Dil Dosti Dance U, Me, Aur Hum - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
waiting for 18th feb...😊😊
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Loved it, what a brilliant start, I loved how both of them were lost in each other n the gang were teasing them, looking forward to the next part, please cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update...loved taarey cute n sweet moments...!
keepu updating dear..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii! Okay! I loved it! Gosh!! It was too cute!! I am smiling and blushing like mad! Seriously!! I don't wanna miss anything of this!! So can u please plesae please please please pelase keep pming me about the updates? I simly cannot afford to miss this! I'm sending u a buddy request! please do accept it and keep pming me! I'll be inactive for a while since I have my exams till the 20th of march so I kinda won't be able to like or comment but i'm surely going to read all the parts once I come back! So please keep pming me!!
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Its brilliant dear
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Chapter 2:
Swayam sat on his bed and thought about what happened yesterday in the auditorium. It's not possible he thought. He had a feeling in his heart that Sharon can't forget everything like that. He wouldn't let her forget. With this goal in mind he decided to go to Sharon's house.
Sw=How do I know that Sharon hasn't already left for college? I'll call Taani to find out.
Ring ring ring ...
T- Hello?
Sw- Taani, is Sharon at college yet?
T- No Bhai, Sharon Bhabi hasn't come to college yet. Why do you ask?
Sw- nothing, I'll arrive at college a little late and so will Sharon. Tell the gang that. Okay?
T- Okay Bhai, bye
Sw-Bye Taani
He quickly got dressed and got his cycle out. He rode as fast as he could to Sharon's place.
Sh- I can't go to college, what if everyone finds out? And Swayam, I can't face him anymore. I will just be causing him more pain that's all. After all, I can never give him happiness anymore. He'll find someone much better than me.
Sw- You are wrong Sharon. I can never find someone better than you.
Sharon quickly turned around to find Swayam right behind her.
Sh- How dare you? How did you come inside? Listen Swayam...
Sw- Shhh,
He put his finger on Sharon's lips to make her quiet. Both were quiet, lost in each other's eyes. Swayam pushed the some hair out of Sharon's face behind her ear and caressed her face.
Sw- Today it's my turn to speak and you have to listen to me Sharon Raiprakash. I won't leave without saying what I came here to say.
Sharon was quiet this whole time. She was flooded with happiness inside when she saw Swayam, but she knew that she had to end everything if she wanted to keep Swayam happy.
Sw- Sharon, the first day I saw you, I fell in love with you. Since then I have only loved you and will continue to love you till my last breath. And I know that you love me too, so it's no use hiding it. Did you forget everything? Everything sharon? I don't believe it.
Sharon pushed Swayam away from her.
Sh- YES, YES YES I FORGOT EVERYTHING!!!!! And I don't love you Swayam, I hate you! You are nothing more than a CHEAP LOSER.
She turned around and the tears that she was doing her best to hold in came pouring out. She couldn't keep all this pain inside her anymore. She had to let it go.
Sh- Why did u come Swayam? Why? Why don't you believe me when I say that I don't love you anymore?
Sw- Anymore? That means you did love me before, didn't you sharon?
Sh- Swayam, if you stay with me, you won't ever get any happiness. I'll only cause you more pain.
Sw- Why Sharon, how can you say something like that? What happened after you went to Delhi? Tell me Sharon!
He grabbed Sharon's arm and jerked her around to face him.
Sh- ASTHMA! I HAVE ASTHMA SWAYAM! I CAN'T DANCE OR ANYTHING! IM USELESS SWAYAM! I DIDN'T WANT TO TELL YOU BECAUSE YOU'D STOP DANCING AND I KNEW THAT YOU'D ALWAYS STAY UNHAPPY. IM WORTHLESS SWAYAM.
Sharon broke down in sobs and she fell into Swayam. Swayam was in shock. He didn't know what to say. Sharon, the best dancer her knew, was banned from dancing.
Sw- Sharon, why didn't you just tell me? Why Sharon. I can't stop loving you and you know that.
Sh- I love you Swayam, I need you, Sharonn Raiprakash needs Swayam Shekawat.
Swaym pulled Sharon's chin up and placed his lips on hers. The whole world stopped. Everything went still, they both felt a need for each other. A passion, a fire that can never be extinguished.
Both stopped to catch their breaths. Swayam put his forehead on Sharon's forehead. And they smiled at eachother.
Sw- We should go to college now.
Sh- I don't know. What if everyone finds out?
Sw- No one will say anything. And I'm here always by your side. Sharon, I didn't love you because of your dance, that was only part of it. But I loved you for you. I loved you for the way you laugh, your smile, and your caring personality.
Sharon smiled at him. She grabbed his hand and held it to her heart.
Sh- I love you Swayam. I'll get ready then. You can go wait in the living room.
Sw- why? I'll stay here.
Sh- Swayam, I need to change.
Sw- so? Why be shy in front of me and winked!
Sh- Absolutely not, leave!
Sw- okay baba, I'll wait in your living room. Oh Shoot!
Sh- what happened Swayam?
Sw- I brought my cycle,
Sh- That's okay, I'll go In whatever you want me to go in.
Sharon got ready and both left for college.
Okay guys, this was chapter 2. I hope you all enjoy it. I'll post chapter 3 tomorrow. Thank you so much for the encouragement. And remember no rude comments please. Thanks :)
Edited by sdas1027 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved ur update
do continue soon😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful nice n do PM me nxt time plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow swaron are soo cute
amazing update dear
lekin next chapter mein taarey ko zaroor dikhana
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Awesome update finally Swayam knows the truth

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