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Posted: 12 years ago
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tum dono ek saath...it's going to be rocking guyzzz... So agree wid asma Two opp. Personalities...it's going to b fun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

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Sweet surprise Khush! Thanks sis!
I don't know Deetha but I guess I will soon know her and her writing style. I can imagine she is a good writer as you are co-working with her on this. Oh yes. Hers is completely opposite of mines. But still, it's interesting 😃 You'll know her soon!

Talking about this work - Amorous! My first reaction: Is this seriously entitled as one of my sissy's work. For one you are underage and two the word has depth within itself. What the...?!! Seriously? Your mind is corrupted 😳🤣 im just 16. Spare me 😆I wanted a work like that though.. one word that holds deep meaning.. but when broken down, not as much 😛 It was either this or Mahsoos.. Amorous fits well, we thought.

But then I went on to reading and I read 'Feelin' of Love' in the bottom and I am like okay it's not entirely on the what this term suggests. Like I said... 😆

Must say, you gave me a shock. I am like yay! a surprise and then I click on the link and read 'Amorous' by my sista'. I was starting to think you were taking your writings to a whole new level over here. Kinda, I am but still in limits 😳

Not that this is not going to be different. I am looking forward to reading one more work by you! I know you are 😃

Deetha - umm I don't know you or anything about you. But I read khush praising your work. So, all I can say is that this is definitely going to be a treat to read.

Good Luck to both of you. 😳


Kisi aur ka reply karu.. na karu.. you know i'll reply to yours 😃



baaki sab ke comments baad mei honge 😛 Sorry but yes.. khud ki behen ke saath toh i can be biased na? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@mystic.moon- heya!!thanks yaar... no probs... we will get to know soon... and i think ur khushi's sis... dnt know whether i m wrong or ri8 ... and yeah i expected someone to think the same after reading the title..😛

@LB... haan ofcourse banasakte hai ji... 😛

@tanya..ji haan i know how difficult it is...par swaron keliye itna nahi kar sakti ??? 😆 *ps: yeah emotional blackmail* waise swaron ki character kaisi lagi...atleast apna views toh dedo

@asma...NAHI!!!!!!!! already aaj kha chuki hun...bed se nahi hil rahi meri maa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will unres both reses latr...for now going to class...srry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^Have fun!!!


DD- uska naam Monal hai.. nad yea.. my sis.. and you thought that about title too? Pehle warn kar deti!! I had no idea such a meaning could be made from this word. 😒😆 Dekho kinni bholi hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deetha- Lagtah hai sirf uska asar hota hai tujpe..Chal take care and dont strain..Mess bhi mat jana.Ask ur roomies to bring it for you..

Khushi hmmmDeetha se bhola pan nah expect kar but woh bhooli bhali hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice cs...waiting 4 the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Khushii*


Kisi aur ka reply karu.. na karu.. you know i'll reply to yours 😃 Oh are you trying to keep me on staying put with my comments. I was surely going to make this and the replies within this comment the last of it for a long while to come. Hmm still not sure, may go back to likes or not. Will decide later on.

baaki sab ke comments baad mei honge 😛 Sorry but yes.. khud ki behen ke saath toh i can be biased na? 😳 Hona padta hai. Other will just put you in Merlin's place and through food at you virtually, I can do that for real! 😆 *Sigh* I miss this show, why did it had to end.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha

@mystic.moon- heya!!thanks yaar... no probs... we will get to know soon... and i think ur khushi's sis... dnt know whether i m wrong or ri8 ... and yeah i expected someone to think the same after reading the title..😛


Heya! My name is Monal, and yesh I am Khush's sis.

So, it was not me. I didn't think Khush would right something out of the cocoon as for obvious reasons. She is minor age and me reading her adult work will make me a bad sister as I would be prompting her in a way.
But also at the same time I didn't expect any of works to have such a title either.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Khushii*

^Have fun!!!



DD- uska naam Monal hai.. nad yea.. my sis.. and you thought that about title too? Pehle warn kar deti!! I had no idea such a meaning could be made from this word. 😒😆 Dekho kinni bholi hu


You are not bholi !
You should have expected a reaction as i am sure you knew what the word originally means. If you don't than I am not sure how it ended up in the title in first place!

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