A friend recommended ur FF and i started reading and now i am all but living through it.
Girl, u can write! and that seems to be an understatement by any standard. I am so hooked to ur story and ur writing style. The way u have developed the story...there aren't enough words that i can write to express how i have run through chapter after chapter to go to the next update.
chapter-12 had me literally holding my breath!
I came to ur latest thread and held my breath again in anticipation that there will be more chapters for me to devour (read ch-13) and now i am gonna wait till u update next.
The way u have written that reconstruction of the diwali night almost kiss (of course urs one did give me what we had anticipated in the show but never got to see...đ)... the makers of the show should have read ur chapter and would have done a finer job then.
Loved the way the story has shaped up. I read in one post of urs asking whether u should be writing as ur doing now or would ur readers want this to be wrapped up in a few chapters only...plz don't, not a single chapter of urs is either boring or dragging...far from it! Every chapter was so interesting...beautiful...eventful...and so so romantic.
I am in love with ur version of Devi Mayyia so much!
U have a very good dry sense of humour that i have become a absolute fan of. Do continue in ur own vein and update soon.
If u PM people for this, plz plz plz plz do PM me whenever u next update... i will absolutely hate it..no no no, go crazy if i miss out on any updates of this wonderful update.
Take care
Swati.
p.s. i am sending u a buddy request in the hopes that u will accept and make me a part of this story from now on.
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