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Posted: 12 years ago
going to update it dear😊
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Originally posted by: taanibaby

indu di...!😊

if u r der in fb... this is an edit frm myself!!! 😃
actually its a gift to u... tht u gave us chaahat... 🤗
itna khaas nahi hai... bt m nt getting hw to upload a pic in this box... 😕
isiliye... agar koi kar saqta hai... toh pls do it wid my own credit! 😳
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=145594545605861&set=o.475704622454224&type=1&theater


thanks a lot my dear loved it loved it loved it a lot🤗..
m gonna upload it with next update
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hey i just finished reading all the parts.. i must say it's an amazing story ur a fabulous writer i loved chaahat she's choo chweet .. n for the last part hope nothing happens to taani ..thank u for pming me
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Chapter -28

Sharon explained the address to rey , and she went to their house with the kids . Swayam had already reached the house . as soon as Sharon got out of the car, swayam went near her.. he was trembling " Sharon, what happened , tell me … how … how did this happen …."

Chaahat started sobbing. She started pulling swayam's pants "mamu, mamma ko kya hua… vo kahan hai… chaahat k pass kyu nahi aa raha hai… kyu mujhe chodke chali gayi… kahan hai vo…. Bolo na mamu…" swayam bent down on his knees and hugged chaahat and caressed her back

"chup ho ja gudiya… mamma aa jayegi… mamu is going to bring her back, tum chup ho javo gudiya…."

Just then a car entered in. Sharon , swayam and chaahat looked at it …The door opened and rey stepped out.

" paapaa…….." chaahat ran towards rey , crying badly and calling him… rey bent on his knees and received chaahat in a hug.. he hugged her tightly " chup ho ja princess…chup ja gudiya"

" paapa , chaahat ko dar lag raha hai… mamma kahan hai… vo kyu nahi aa raha hai… chaahat ko mamma se milna hai…. Bolo na ,kahan hai vo…."

Rey hugged chaahat tightly , his eyes were also wet. He pulled chaahat from the hug and cupped her red cheeks "princess , if you cry like this, paapa will lose strength , chup ho ja princess,we will find mamma.. tum rona band karo…" he wiped her tears and lifted her in his arms and walked towards Sharon and swayam. Swayam couldn't believe what he saw .. how come this man stepped into my house n… how come this cheat is here … and … he is holding my neice… my sisters baby….. he walked forward and stood in front of rey

" Why are you here ???? who gave you the permission to step in ….?? And why are you holding my neice ??" he leaned to grab chaahat from reys arms .. but chaahat put her arms round reys neck and remained clasped to his body " nahi… mujhe paapa chahye… mujhe paapa k saath rehna hai… maamu aap paapa ko kyu daant rahe hai…."… swayam glared in fury into reys eyes …

" swayam, I didn't come to make an argument, I came to see my daughter and being her father , I have the right, but just now I came to know that taani is missing.." before he could continue swayam interrupted

"so???? Tume kya??? I am here to look after my sister , n I will find her , theres no need for strangers to bother into family matters!!!"

"swayam I need to know " rey took a step forward , he was also angry now , its getting over limits , how can swayam behave like this ??

" I said she is my sister Mr Reyaansh Singhania, I know what to do"

" and she is also my child mother , did you get that Mr Swayam Shekhawat… "

" STOP IT!!!! JUST STOP IT!!!!!" Sharon yelled "How can you both behave like this…. Hosh mein ho?? Taani is missing and the two important men in her life are busy arguing for their places … what the hell !!!!!! [ her eyes were welled up in tears and she was burning in anger, she was fed up with her husband and her best friends fight] don't you understand the importance of the situation??? It has been almost 45 minutes and each passing minute is dangerous…. We don't know where she is [she screamed at the top of her voice , anger blazed on her face]…. What happened to her and … and you both are quarelling with each other … disgusting!!!!!!... go and search for her!!!!! Atleast for this baby " she said as she grabbed chaahat from reys arms.. chaahat started sobbing on sharons shoulder while Sharon kept caressing her back

" I am going " both said in unison as they started walking in opposite direction

"STOP I SAID " Sharon roared from behind " both of you will go together "

" no theres no need for that I can find her on my own " swayam replied looking to his left

" she is my life , and I will find her at any cost, I don't need anyones help " rey said as he turned to the left

" paapa , maamu , ek saath javo na… chaahat k liye … mamma k liye , agar aap log ek saath ho to mamma jaldi mil jayegi… plss paapa … pls mamu … please…."

Swayam was seeing a baby taani pouting " please bhai …." As he looked at chaahats face .. he looked toward s rey who was already looking at him… he started walking towards the car and rey followed … swayam got in the drivers seat and rey on the front seat beside him

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Inside the Car

"swayam .. I think we need to inform the police "

" first we will search in the mall once more " he said opposing what rey said . But rey calmed down not wanting to make the situation go worse

They went to the mall and started searching every store showing taani's photo to the shopkeepers , securities and all

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Same time

Veer drove in his jeep into the porch of his apartment . he dragged taani out. She was still unconscious. he took her in his arms. And walked in ….he dumped her into his bed, an evil smirk adorned his face… he pulled a chair and sat on it , he grabbed his cell from his pocket and pressed some number ….

" hello " a man spoke from the other end … "hello… " the voice came again

veer smirked "you fooled me 5 years back with a beautiful thing , remember???" he asked sarcastically

"hello .. who are you … and what are you trying to say…" the voice replied from the other end

" its veer here shivam… "

" v… veer .." shivam repeated from the other side

" haaa"

"veer ,[ his voice reflected fear]… where are you now and what were trying to say" shivam asked from the other end

" you might have forgot , but I can never forget that deceit.. you cheated me , you tried to fool me ,[shivam couldnot register what veer was saying] but veer never lets go what he wished aur aaj bhi vahi hua , I caught her…"

shivam was shocked to hear what he said

"waise she looks the same even after 5 years ..[veer got down and moved to wards taani and held her chin]… hot and sexy …"

"veer ,what are you ……and taani, veer leave her … where are you .. damn!!!" shivam got nervous

Veer laughed from the other end "you loved her right… so used me to just to trap that rey and saved her… but veer never loses what he aimed …. I waited for 5 years to have her[his face blazed in lust] and now she is completely mine ,no one can save her from me … neither you nor her so called boyfriend nor that brother of her's " and he cut the call ..

shivam said a few more ' hello' s before realizing that the call has been cut.. he felt nervous … he was trembling in fear "taani, God!!! She is with that jerk " he clutched his hair not getting any idea of what to do

"rey…. I need to inform rey " shivam called his manager and asked him to find rey's number and to trace veer's call.. he was feeling so low .. whatever taani is going through is finally all because of his stupidity, his mistake ….

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Veer went to the cupboard and opened it, all bottles were empty "shit!!!" he stamped the door of the cupboard … he looked to the bed … taani was still unconscious , he grabbed his key and went out of the room. He locked the door from outside and went out to his jeep and drove off to get the drink.

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Having searched everywhere in the mall, rey and swayam decided to inform the police . they were on the way when rey's cell beeped . he took the call .

" hello.. rey???"shivam asked from the other end

"yes its me .. " rey replied . while swayam stopped the car doubting whether it had something to do with taani's case.

" rey , its me shivam" shivam said in haste

"tum…. [he tightened his fist, but then relaxed and continued] I don't have time to waste now , call later " rey was about to cut the call from the other end when shivam said "rey, taani…"

Rey felt his breathing stop… his mind was in fear ,whether shivam has again tried to attempt anything wrong with her?? "shivam tum phir se taani ko lekar kuch galat …" before rey could complete shivam interrupted " no rey, I cant do that , and I still feel guilty for what I had done to you people 5 years back, but now there is no time to waste , rey taani is in danger …" hearing shivam from reys mouth made swayam burn in fury "shivam???"

"kya ???" rey bursted out "tume kaise pata ??"

"rey ….veer…….he kidnapped her "shivam said from the other end

"veer…" rey repeated in shock , swayam was fully confused now , he didn't know what was going on , he just heard rey's replies …

"how do you know shivam??" rey asked , his words broken in between

"rey ,he has made his mind to take his revenge , he couldn't have her that time [rey clutched his fist, his eyes burned in anger, his whole body was trembling].. soo.. rey I have traced his address , go and save her , we don't have time to waste .." shivam recited the address and rey cut the call

" rey what … what is happening " swayam looked into reys eyes , his eyes reflected fear and concern… rey recited the entire thing to swayam … swayam couldn't connect anything "revenge?? What revenge ???" swayam asked puzzled

"swayam abhi e sab discuss karne ka time nahi hai hamare pass , we need to rush " .. rey replied

" ha.. haa" swayam drove the car to the address which rey said … his mind was full of questions " shivam…. Veer…. Taani…. Revenge…. Matlab jo Sharon ne mujhse kaha, vo " he looked towards his side .. rey was burning in fear and anger…

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Taani felt her head heavy , it was paining badly , she touched her temple in pain,… she couldn't open her eyes even though she wanted to… her eyelids flickered …

Veer opened the door ,inserting the neck of the bottle of alcohol into his mouth gulping the drink … taani tried to sit up and tried to open her yes "uth gayi …." Veer asked with an evil smirk taani show a blurred figure of veer in front of her eyes , she tried to open her eyes more …veer came near her and pressed her shoulder "kyu takleef ho rahi hai" he asked mockingly … she jerked off his hold and slid down the bed from the other side " don't even try to touch me .. you bloody jerk"

" don't shout sweet heart because even if you do so no one will come to your rescue , neither your boyfriend nor your brother " he said with a dirty smirk as he stepped forward towards her and taani stepped backwards

" I said don't come near me … door raho …." She pointed her fingers while he continued making his steps forward towards her…she felt her skin burn as she sensed his dirty gaze

" meine kaha na . there is no use even if you shout " he took his steps forward and grabbed her wrist , he snaked his arms around her , his fingers seemed to pierce her soft flesh..she tried to shrug him off with all her might , push him with her elbow , kicked him … but his muscular body was far strong .. he pulled her close while taani shouted and tried to jerk off… he lowered his face towards her nape while with all her might she hit him with her elbow and got out from his grip she tried to move off …he got hold of her pallu and pulled it out

" veer , chodo mujhe … meri ek bachi hai veer, chodo mujhe…"he pulled the sari and she came crashing towards him even though she tried all her might

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" rey I guess this is the address" swayam said as he stopped the car .. both got out in haste and walked towards the porch .. their eyes caught sight of the jeep with empty liquor bottles when suddenly they heard a shrieking cry " ahhh… chodo mujhe, veer …."

" taani " swayam and rey said in unison as they rushed to the door .. they stamped it open and got inside .. they looked on either sides when taani came running from a room with veer behind her … she was looking back while running and crashed onto rey's chest.." ahhh" she cried and looked up… "rey"she looked towards her side to see swayam " bhaiii" she cried in pain swayam and rey were burning in pain and anger seeing taani in that state ..rey held her in a side hug , holding her close to him protectively ..her tears made his shirt wet… they were burning his skin, his eyes welled with fury and rage … he gazed directly on veer ….veer on the other hand was shaken for a second .. how come this two are here ??? he gritted his teeth …. Swayam fisted his palm and advanced towards him and tried to pucnh him when veer kicked him on his palm … rey made taani stand by the side and advanced towards veer who was trying to kick swayam , he took a chair and crashed it on veers back …. Swayam got up… he looked into reys eyes …. And found his answer…. And then he looked to veer who was trying to get up … within the next fraction of a second swayam extended his palm to rey, rey joined his and together tightened it and they punched it on the bloddy jerk's nose… veer left huge cry as blood oozed from his nose … swayam stamped him on his head while rey kicked him hard on his manhood .. swayam pulled veer by his collar and rey smashed his face …both hit him black and blue and veer was left screeching in pain.. he could'nt even move his finger , he was smashed all over ….

Rey and swayam turned to taani… taani looked upto rey with teary eyes … his eyes were also wet ….. their eyes were already in an embrace consoling each other….. rey opened his hands wide and she came running to him and hugged him tightly … he crossed his arms over her , hugging her tighly plastering her to him, he wanted to take all her pain out of her … he pulled her from the hug and cupped her face .. her face was drenched in tears … he pulled her close kissing her forehead , her cheeks , her eyes wiping off her tears …..he pulled her from the hug and covered her with his shirt,she was sobbing all throughout …. he hugged her again … caressing her hair and her back… making her feel safe in his arms

Swayam's eyes were welled with tears .. he kept looking at the two….their pain…. Their care … their affection…he smiled in between his tears and then turned to the side with a soft smile …

taani's eyes caught sight of swayam " bhai…." She moved out from reys hug , and walked upto him "bhai .. aap teek ho na…" she pulled him to face her and frantically started checking his face and hand, caressing his bruises as tears rolled down her cheeks… he made her look straight to him "I am ok taani but tum…" he looked into her eyes , she burst into tears and hugged him .. he kept caressing her back.. her hairs…. as tears flowed down his eyes ... swayam pulled taani out from the hug and wiped off her tears ..and kissed her forehead "no taani , you will not shed a single tear more…you are my strong sister na …" he tried to smile through his tears cupping her face and wipping her tears….. she hugged him again . after a few minutes ,rey came towards them and said " swayam, taani, ab hume yahan se chalna chahye , chaahat bohot ro rahi thi and Sharon also was tensed I think we need to leave now .."

" ha rey you are right " swayam joined and then they left to swayams house

EXTENDED 28-B

Swayam stopped the car and all three got down ..

" mummaaa" chaahat came running towards taani… taani sat on her knees and received her in a hug… chaahat circled her arms around taani and started sobbing " mumma aap kahan thi… aap mujhae bina baataye kahan gayi thi.. chaahat ko bohot dar lag raha tha[taani caressed chaahats back and hugged her tightly]… mumma aap teek ho na… "chaahat pulled out from the hug and kept looking at taani's face …the little dolls cheeks were all red due to crying…taani cupped chaahat's face "ha chaahat … dekho mamma bilkul teek hai [she tried to smile to make chaahat happy] aur ab mamma aa gayi hai na to meri pari kyu ro rahi hai??... [she wiped off chaahat's tears] chalo smile karo.. " chaahat gave a small smile and taani hugged her and lifted her in her arms … she got up and saw Sharon standing some steps away with teary eyes … she kept chaahat down walked upto Sharon, both kept looking into each others eyes and then all off a sudden embraced each other and started caressing each others back " tum teek ho na taani…"

" ha Sharon I am okay" the girls kept sharing their grief and consoling each other…

Suddenly swayams eyes caught sight of rey walking away towards the door "rey!!!" he called from back, rey turned back, Sharon and taani also turned to the direction… swayam went near taani and held her palm and walked towards rey … he took reys palm and kept taani's palm in his … " you can take her … she is all yours ….. I am sorry rey for separating you both" he said looking into reys eyes

" don't tell that swayam, you were right from a brothers point of view , and I am sorry swayam , you were right,only because of me taani had to live a life of misery all these years , but I never wanted it swayam , I cant bear seeing her in pain, but …[he drooped his head down ], I made the mistake….. forgive me swayam…… I love her, I love her more than my life "

"I know rey and that's why I said that you can take her with you , I said it from my heart, I know that she will be happy with you, she will be safe with you…"

Rey took taani's palm from his and placed it back into swayam's … swayam ,Sharon and taani were confused now " I don't want it to be like this swayam… is baar mein puri duniya k samne usse apna banana chahta hoon …puri izzat k saath le jana chahta hoon…. I wanna marry her swayam…"

Okkk … so that was the biggest chapter of chaahat… I wrote the entire thing as one chapter as I know no one likes this phase of seperation … even I want the trio to be together… I want to see them happy, so I thought to end it up in one chapter

I had so many ideas in my mind for this chapter as initially I thought to write it in 2 parts , but then when I changed my mind , I had to put them away… I don't know … I am sorry if it didn't come upto your expectations , I am really sorry….

And one important thing scroll down to the post below for TRAILER TO NEXT WEEK …

BUT… BUT… BEFORE JUMPING TO THAT HIT LIKE , ELSE PAKKA I AM NOT GOING TO UPDATE THIS TIME [I know all are smiling as you know I will update ok but push the like button along with smiling] and then scroll down to next post

Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Trailer for next week

before the trailer , have a look at this ...


this was made by taanibaby ...
loved it na??? me tooo...
k so now here u go with the trailer for next week .. enjoy😉

chaahat giggled and ran upstairs with the plate of dough .. taani was getting fully irritated now her hand was full of the wheat dough she had been in the kitchen since 1 hour and was tired and now , she was sweating running behind chaahat , sometimes this girl gets too much naughty and is hell bent on irritating her…

Chaahat ran into their bedroom and taani followed , it was dark inside the lights were off and her hand was full of dough, she was getting pissed off , she turned to look for chaahat … where is she????

" mummaaa.." she heard a sweet chuckle from the door .. taani turned towards the door … chaahat stood with a naught grin .. before taani could utter a word or make a move chaahat graabed the door handle and locked it from outside

" chaahat!!!!!!!... door kholo…[ she moved towards the door and screamed] dekho chaahat …" suddenly she felt a warm grip on her navel…. A familiar cozy brush… without her knowledge her belly shriveled in……she felt a thousand butterflies in her stomach...he snaked his arms around her body "rey…." She said in her most feeble voice…..he brushed her silky locks aside from her shoulders with his stubble…she was totally helpless and felt week on her knees … she wanted a hold , but her hand was full of dough….he began running his fingers around her bellybutton …"r..reyy..…" she moaned as he wiped off the sweat on her nape with his stubble…..he blew air onto the hairs which still sticked to her back in her sweat…but they seemed immovable and remained glued to her back… he moved more close and lowered his cheeks onto them brushing them away… she arched forward , while he gripped her on her belly and pulled her close…. Slowly he took the dori of the blouse in between his teeth and pulled them out…….

Okkk trailer is done .. but don't forget , picture abhi baki hai😆😉

I know , I know, all u people out there cursing me na😆😆 ….. jaldi se like button push karo or comment karo, only that can make me update …😆😉.

Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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indu thanalu oru sambavam thane anu kto...pine e katha namuk vala directornu koduthal serial akam.athrakum super aa...e sitel njan keriyathu chahat and where is my dairy vayikananu.bt al are super writer..pine enu sony maxil new show yud promo kanu chunchan angane ntho namud khushi yud ya...
K dear
Pls update part 29 .gud ni8
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omg omg omg omg omg from now i really dont trust you anymore indu thumare brains insaan ke hai yan robot ke , i mean how did you thought about veer and shivam phone conversation seriously you are very intelligent ,

and taayam scene 😭 i had tears in my eyes it was dam awesome
this chapter is really the best chapter ever
and the trailer 😳 plzzz update soon i cant wait enymore
and yeah you are right we know you will update
i mean you have to update warna pm kar kar ke tume pareshaan kardhoonghi 😛 😆
brilliant as always 👏
and yeah the banner was very cute 😊
and now i have to go kuch tareef next time ke liye bi rakhni chahiye
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awesome chapter dear.
loved it.
but today my mood is very bad.
i just read that charmar are out of nb5...
so 😭 😭😭
loved your precap too.
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.
sorry jyada comment karne ki halat me nahi hun.
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my mud is so off m crying bcaz amar elemineted but chaahat make my day now i'm feeling gud after read chaahat..after all chaahat is magic of taarey..😆 Very long and awesome update 15 kick 10 punch 5 slap and 1 pinch from my side don't worry indu not to you but to veer 😆 😆

Awww chaaht look so cutee..trailer romantic.. Jaldi se picture bhi post kerdo..
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Grt grt grt
Trailer was tooo good
Update sooonnn

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