Taarey ff:after goa-part30-FF completed - Page 5

Originally posted by: 09cutie

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Taarey OS:After Goa(part 3)"valentines day"-page-5

Awww hawtt and romantic..
Rey dance and taani reaction hmm
Plz next Update soon..

cute and romantic update.
do cont. soon.

Wow yaar super u have writen fabulous romantic part i am very much exicted for rey dance plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz do update soon hats off to u

di its awesome just loved it...

Taarey ff: After GOA Part 4 " valentines day"- page 7

Taani with d girls in hall..
Neha:bolo bolo taani rey ne kya gift diya..
taani remembers d kiss n blushes..
Rimmi:aisa kya sharmana ha?
Sharon:meri best friend ne kuch to diya hoga...?
Taani:aisa kuch nahi diya...!!
ALL d girls: what kuch nahi...no gift n rey, no way...

Rey with d boys...
All boys:ab to tu gaya...
Rey:mein kya karoon? abhi itni mushkil se ek naarazki door kiya hai, naaraz hone ka wajah bhi aagaya...?
Swayam enters...Swayam feels awkward to face rey...
Swayam oddly stares at rey's cheeks...

Nil:tum usse pehli baar dekh rahe ho kya?
Swayam:aisa kyun poocha...?
Vicky:too usko aisa kyun dekh raha jaise uske gaal par kuch hai...
Rey:mere gaal pe kya hai, kuch bhi to nahi(rey mumbles) (thinks maine to marks wipe kiya tha)
Swayam:kuch nahi...
Swayam:tum log kya baat kar rahe de?
Rey:woh meine taani ke liye gift lana bhool gayi..
Swayam:oh
Swayam:what? kya beta jijaaji, chalo kuch karte hai...
Swayam takes rey to a side n tells, dance for her n hands over a box...

Lights go off suddenly...
Spot light comes on taani...taani wonders whats happeing suddnely...Lights falls on rey also...
Taani smiles seeing rey...

Tani and rey eyelock...

Rey infront of d whole college...
Rey:Tumhare liye...
Music starts..."TUJKO JO PAYA"
Pulls taani hands..
All d d3 boys with gals..
taani and rey on d middle...
Rey and taani lost in each others eyes n dancing...

music stops...

spot light on rey...

Rey falls on knees, opens a small box of tanisq..
taani gets shocked and surprised at same time...

Rey:i love u...
Taani starts crying...

Alll d3 gang: awww
swayam feels odd...(aaj tak maine sharon kuch nahi diya, dekho mere saale ko)


Taani : i love u tooo...


Everyone claps...


Fireexit...


Rey n taani sitting in steps, taani luking at her ring..
Taani:muje laga aap gift lana bhool gaya tha..
Rey:bhool to gaya tha main...
Taani...oh to mein sahi tha...
Rey:tum naaaraz ho kya..
Taani fakes angry but seeing rey's cute face of getting tensed she starts laughing..
Rey sighs a relief...

Taai:agar aap se ek din naaraz rahi to aap mere liye yeh sab karooge to humseha hi naaraz rah sakti hoon..
Rey gets angry..N pulls taani closer...Taani understood she pulled a trigger here..

Taani:mein
Before telling anythng, rey's lips crushed her lips...dis time it was not shiver dat ran through deir spine, it was rush,dizziness on taani...rey pulled her closer, rey broke d kiss to breathe, n luked into taani's face...taani had closed her eyes...

Taani opens d eyes...
luks down...
Rey cups her face, moving her hair locks side...
Rey:agli baar mujse narraz hone se pehle mere kiss ke baare mein soch lena..(winks at her)
Taani blushes n tries to walk away..
Rey pulls her hand n tells... I Love you..
Taai.. I love u too...


Precap:rey takes taani to his house for a date...
What is store in for taani..?
will it change their relationship to next level..?


Thank u for comments guys..
I was able to pm only a few as i am new member , i can only pm a few..
so plse forgive me forthose who i hve missed out...
Thank u again for the warm welcome...

Please do tell me how u guys liked d fourth part...
Please forgive my mistakes n errors...

PLease do gve me comments so that i know i should continue writing or not...
Please do tell me whether u guys want next part...
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PART 5-PAGE 10

awww... i love it...it was so cute...

Wow what an amazing update, I love it
Swayam is too funny lol, aww poor bhai is uncomfortable with seeing lipstick marks on Rey lol
Love the idea that Swayam give to Rey it was very romantic and beautifully written
Omg their kiss got me blushing, plz continue soon recap is veryyy interesting and exciting.

loved it dear.
cute romance and dance.
cont.soon.