of FF's on this forum, yours by far is my favourite one! I absolutely love the way you have portrayed the characters! They are very true to the characters on the show but I like your version much better than the way things happened in the show! I wish they would have used your story instead :P I have been stalking this FF for a while, I am not sure if you PM when you update but if you do would love to know when you will update next!

Very keen to read the next chapter!