Taarey ff:after goa-part30-FF completed - Page 4

Thank u to all...I hope u all like my third part of the story...
PLease do comment on how u liked it...
it will be a great motivation...
Plse forgive me for d mistakes...


Taarey ff: After Goa-Part 3 -" Valentines day- "contd...


REY: aaj jaane nahi doonga tumhe.

outside the rehersal hall valentines day celebrations starts, music starts,d3 gang starts performing on KHUDHA JAANE...

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

Rey moves towards taani holding her pallu, taani turns towards rey, taani catches rey's hand, smile at him, rey winks at her..
Taani starts to walk, Rey places his hand on her stomach, Taani closes her eyes, holds to his hand,

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua.

Rey kisses on her sholder , taani turns n hug him, rey hugs her...
Rey cups her face,She could feel his breath on her, their nose touched each other, kisses her on her forehead, eyes, n kisses her on her lips, dis time taani kissed back tooo...taani could feel a shiver ran through her spine, rey was wishing dis moment would never end, Rey breaks d kiss n pulls her closer,

Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..
Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Kadam Ke
Main Nishanon Pe
Chalun Rukun Ishaare Pe
Tu Kahe To Khwabon Ka Bana Ke
Main Bahana Sa
Mila Karun Sirhaane Pe
Ho Tum Pe Dil Ki Baatein Seekhi
Tum Se Hi Yeh Raahein Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Main To Jee Gaaya


Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda...

They luked into each other, Rey moves closer to her ears, taani closes her eyes, whispers I LOVE YOU, Taani opens her eyes n tells, I love you too rey...

dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Chupa Lo Tum
Panahon Mein
Ke Daar Hai Tum Ko Kha Doonga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko
Na Nazar Laga
Ke Daar Hai Mein To Ro Doonga

O Karti Hoon Sau Vaade Tum Se
Baandhe Dil Ke Dhaage Tum Se
Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kya Hua

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda...


Rey kisses her on her neck, taani clutches on to rey's shirt, places her hand on his hair...
Rey was about to remove her pallu from her shoulder, A knock on d door,

They both gets into senses, Rey irritatingly askes "whos dat?...
It was Swayam..

Swayam:rey kahan he tu,kab se phne kar raha hoon, tune taani ko pick up kiya kya?
Rey n taani becmes uncomfortable hearing swayam voice, taani turns to other side n smiles...

Rey goes n opens d door,
Rey: woh yahi hai...
Seeing d candles, ballons, swayam felt odd n understud he came at wrong timing...
Swayam: oh, mein chalta hoon, mein tumhe yeh baatane keliye aaya dance shuru hogaya, tum aaja na,

Swayam see lipstick marks on rey's cheeks,

Swayam turns, Rey turns n walks, Swayam calls rey..

Swayam: rey suno 1 minute bahar aaana..
Rey: ab kya hai swayam..
Swayam:tum bahar aate waqt apna chehre se lipstick ke mark nikaal kar aaana...

Rey starts to blush...
Swayam:Bas bas bandh kar smiling aur bahar aajna...
swayam goes...
Rey goes in...

Rey goes n catches taani from back,

Taani: kya kar rahe aap bhai aaj jayaga..
humein abb chalna chahiye...

Rey makes a cute face...
Rey:abhi jaaana zarrori hai kya...
Taani: iss college ke gs aur ags gayab hai...log kya sochenge...
Rey:baataoon kya sochenge...
Rey moves towards Taani...

Taani runs away, Rey misses her hands to catch, taani laughs n tell...

Taani:mein toh jaa rahi hoon, apna chehra teek kar ke aana...
bahar miltha hoon aapko..
She winks n goes...

Rey..Taani ruko...

But by then she goes...

Rey luks into d mirror n smiles, n wipes d lipstick mark...
Rey goes into d College hall, luks for taaani...
Spots her chatting to d gang...

Taani sees him...Eyelock..
Rey was about to tell call her, d3 gang comes n takes him..
Rey:ruko guys...
Vicky:kya yaar rey tum kahan gayab ho jaata hai?
Nil:yeh mat pooch dude kahan tha? Yeh pooch kya kar raha tha?
Rey:kya kar raha tha matlab kya hai...?
Vicky:abe manaya tum usko?
Rey:haan(smiles n blushes)
Bharat:ape ladikyon ki tarah sharmaana bandh kar...
Nil:tumhne kya gift kiya usko...
Rey:oh shit! mein to uske baare mein bhool gayi...
All d3 gang:Ab toh tu gaya...




Precap: What will rey gift her...?
Rey dances for her infront of whole college.
How will taani react ?
Rey takes her to his house next day...


Thank u all for d Amazing response...
i dont hve words to express how i feel...
This s d first time i am writng a story n getting such wonderful Comments made my day..
Thank u all for d comments...
Please forgive me for my mistakes n errors...
Please do tell n comment on hw u liked my Third part...
Silent readers plse do comment...
Plse tell me if u guys want d Fourth part...


PART 4-PAGE 7

great story...you have done a wonderful job

Originally posted by: 09cutie

its awesome ya plzzz pm me yaa
😊

i have updated Taarey OS: After Goa-Part 3 Valentines day...
plse do comment and tell me how u liked it for my motivation and whether i should write fourth part..i apoligise for my mistakes...

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Hey I read both parts and it's so beautifully written, I love that Taani give Rey a hard time before she forgive him lol. Aww its so romantic what he did for her in rh and his forgiveness dialogue was awesome. Hmm Rey catching Taani pallu omg so romantic can't wait to read more plz continue soon.

i have updated Taarey OS: After Goa-Part 3 Valentines day...
plse do comment and tell me how u liked it for my motivation and whether i should write fourth part..i apoligise for my mistakes...

Ww..its butiful..taarey r so hawtt...plz pm me

It was such a romantic update, aww Taarey romancing was too cute too bad swayam came at the wrong time lol. Hmm Rey has lipstick marks on his cheeks, the boy teasing him and he blushing is so adorable. Plz continue and u doing a fabulous job.

hey awsm update dear😉 n thnx for pm 😛

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Originally posted by: asmamember

Welcome to this forum.

Awesome.loved it.update soon.

i have updated ON

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PLSE DO READ...

Originally posted by: dh19

nice and cute.
do cont. soon.
thanks for the pm.

i have updated on

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