|| Amorous #1 || Intro + Chapter 1 || - Page 10

Originally posted by: asmaju

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By Khushi and Deetha this is truely shocking... hehe haan... we had decided to do an os for your birthday but didn't get it ready on time.. toh abhi ye shuru kiya and dedicated to you 😳

Ek bikul filmy dusri full of practical part..
Guess reading this going to be fun lol... gotta see how well we both manage it 😆 The parts I lack in, she's perfect at and vice versa 😛

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Concept is amazing..
I so love it.. So glad you loved it!! You know how eager I was to start it 😳
And yup Amorous it is...
Prologue jaldi se de dho.. Prologue hai bhi?? I think it's straight away chapter 1... 😕
warna dhono pitoge mujse.. hehe nai baba nai.. there are only 4 people I fear in life... you, partner, twin and SJ... can't get you mad 😆
Really happy from heart to see you both in collab.. and we're happy to make you happy 😃

Twisted twins yup perfect name for the craziest pair..😉 lol DD said come up with name for pm id that has something to do with '2'. I could only come up with this 🤣

Originally posted by: lil_devil_himu

Awesome cs

Loved it

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha

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suprbbb cs guyzzz... thank you 😳

it's going to b intrsting... We sure do hope so 😛

waise b tum dono sath ho khud hi intrsting ho jayega... LOLLL!!

i m looving it bina prolouge k.//... Yaani ki prologue na de toh chalega? 😉

now u guyzzz update prolouge soon... le... abhi abhi toh tune kaha bina prologue ke you loving it.. phir prologue update kyu kare? 😛😆
thanxxx 4 pm
p.s khushi nd deetha apne baaki wrks p b focus kr lo...especially u deetha/...update s.l soo n... Me toh gonna update Guzarish and IJD time to time... DD ka tum hi bolo.. 😛

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha

tum dono ek saath...it's going to be rocking guyzzz... So agree wid asma Two opp. Personalities...it's going to b fun...

Originally posted by: asmaju

Deetha- Lagtah hai sirf uska asar hota hai tujpe..Chal take care and dont strain..Mess bhi mat jana.Ask ur roomies to bring it for you..

Khushi hmmmDeetha se bhola pan nah expect kar but woh bhooli bhali hai

Originally posted by: rhu90

nice cs...waiting 4 the update...

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

Welx!

Yes, I am sure I am about to know her a lot more now. 😳 Completely opposite you say. Nice, I would love to see the two worlds clash together. Yup!! Oh yes.. more than that, our personalities are complete opps. But still, we get along perfectly.

Hey I said I was shocked. I know you cant go on that lines, but the title you or deetha who ever picked is intense alright. And as you know the cover and the title of the books speaks loudly. I gave her the choice to pick between the two.. those two are the one's I had in mind.. Wasn't sure whether to give it english title or hindi

Hmmm I will find out soon enough if Amorous fits well or not. :p JK I am sure it does. lol, even i'm waiting to see if it does :P

I can read between lines. Just for that I had to turn the cover page. mmhmmm

I am sure in next two years, you will have improved and stepped out dramatically. yea right... next two years.. we'll see how that next two years turn into next two decades and still won't have improved 😆

No need for excitement now. That grin does not suit you! :p Dimwit

Oh are you trying to keep me on staying put with my comments. I was surely going to make this and the replies within this comment the last of it for a long while to come. Hmm still not sure, may go back to likes or not. Will decide later on. Nooo! Don't!!! THis is different and I NEED your views!!! WE NEED your views?!! And if not for me, comment for DD? 😳

Hona padta hai. Other will just put you in Merlin's place and through food at you virtually, I can do that for real! 😆 *Sigh* I miss this show, why did it had to end. OH NO!! Not that place again!! Poor Merlin.. Arthur always puts him there 🤣 Never get tired of rotten food! 😆 Ion Know... I haven't finished watching yet.. not over for me 😛

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

You are not bholi !

You should have expected a reaction as i am sure you knew what the word originally means. If you don't than I am not sure how it ended up in the title in first place!

Originally posted by: deetha

i m right then *as if i did a big discovery 🤔*😛

haha and yeah u can count on me nothing of such will be seen in this one... even though i think khushi as my friend more than a girl younger than me * i meant a sis* i will never ever let something of that sort come up... 1. LB aisa kuch nahi likhegi ...atleast i know this much right.. i never have till now in any of my works and i don't plan on either... you, dd, and monu, both know how and what i write.. and secondly its kinda awkward for me to write such stuff with her... lol *awkward moments...* and no worries even i would do the same when it comes to my sis... its natural... and moreover i wont allow coz she is not of the correct age to think of writing a adult work meri behna 🤗

its just to the title...