ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed] - Page 25

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Posted: 8 years ago
This is a one of the most beautiful ff i read.
I like ur writting style very much.
About ff u discribe every single emotions very beautifully n naturaly.
My favourite scene was that film incident.yeah its bit same to show.but what my attention cautch was how khushi understood her mistake from that tickets n the way she apologize.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear nice story .. is there 13 chapters or there are more I'm confused ??
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Posted: 8 years ago
I read this in one sitting at my piano (grade 5 exam next week, should've been practising, but I couldn't put my phone down and stop reading this beautiful story!). It just brought back all of the feels that I have for ArShi, I wish this plot had been used in the actual show! This was such an enthralling FF, I'll admit I cried a bit at some of the parts! (And that's really unusual for me because I mostly keep my emotions in check!), I love how this FF starts off following the show, but then introduces an even better plot line! I really hope that you'll write some more amazing ArShi FFs that somewhat follow the show. Thanks so much for this story, I thoroughly enjoyed it! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful story about couple their complicated marriage life..
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Posted: 7 years ago
A beautiful piece of work not only the way emotions you portrayal but also the language is so good...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Reread this after ages. Just love how you captured the feelings of khushi and arnav. Its the way marriages are: ups and downs.
Khushi here was very real. There is only so much a person can overlook and only so many times can a person maintain happiness. Khushi reached her breaking point.

Really enjoyed reading how Khushi and arnav started ommunicating their feelings/insecurities more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Coming back to read it once again, and maybe commenting again.
It is always amazing to read different interpretations of Arnav and Khushi from the show. While AU allows the author the freedom to make their own characters, sticking to the show's POV is hard for many authors, especially when it is someone else's narration you are carrying forward.
You do it effortlessly and with a panache that gives the story a firm grounding.

I guess there are several out there who didn't like Khushi forgiving her Arnav like that. Her character's magnanimity surprised everyone and made her so unreal. But, here you gave that a chance. You brought out the flawed aspects of the narrations. How can anyone ignore facts that both Arnav and Khushi are chalk and cheese and their happily ever after would not be a bed of roses. They would have major struggles. In that sense, i enjoyed your take on their story. It was a well rounded narrative with the characters story coming out in full circle.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This was just amazing loved it so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I had this one bookmarked since a while but then I stopped coming to IF. But today, I suddenly had this urge to read a fiction and I couldn't be happier for reading this one.
I have read your work before so have no idea why it took me so long to find my way here. I loved this FF. This was so intense and at times, I could feel their pain slicing through me. I noticed that you've a blog now. Definitely subscribing to that!

Keep writing and making our days with your wonderful words :D


Thanks
-V
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Posted: 7 years ago
I myself lost count how many time I have read this story

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