Dil Dosti Dance U, Me, Aur Hum - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
finallly swaron confession hogya...!
reaally loved ur update...!
update sssooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing yaar. so cute. i wish that would actually happen <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome concept..please continue soon and PM me as well...thanks and great job =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U Me Aur Hum Chapter 3:

The gang was in the common room making plans for the party, when Swayam and Sharon came in together.
Nil- Vicky, dude why does Swayam have his arm around Sharon's shoulder?
Vicky- Yeah dude, and why is Sharon smiling at him?
Simmi- Shut up boys, they look so cute.
T- Bhai! You and Sharon are together now? Finally!!
R- Sharon? I'm so happy for you.
Sh- Guys, before you all get excited, I want to tell all of you something.
Vishakha- Yeah man, what happened?
Rinni- Tell us sharon, what is the matter?
Sw- Guys sit down and Sharon will explain everything.
He noticed that Rey had his arms around Taani. He shuddered, he still hasn't gotten used to the idea that Taani and Rey were a couple.
The gang sat down and looked at Sharon, waiting for what she had to say.
Sh- Guys, I have Asthma.
There was dead silence. Simmi just looked down.
Sh- That means I cannot dance or do any physical activity.
Gang- What?
Sh- I know, and it's been killing me, but now that I have Swayam with me, I feel as if I can do anything. I know that all of you are shocked, but I'm sorry.
Neha- Why you sorry? No one gussa at Sharon.
Amar- Yeah Sharon, it's okay.
R- Sharon, we will help you through this. He went over to sharon and gave her a hug.
To lighten the mood, Vicky...
Vicky- So Swayam, are you and Sharon a couple now? Hmmm? Tell
Simmi- yeah, tell us Swayam?
Poor Swayam, he was trapped.
Sw- Yes, Sharon and I are a couple now.
Gang- Oye hoy, kya baat hai !!!
Sharon and Swayam both blushed.
Sh- Guys we are getting late, time for class, lets go.
Nil- Swayam, atleast let go of Sharon now!
Swayam laughed and blushed at the same time. He wrapped his arms around Sharon and they all went to class. This whole time, Ashi was quiet. She couldn't handle the fact that Sharon Swayam are a couple. Not for long, she thought. And smirked, and left for class as well.

Okay guys, that was chapter 3. I hope you like it. I'm changing the title from Taarey to Dil Dosti Dance because I realized its not only on Taarey. Thank you for all the encouragement. And remember no rude comments please. Thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dil Dosti Dance U Me aur Hum Chapter 4:
The gang arrived in the classroom for the first lecture of the day. Rey sat next to Taani and Swayam next to Sharon. The rest of the gang sat together.
Teacher- Good morning boys and girls!
Class- Good morning sir!
They continued with their classes and at the end of the day met in the canteen.
Nil- Finally, dude I thought I was going to die out of boredom in that classroom.
Everyone laughed at this and Rey wrapped his arms around Taani and put his head on her shoulder. Taani turned her head to smile at him. He saw her smile and winked at her. Taani's cheeks turned an adorable shade of pink.
R- Aww, my baby is blushing!!!
T- Rey, Bhai is here,
R- So? I want the whole world to now that I love you.
Taani smiled at this and gave him a cute peck on his cheek.
Swayam noticed this and cleared his throat as everyone was staring at them.
Rinni- Taani, Rey what were both of you doing? And Taani, why are you blushing?
Everyone laughed, and started teasing them both.
Swayam shuddered again, but this time Sharon noticed.
Sh- Swayam, you might as well get used to it. Your sister is very happy.
Sw- I know, I'll try to feel less awkward. By the way, you look very pretty.
Sh- You're telling me this at the end of the day?
Sw- I was lost in you that I couldn't say anything.
Sharon blushed at this and gave Swayam a cute hug.
Ashi noticed this and quickly made a call to someone.
Ashi- "They are closer than ever now. You had said that by the end of the day they'd hate eachother.
She cut the call and walked near Swayam. She "accidentally" slipped and made sure that she fell into Swayam.
Sw- Are you okay Ashi?Sh- Yeah Ashi, is everything okay?Ashi pretend to feel weak
Ashi- Im feeling dizzy, Swayam will you please take me home?Sw- Yeah yeah, sure, no problem.
Sharon looked at Swayam, she couldn't believe what was happening.
Sw- Guys, Ashi feels sick, Im taking her home. I'll be back soon.
Everyone found this really weird, but decided to leave it and thought nothing of it.
Sharon thought that this was weird.
After a while Swayam came back. He saw that the gang was deciding the dress code for the party.
Neha- Neha thinking that traditional it should be.
Vicky- My kagu is so smart and she looks so pretty in saree, he said dreamily
Neha blushed while all the girls teased her. The gang decided that the dress code should be traditional. Swayam noticed that Rey had found a rose lying on one of the tables and was about to turn around and give it to Taani, and he had a plan.
He pulled Taani aside and stood in her place, as Rey turned around, he yelped in surprise!
Sw- Rey! How sweet, you want to give me this rose. Aww, you cutie!
R- Kya? Wait, no! That was meant for
Gang- TAANI
Rey blushed and ran his hand through his hair.
Sw- Aww, my cutie, how sweet of you
R- Ruk, I'll set you straight.
He chased after Swayam but soon they both got tired and stopped.
Bharat- Guys I'm tired, I gotta go
They all decided to go home and parted their separate ways.
Rey dropped Taani off
T- Thanks rey, see you tomorrow.
R- Taani, don't you want to give me something?
T- What do I need to give you? Oh, and she leaned over and gave him a kiss on the cheek.
R- okay now you can go and smiled
Taani laughed and went inside
Nil dropped Simmi home
Nil- Simmi, I think you'll great in a saree
Simmi- You really think so?
Nil- you look good in whatever you wear
Simmi- Aww nil how sweet, you know you're different than most guys.
She smiled and went inside her house.
Nil- So are you my sweet Simmi, and he left.

Okay guys that was chapter 4. Thanks for all the encouragement. It truly means a lot. Thank you sooo much. And remember no ride comments please. Thanks :)
Edited by sdas1027 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Unres..
So cute and sweet update..
Loved it alot..
Excited fr valentine..
Update soon... 😃
Edited by Curvmars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice it was swt prt
but wht is aashi up
to oo god thanks for PM
n do put nxt prt soon n yeah
do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
your updates were amazing yr
continue soon
if possible pm me
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Lovely update, Aashi is upto something evil omg, Aww love Taarey cute moment swayam is too funny plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Nice parts. Liked them. What is aashi planning to do? Waiting for the twists n turns to happen. Please cont soon.

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