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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Farewell parties and singing songs that would reduce the leaving seniors to tears...

and did not have to try hard to cripple the teachers...

Fav # was Good bye to you my trusted friend...lyrics appropriately morphed...

and the pehla pehla pyaar

was so so adorable...

but most of all i can even hear K's Gran in my head...😆 (no guessing how many times I have been on the receiving end)

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

nice update.. loved the bond that is developing between AK..

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star303

@star303

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Ahhh the realization of first love!!!! The song says it all. And then there is the last day of the school, the farewell party.Awww Arnav so wanted her to say that she wants him to come. The progression of their friendship was written in a very natural way. The sorry note was super cute.

Now the granny-Arnav conversation left me thinking that was her disapproval of Arnav the reason Khushi and him are not together in the present?? Will wait to find out.

Waiting for Arnav to make his entry at the party.

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Loved the usage of the song, pehla nasha, it described the feelings khushi must be going through, the feeling of 1st love as a teenager. From the prologue I know there is going to be heartbreak for

her. But enjoying this phase of their feelings of 1st love. Waiting for the pictures of the place that take you to your memories.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

wow great story plz update soon
it's a lovely story
thanks for the pm

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Thanks for the PM.
I will comment later.😊

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

This was such a beautiful chapter in so many levels . The budding friendship and the initial awareness between both of them is depicted so beautifully . It reminds of your schoo; days again wherein you have a crush on some boy or the other :) His way of saying sorry was so cute !!!!! I just adored it .

Also last chapter was such a poignant chapter . It bought tears to to my eyes when Arnav cries over Khushi's fathers' grave , Poor soul had so much pent grief deep inside him . It took a stranger's grave to release those tears that have been waiting to come out for such a long time . This is so sad . Now I understand why he is so innately rude to people . Also poor khushi who misses her mother and feels closer to her dead father who died before she was born . These are two tormented souls who need each other to find that ultimate solace !!!!!

Thanks a ton for the PM .

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

So adorable!!

Arnav saying sorry, feeling contrite that Khushi said she really is bad at math.

The party - even I hope Arnav turns up! Beauty and the Beast though? Is Arnav going to do something?

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

Aww pehla nasha... again reminds of first crush in school 😳😳 God, those were wonderful days! The way you wrote it was just amazing, rather than reading it seems like a visual treat and Arnav's sorry was just too cute, so adorable.

Your last story was one of the best story I have ever read and this one is becoming a tough competitor to it. Thanks for the PM, loved it.