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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#921

As much as I am enjoying this current phase in their relationship, I can't get over the feeling of impending doom, knowing that they did not end up together, at least for the next 6 years. I so wish I hadn't read the prologue. I would have enjoyed this so much more. seems like there is not a very long time left for them to make some serious memories and then break up before Arnav leaves for Michigan.

I do trust you enough to know that in the current day they will end up together, but I am so saddened thinking of the heartbreak coming up.

I had read your other FF all in one shot, after it was complete, so I didn't have this problem. I didn't stop to think between chapters. How I wish this one was complete too... 😕

but seriously, loved every bit of this chapter, as always.

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Abyan

@Abyan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#922

Another awesome chapter...loved from first till end... Such beautiful moments between Arnav and Khushi...they truly falling for each other.. felt for Khushi's pain when she found out that he is leaving for US...loved how arnav came to the party just for her...loved the way he was scaring her...they are surely "Beauty and the Beast" loved the punishment for arnav.. can't wait till they watch a Salman khan movie together...so well done Jenny for a wonderful update

plz continue soon...and thx for the pm

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#923

Lovely update. Loved Khushi's behaviour when Arnav came to the party she was being so sweet trying to hide and pretending not to have seen him.
Arnav is a real cynic in such a young age regarding matters of love and marriage, he is hiding lot of pain and it comes across in his attitude.
So he is leaving for states for further studies and poor Khushi is so sad about it that she can't stop crying poor baby. She has realised her feelings. He has not consiously realise it yet but Arnav also has feelings for Khushi as he came to the party he would not have come if it was not for Khushi and he thinking that he can do anything to bring the smile to her face.
About making Khushi scared by calling himself wolf and her red riding hood, if she had not started crying then what would he have done we would never know.
It was a very sweet update with Khushi making so much effort with her appearance, I loved it. Waiting to see what's going to happen next.
Thanks for the PM.

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

How could u be so cruel you are sending him away forever.
Poor khushi is felt bad for her.

Continue soon Plzz

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#925

Every update makes this story reach new and better heights !!😊

My favourite part is the scene you wrote about Arnav scaring her ,,, i can so imagine an innocent little Khushi crying her eyes out on Arnav's bad behavior ! That was so adorable and then him apologizing...and Khushi is so true how can he not be forgiven with such an apology !!!

So now movie time ..yippee...😃