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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2:
Are yaar!! Yeh Taani Rey ki love story mein koi na koi ghus aata hai!! Agla update padhne ke liye right now i am running.. WIll comment in detail after i finish reading!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3:
I loved this chap! Swayam, Gosh! I Love him! And now.. M glad ki Taani is questioning herself if she's happy or not!! ANd precap.. Taani jealous! GOnna be amazing! You are an amzing writer.. Keep writing.. Update fast and plz plz plz zplz plz pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for the late update...kya karu school...i know after the precap everyone must be dead so to revive you guys here is some more of my bakwas.
Raj opened the door only to find someone whome he never expected
raj: what are you doing here???
girl: are you saying i shouldnt have come here?
raj: no i mean... who told you where we were?
taani: i did.
Raj : what!!!
everyone was really confused. Swayam finally spoke up.
Swayam: but who is she anyway???
taani: this is simran...my friend and raj's ex-girlfriend.
Swayam: seriously...simran...
Sharon:(controlling her laughter) why what is wrong with her name?
swayam: you guys really dont see it.
everyone shook their heads to indicate a no on purpose.
Swayam: ok... whatever... simran you can stay here as long as you like.
She smiled and nodded.
Swayam:(to himself)iss taani ki chakkar mein mere ghar ek bollywood fil bangaya.
rey was inwardly happy because he thought that her arrival would cause problems between taani and raj but he immediately kicked that thought away as he pictured her heartbroken and couldnt take it.
Rey( in his mind) i will do anything for your beautiful smile taani... anything for you.
The next few days were dedicated to the engagemeny preperations. that night taani was trying to sleep but failed miserably. because she was really angry with rey and simram and the best part is that she had no idea why. a few days ago simran had mentioned to her that she was interested in rey and to taani's suprise she found herself fuming at her. her blood involuntarily boiled when she recalled what had happened the day before.
Flashback:
it was a fine day. a perfect day for soccer it was the gangs favourite sport. after much pleading rey joined the game. everyone wore their sportswear and came out to play but simran grabbed all the attenstion as she came out sporting a a really short t shirt which allowed everyone to see her stomach and an even shorter pair of shorts. all the guys stared ather except for rey , raj and swayam. all the girls smacked their respective partner's head hard. to her utter shock taani found herself smiling when she noticed that rey was not paying any attention to simran despite simran's constant efforts to make him notice her. raj and sharon noticed that and their suspision's grew deeper.
During the game simran fell on rey and they fell on the ground together with simran on top of him. rey was desperately trying to get up but simran trapped him between her arms. the boys yelled chemistry from behind and taani's anger knew no bounds.she stormed off saying she was tired.
Flashback ends.
Taani : why am i so angry simran is a nce girl and they look good together...then why...stop it taani ainvayi iss baare mein kyun soch rahi ho.
She pulled the covers over her head and fell asleep.
Scene shift to raj and vicky.
vicky: your engagement is coming soon how do you feel?
raj: excited but i am scared as hell.
Vicky:(laughing)you should be scared an unmarried man is like an eagle .free but a married man is like a parrot trapped in cage forever. now we are just waiting for rey to become a parrot.
Raj's smile faded away.
Raj: so you guys know taani for a long time right? imean you guys were dancers in the same college right?
Vicky : yup.
raj: rey and taani are pretty close huh?
vicky: best of friends.. they were known as the dancing couple of st. louis. in fact when i heard that taani was getting married i honestly thought she was marrying rey...
Vicky laughed raj laughed too to mask his uneasiness.

Precap: engagement and simran's shocking confession.
I am sure there are some spelling mistakes but i dont have time to correct so pls tokerate this time. dont forget to comment and hit like
Edited by angelitha98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj and Simran...LOL... bechara Swayam...😆

*cant stop laughing*

and OMG, taani is jealous...aww..so cutee...and simran trying to flirt... hehe bechara Rey...

looking forward to the next update eagerly...update soon and thanks for the PM =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol love Swayam reaction when he heard the name Simran lol that was too good. Aww someone is jealous yah I love it Taani jealous of Rey and Simran. Plz continue soon am loving this SS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
r u sure raj n simran 🤣
omg poor swayam really
his house is now film city
anyways i luv it tht now taani si jea
n waiting forr nxt prt thanks for PM n
do put nxt prt soon n yeah do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
loved your filmigiri... simran... ha...ha...hha...ha.
bichara swayam
loved to see jealous Taani.
so she can realize her love.
vicky raj convo and Raj's uneasiness...
pls. do cont. soon with next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 update dear...finally taani's jealousy mode kicked in...n swayam exclaimin dat his plce was turnin in2 a filmy mad house...hahahahahahaha...update soon dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
liked it a lot read all
4 chaps in one swing
loved ur writing
awesome concept
kya yar puri ddlj
k team banana chahati ho kya
nywys nyc
its smthing new
swayam getting iritated at
bolywood talks
all gang troubling hm
sharon preggi
n rey oh
m sad for hm yaar
rey simran
simran rey
nnah!!!!
taani rey
rey taani
oh yes
taarey rock
waiting fr next chp
i hve pmed u
i guess twice
hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Omg what a chap. Raj simran. Lol. Laughing so hard. Loving the confused Taani

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