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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: deetha
oops😛

Khushi dekh de dia teri DD ne theek se jawab that kriyaansh are leads!! When you winked khushi i knew who were leads!! 😆

Deetha yehi tu problem hai ke tera sahi time Swaron pe kabhi ata nahi hai!😳

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Araina

@-Araina-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

Khushi dekh de dia teri DD ne theek se jawab that kriyaansh are leads!! When you winked khushi i knew who were leads!! 😆

Deetha yehi tu problem hai ke tera sahi time Swaron pe kabhi ata nahi hai!😳

LOL! KR are in the beginning.. but like after 5-6 chapters, ss kicks in.

mere liye, you have to read the ff 😳

DD- yup! my most favorite part as well

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

just 5-6 parts ki baat hai tanya... now toh ur gonna get swaron in naina tere too from next update so i want u to read this...

LD... aww its taking my heart re... waise kar kya rahi hai

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Monal

@littleflaws

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

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Sweet surprise Khush!

I don't know Deetha but I guess I will soon know her and her writing style. I can imagine she is a good writer as you are co-working with her on this.

Talking about this work - Amorous! My first reaction: Is this seriously entitled as one of my sissy's work. For one you are underage and two the word has depth within itself.

But then I went on to reading and I read 'Feelin' of Love' in the bottom and I am like okay it's not entirely on the what this term suggests.

Must say, you gave me a shock. I am like yay! a surprise and then I click on the link and read 'Amorous' by my sista'. I was starting to think you were taking your writings to a whole new level over here.

Not that this is not going to be different. I am looking forward to reading one more work by you!

Deetha - umm I don't know you or anything about you. But I read khush praising your work. So, all I can say is that this is definitely going to be a treat to read.

Good Luck to both of you. 😳

Edited by *mystic.moon* - 12 years ago

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Araina

@-Araina-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

me doing my bio questions.. have like 7 left to answer.

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: deetha
just 5-6 parts ki baat hai tanya... now toh ur gonna get swaron in naina tere too from next update so i want u to read this...

LD... aww its taking my heart re... waise kar kya rahi hai

Kya karun yaar kriyaansh pe parhne ke liye mujhe itni hard work karni parhti hai jitni dont do it exams even!! 😆 lekin agar naina tere main swaron acha sa nahi mila tu teri kher nahi aur yahan bhi i ant swaron asap!😉

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Himani

@Himu_arsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome cs

Loved it

Thanks for pm

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

DD, voh first page pe 'kaafi hai' ki comment ki hai na? use index mai change kar do?

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: .Twistedtwins.

haha i knew it tu aisa bolegi...

ouch...my leg... asma i swear u cracked me up and i m laughing shaking my leg...see ab kya hua...

Tu abhi kuch din ke liye ek jagah nahii baiti tho mujse bura koi nahi hoga..
tujje usse daat padegi jise tu sabse jayada darti hai..teri kiddo chalega kya😛

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

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unres...

suprbbb cs guyzzz...

it's going to b intrsting...

waise b tum dono sath ho khud hi intrsting ho jayega...

i m looving it bina prolouge k.//...

now u guyzzz update prolouge soon...
thanxxx 4 pm
p.s khushi nd deetha apne baaki wrks p b focus kr lo...especially u deetha/...update s.l soo n...

Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago