Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21)

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

nice 😊

Very good and I am sure you are very proud the way it turned out considering it's your first OS.

Loved this nice Arnav and Khushi with a different background.

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Meera

@fabmegan25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

hey dt was really a nice os!!😊

i reall lykd d cute khushi in diz 1!!...poor thing, alwayz gt sidelined because of hr bst frnd bt still actually jelous of her nd didn let dt affect der ffrndshp!!👏

really u gt a gr8 imagination abt ur characters nd u narrate it in such a way i dt cud actually imagin der emotions nd facial expressions!!!😛

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Such a sweet story! doesn't every girl feel like being overshadowed by her friend at some point of her life? anyways Khushi was lucky :-)

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Wow Anony_mous, I'm speechless!!!!!

I just can't tell you how beautifully your first OS was written, I instantly fell in love with it!!!!

Finally fate bought Khushi her dream guy Arnav that was only meant for her!!!! You described Khushi's emotions really well throughout the OS!!!! I'm so glad everything worked out in favour for Khushi!!!!

Seriously Anony_mous, you really need to take this amazing writing talent and turn it into a professional career!!!! You are too good to be writing on India Forums (that doesn't mean you stop writing on IF)!!!! I'm 100% sure more and more people internationally would appreciate your writing!!!

Just keep up this fabulous work and a big thanks for always giving me an enjoyable reading experience!!!!

Looking forward to reading more ArShi OS's in the near future!!!!

Take care,

Rahat

P.S.

I would also have loved if you turned this OS into an SS just like many other readers, but I totally understand the points you made on page 21!!!!

In all the ArShi stories you've written so far, all the Arnav Singh Raizada character's have been 'flawed and complicated' as you stated; but I think that is where your talent lies, how you manage to always justify the character of ASR in each story is just mind blowing!!! Hats off for doing that!!!!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Couldn't stop myself from reading this OS again - awesome one

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

wow lovely os..
do write some more lyk dis..
really gud 1

Edited by mishtypiya - 12 years ago

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Wow

yet another fabulous OS

i totally loved it..

oh god khushi thought that arnav indirectly asking kamya for dance..😆...and he refused to dance with kamya..

khushi was jealous from kamya, thinking that arnav is now kamya's boyfriend.. when he clears her misconception then she got relief that arnav was not kamya boyfriend..o.m.g arnav knew everything about khushi...😉

so sweet arnav again asked khushi to dance with him..

very romantic...i read ur note ..i know u would not convert this os to ss ..but plz plz write 2nd part at least or a sequel may be..