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Posted: 12 years ago
lol osm update lovd it😆👏👍🏼
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG... FABULOUS UPDATE👏...PLEASE UPDATE SOON😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hot update :)
Full of TaaRey romance dose... Thank you dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
sho cute.. loved it.. it was so hot.. n omg boys are too much.. lol.. update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am new on if and for the first time i am commenting...i just loved your updates they r superb and commendable they are funny+hot and full of romance...part 28th was osm and you know what i was blushing like hell while reading... waiting for your next update and plz do pm me😊😊
Edited by shrutijoshi_03 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutijoshi_03

I am new on if and for the first time i am commenting...i just loved your updates they r superb and commendable they are funny+hot and full of romance...part 28th was osm and you know what i was blushing like hell while reading... waiting for your next update and plz do pm me😊😊



First of all welcome 2 d if dear..
Thanks 4 d comment..
dats so nice 2 hear dat u liked my ff..
vl update soon n of course vl pm u..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Thanks for the comment everyone..
Enjoy reading this update..


Taarey ff:After goa:part 29


Swayam:taani kuch khane keliye banao na
Sharon:kyun
Swayam:kyun ka matlab hai
Sharon:kyun ka matlab sirf kyun hai
Taani:aap ruko bas 10 mintue main kuch banatha hoon
Sharon:ruko ,idar aao
Taani:kya hua
Swayam:mujhe bhookh lagi hai swayam
Sharon:to khudh jaake kuch banalo
Rey:hehe
Sharon:tum kyun he he kar rahe ho
aaj hum koi bhi khana nahi bana nahi wali,so i think u guys should cook for us
boys:no way
Sharon:to bhookha rahna aur na rehna tum sab ka option hai k
Taani:bhaabhi but
Sharon:not buts dear
Rey luks at taani
Sharon comes in between..
Sharon:kya
Rey:main apni biwi ko dekh raha hoon
Sharon:agar tum taani ko dekthe rahoge tum bhooga hi rahoge k...

VickY:gagu
neha:suna nahi ,jao ab
Nil:simmi
simmi:huh?
bharat:aashi
aashi:ji?
amaR:lini
rinni:no

rey:sach main tum apne pati ko khane bannane bejoge
taani:woh,
bhaabhi jaane do na,main sab keliye banathi
swayam:kyun isse bhi bigaad rahi ho sharon
sharon:accha
now guys quck move..

Boys in the kitchen..
Vicky:rey yeh bata hum aate main paani daalthe hain,ya paani main aata..
Rey:mujhe lagtha tum pura packet paani main daalde..
swayam:ape tumhe bed fodne ke alwaa kuch aatha hai
Nil:dude tujhe aata hai
swayam:kya
vicky:isliye sharon tujhe aise seedha rakhtha hai ,
aur dekh isko taani kaise support kar rahi thi..
amar:la ley le kuch leekh jao
bharat:ape isse kuch seekhna
Rey:ahem
swayam:ahem ahem karna bandh karo aur yeh socho,khana kaise banathe hai..
rey:main taani ko cal karthi hoon..
rey calls taani..

Taani and gals in the sitting room..
Sharon:kaun hai
Taani:woh collge ka ek student
woh play ke main shayaad..
Sharon:oh

Taani leaves d siting room..
Taani:kya hua?
Rey:mujhe miss kar rahi ho?
Swayam n boys:ape
Rey:ha ha
Taani:kya hua?
Rey:woh help chahiye the..
taani:to phone speaker pe daal dejeye aur jaise main keh raha hooon,ap log karthe rahiye..

After 2 hours..

Swayam:khana ready hai..
Rey:ha

everyone sits in the table.
Sharon:khana khushboo bikul jaane pehchane sa lag rahi ki nahi taani
Swayam:khana kya humare padosi hai
Sharon:kya
Taani:bahut accha bana hai
Rey winks at taani..
Taani blushes..
Sharon:oh hello
They have their lunch..

click here for the background music

At night Taani comes into d bedroom..
Sees d note n a gift..
To,
Taani,

Tumare liye,yeh gift pehnkar,bahar outhouse pe aana..

From,
tumara rey..

Taani blushes..

Taani wears d gown

In the outhouse..



Taani sees the outhouse being opened..
Taani gets inside..
Taani:rey kahan ho aap?
Rey closes the door n comes n hugs from d back..:bahut hot lag rahi ho tum..
Taani:keeps her hand on his chin:bahut andera hai..
Rey:andhera main jo baat hai woh roshni main kahan
Taani:kya
Rey smirks..

Rey puts on d lights..
It was beautifully decorated with lights n scented candles n table with chair n black board..

Taani:yeh kya hai..
Rey shows his hand..
Rey:chalo
Rey moves the chair n sits n lights d candle...
Rey sits..
N takes out d remote..
The lights go out, dr was only d lights of d candles...
A screen apears,
It was Taani's entry in the college to their wedding pictures..

Lights on..
Rey sees d tears on her eyes..
Rey wipes d tears..
Rey:ab chup ho jao,maine tumari chehre pe muskaan dekhne keliye yeh sab kiya tha,naaki tumari aankhomain yeh aansoo...
TaaNi:ha woh
Rey:pata hai khushi i aanso hai,
phir bhi,bahut roya hai tumne mere liye,ab bas..
Rey:so mere saath dance karoge..
Taani:ha,biwi hoon..
Rey:hmm
Rey gives his hands.
His arms around her..
He twirled her beutifully..
Lost in d eyes..
Taani:mujhe ab bas kuch nahi chahiye..
Rey:par mujhe to chahiye
Taani:kya
Rey:koi aur..
Taani stares at him..
Taani:jaan se mar doogi main aapko aur khud mar jaoongi..
Rey:arey baba,itna bhi gussa mat keejiye,maine yeh kaha mujhe koi aur chaiye,toh tumhe kya laga..
Taani:malab
Rey:mujhe ek nanhi si taani chahiye
Taani:mujhe kuch samjh nahi aayi
Rey:are sweetheart,i want a cute sa nanhi si baby chahiye..
Hearing this taani blushes..
Taani turns away..

Rey runs his hand thru her sholder n keeps his other arm on her belly..
Rey:toh kya khayaal hai..
Taani tries to walk..
Rey pulls her backwards..
Places a wet kiss on her neck ..
Taani turns n hugs rey...
Rey kisses on her forehead..
she closes her eyes..
Rey falls on his back on the white quilt with taani on him..
Taani keeps her hand on his face n kisses on his forehad n his cheeeks..
She was about to kiss him when rey pulled her down n lays on her..

Rey slids her gown n kisses her neckk..
Taani keeps her fingers on rey's hair..
He removes her earing n kisses in her ears..
He runs his finegrs from her forehead to her lips n kisses her lips..
Rey kisses her more passionatly..
Rey breaks of the kiss n removes his shirt..
Rey places kisses on her wildly thru her..
Taani clutches the quilt tightly in pleasure..
Their legs entwined together...

Precap: ahem..
sme intresting things o d way..


So guys,
I know choti si update thi,
but i am so sorry,
hope u all vl forgive me 4 dis boring sa update,
but next update pakka bahut intresting banadoongi...
But please dont forget 2 comment..
Silent readers comment please..




Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res!
Unres!!
Yay!! I m the first!

😳
i hope aap samjh gai hogi aapke update ka effect!
No words to describe it...
Precap se excitemnt kuch jada hi increase ho gai h...
So continue soon!! 😃
Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

Res!
Unres!!
Yay!! I m the first!

😳
i hope aap samjh gai hogi aapke update ka effect!
No words to describe it...
Precap se excitemnt kuch jada hi increase ho gai h...
So continue soon!! 😃



thanks 4 d comment dear..
samajh gaya😉
vl continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this update.
the way sharon forced gang to make lunch is too good..
taarey's romance... 😳

do cont. soon and thanks for the pm.

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