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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

lovely!😊

though it hurts to see that they will be parting soon...and what khushi is going thru and will go thru after he leaves...😭

will be waiting for the next update!!

thanx for the pm!!😳

thanx for the happy reading moment@!!!👏⭐️

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#912

well!!! did i comment on ur latest update or did i not comment on ur latest update????// i dnt knw... but i just got hold of ur update... n i must say it was a nice one with undertones of being them separated soon...

but they r a pair made for each other!!! while one has bcum such a cynic so early on in life the other continues to thrive n go on with the ramblings of a fairytale life!!!!!!!!

bt why did they have to separate and that too for 6 long years meet again with entirely different partners!! cnt wait to get to the end... heh heh... :D

(p.s: please overlook the crappiness in the comment!!!!!)

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

So sweet and innocent! I feel like crying for khushi. Poor girl... terribly in love!

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Great update
Liking the floe of yhe story

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

awesome update and thanks for the pm

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

Khushi is right, it's horrible that at that age Arnav is so bitter about life in general, it's not normal at all

I can't believe Arnav is leaving! That sucks, I mean Khushi just realized her feelings!

Can't wait to read more!

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

so they r going to seperate...

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Arnav Foster can corner me on a mountain and scare me like that anytime, just saying! 😉

But I understand Khushi's predicament all too well. When everything seems to crash down on you all at once, the slightest provocation releases this barrage of pent up fears, frustration and melancholy. I'm glad she's letting it all out. Crying is indeed cathartic. I wonder what Arnav truly feels about her. He's favourite hobby seems to be sending mixed signals to the poor girl and to poor me. 😕

One moment he's igniting her with his smouldering intensity and the next he's nonchalant and cool as though nothing means anything to him after all.

Sometimes he seems to care over much and sometimes he is brutally careless.

I have a feeling it isn't just Khushi (and me) who is suffering in this conflict but Arnav as well. Maybe he just doesn't know how to deal with the suddenly confusing feelings on top of everything else that has gone wrong in his life recently.

I can't remotely find it in my heart to blame him for his aloof and cynical nature, OR his insolence. His 17 year old self has just been moulded as such by society. The same society that now despairs of him-- the hypocrites.

But is this was the farewell party, and Arnav is going to University of Michigan, when do Arnav and Khushi get a chance for things to develop between them? Because in the prologue it seemed as though they have some amount of shared history, when they meet all those years later complete with a son and a girlfriend!

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#919

mindblowing updateloved itthanks for the pm

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Philana

@Philana

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#920

Oh the poor girl! What's she to make of the "worldly wise" guy who tells her everyone moves out, and moves on, and then announces his soon upcoming departure! And Khushi, so easy to bribe *gently smacks her hand for getting sold to just a movie and letting him off!* Khushi with her untouched heart, and Arnav with one so scarred...

ps: University of Michigan during the fall, one of the most beautiful campuses to be at! Is there a reason you chose that Jenny, forsaking the obvious Ivy League options which are so much more popular with fanfictionlore? 😆

Edited by Philana - 12 years ago

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