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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi

A friend recommended ur FF and i started reading and now i am all but living through it.

Girl, u can write! and that seems to be an understatement by any standard. I am so hooked to ur story and ur writing style. The way u have developed the story...there aren't enough words that i can write to express how i have run through chapter after chapter to go to the next update.

chapter-12 had me literally holding my breath!

I came to ur latest thread and held my breath again in anticipation that there will be more chapters for me to devour (read ch-13) and now i am gonna wait till u update next.

The way u have written that reconstruction of the diwali night almost kiss (of course urs one did give me what we had anticipated in the show but never got to see...😉)... the makers of the show should have read ur chapter and would have done a finer job then.

Loved the way the story has shaped up. I read in one post of urs asking whether u should be writing as ur doing now or would ur readers want this to be wrapped up in a few chapters only...plz don't, not a single chapter of urs is either boring or dragging...far from it! Every chapter was so interesting...beautiful...eventful...and so so romantic.


I am in love with ur version of Devi Mayyia so much!

U have a very good dry sense of humour that i have become a absolute fan of. Do continue in ur own vein and update soon.

If u PM people for this, plz plz plz plz do PM me whenever u next update... i will absolutely hate it..no no no, go crazy if i miss out on any updates of this wonderful update.

Take care

Swati.

p.s. i am sending u a buddy request in the hopes that u will accept and make me a part of this story from now on.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Now iam off to read everyone of ur stories from ur index...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
I cannot explain in words. I just love your story. Love it Love it.
Please Please PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey my dear,

When are you updating? I stalk every day, several times, but no updates!😭

Please update... waiting to see what transpires between them in the lemony haze!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey,
Amazing story. Glad i came across it. Very well written. Enjoyed reading each chapter. Would like to get PM for further updates.
God bless
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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing update, U left at cliffhanger, waiting eagerly ... update soon😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
My god can't wait for next update...will khushi answer lavanya' phone
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Posted: 12 years ago
I missed d update somehow...
But now I have read it..

I absolutely loved d update...
Update sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

.Read it in one go ..It is amazing.ur gr8 writer..I really wonder what will happen when khushi get to know about Lavnya and Arnav dating business... cant wait to unfold the story ...i m not new to this forum but recentaly started reading all FF,SS,OS but still dont know buddy list n all that so will be stalking ur update hope u dont mind that...plz update soon...n regularly as u r back have fun on ur vacation :) -supriya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uh oh!!1 The ending did not end well and please don't drag it. I don't want to be sad. Keep this funny and light heart. I will cry if they fought again. I am already having bad day lately and updates make me sad. ;-)

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