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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww... its really amazig..wondering what will rey do to manaofy his taani...love it...and update fast and please PM me =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start...
do continue n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome story, looking forward to what rey will do on valentines day
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much 4 a warm welcome,
I felt wonderful after reading everyones comments and likes,
Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u so much...

Part 2- Taarey ff:After Goa- VALENTINES DAY...

In college..

Taani, aashi, sharon all were busy in preparations. Rest of the gang were rehersing for their performance tonight...
Rey walks in.. Rey comes and stand behind taani...Tani was so busy in work, she didnt notice.
Rey calls taani in phone..Taani sees phone buzzing, when she saw it was rey, she keeps the phone upside, rey moves a stepback n leaves. Taani suddnely feels a rush, she turns back, but sees nobody. Rey sees it n smiles.

Aashi: aap abhi rey se gussa types ho kya?
Taani trying to change d subject.
Taani: aashi woh lighting check karo woh zyaada bright hai..
Sharon: Taani issme rey ka koyi galthi nahi thi, mein,swayam,nil,n aashi ne jaake use dhoke se andar car pe bhulaya, phir use bataya ki hum goa jaa rahe hein, bechara mana kar rah tha, hum hi use mauka nahi dhiya, tumhein batane ka.
Taani ignored what sharon told.
Taani: sharon bha, sry, sharon mein ghar jaa rahi hoon, aap ashi ko batana ki saare arrangements hogayi hai, bas woh lighting check kare, mein ghar jaa rahihoon dress change karna hai, aap kaho tho mein aapko drop karoon?

Sharon turn towards Rey in helpless face.

Sharon: Nahin taani, mein aashi ke saath jaaongi, tum jaao.
Taani: teek hai...

At Taani's house.

Swayam: tum itani jaldi wapas kyun aayi?
Taani: kaam poora hogaya bhai, dress change karne aayi hoon.
Swayam: iam going now, should i wait for u ?
Taani: nahi bhai,aap jao, i will come own my own, bhabhi aapko wait kar rahi hogi.
Swayam: tum teek hona ?
Taani: aap jao.

Swayam leaves n calls rey.
Swayam: woh ghar par akheli hain. tum aa jana..
Rey: ok swayam,
Swayam: uski face pe smile zarror wapas lana..
Rey: woh to mein definitly le aaongi..


Taani gets fresh n takes out a red saree.
She wears beautiful diamond earings to go with it... leaves her hair open..

Rey comes infront of her house n wait for her outside d car leaning to it with folded hands.
He see her in red saree n gets mesmarised of her beauty.

She closes d door n suddnely her phone rings.it was swayam...
Taani: ha bhai mein tyaar hogayi, mein nikal hi rahi thi.
Swayam: tum rey ke saath aa rahi ho kya?

Taani started walking n she see Rey.
Rey smiles at her.

Taani: mein akeli hi aa rahi hoon. cuts d calls.

Rey's smile, goes away.

Rey walks upto her.
Rey:mein tumhe lene aaya hon.
Taani:accha mein khud jaa sakhti hoon.
Rey: Iss waqt tumhe koi auto ya taxi nahi milega, aur tumhe college opening ceremony se pehle pahuchana hein to,
tumhe meri saath aani hogi...
Taani: teek hai, chaliye.

Rey Opens d car's door for her.Taani gets in.
Rey gets in.He comes close to taani, n raises her hand towards her cheeks,n tells u look beautiful, taani closes her eyes, he suddnely pulls down seat belt,taani hearing d noise opens her eyes.

Rey:woh tumhne seat belt nahi pehni thi isliye ...(n winks at her)
Taani gets irritated n luks outside.
Rey:abhi bhi naaraz ho mujhse...
Taani's Phone rings.its aashi.
Aashi: kaha ho aap, celebration shuru hone aabhi thodi hi time baacki hai..
Taani: mein aa rahi hoon..

Rey gets irritated n catches her phne cuts it.
Taani gets shocked.

Rey:Mein tumhe kal se baat karne koshish kar rahi hoon aur tum mujhe taalthe jaa rahi ho..
Taani: kya batana chahte ho aap?
Rey stops d car infront of d college. He gets out, n opens d door, n gives his hand to taani, mere saath aajao...

Taani gives her hand...He takes her to rehersal hall N closes d door, it was full of darkness, Taani gets scared.

Taani:aap kahan ho? saari naarazgi ek tharaf,aur andhere ki dar ek tharaf.
Rey comes near her, she feels his breath on her...
Suddnely, lights turns it..

She was surprised of d red baloons, candles, flowers n suddnely rey falls on his knees ,

Rey: mereliye aaj tak valentines day ka koi matlab nahin hai, agar aap kisi se pyaar karo to har din apni pyaar keliye jeena chahiye...
par mein ek galathi ki mene apni pyaar ko chot pahunchaya, uske liye mujhe koi saza manzoor, par tumse door nahi,tumse baat kiye bhina jee nahin sakti mein , saans nahin le sakti, tum mujhe complete karti ho taani..tumhare bhina har pal marthahoon mein,

hearing this taani sit down n keeps her finger on his lips, n tells
Taani: bhoolke bhi marne ke bhare mein baat mat karna rey,
n she makes him gets up, rey wipes her tears away..
n keep his hands on her cheeks n tells i love you taani n dey hug...
Rey breaks d hug n comes forward to kiss her, he kisses her on her forehead, eyes, cheeks, n when he was about to kiss on her lips, she shies away, rey catches her sarre's pallu,

Rey:aaj jaane nahi doonga tumhe...






Precap: Rey taani shares an intimate moment.
What will rey gift taani...?
Taani rey, swayam sharon n rest of d gang performs a beautiful romantic track on d valentines day,..


Hope u guys liked my second part...
Please do forgive me, if i hve made mistakes...
Please do give me comments and likes for my motivation...
Silent reader splease commnt...
Thank u all for amazing respnse on my first part...
Please do tell me if u want third part...


PART 3-PAGE 5


Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
aww... its so amazing... love rey's dialogue... <3
waiting for the next update =] and thanks for the PM...do update soon =]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amajing dear😊 mindblowinggg story written by u n precap omg😛 mai kya kahoo i dont know i will wait for nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice and cute.
do cont. soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Plz pm me.
And nw it's super se uper ki story.. :-P

dance nxt part plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
wow yaar damm romantic n rey
dialogue was emotional it touch my hrt
yaar oo man damm romantic i luv it
n per-cape haaye intimate movement
cant wait n do make it hot plzz n long haa
plzzz n thanks for PM n do put nxt prt soon
n yeah do PM me haaa plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
omg omg this was so romantic
uff rey catches her pallu☺️ shit m blushing like hell
pls update soon thnks for d pm🤗

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