Kalarikkal House [5]: new thread link posted p.152

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vaish912

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

What a moment to stop there Devi ... Marry me ... N ...what next ... Want some more action here ... That was awesome update ...

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

woah! wata chapter for a new thread.. double congrats!

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nj.123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

'Marry me?!'

Oh God I really really need to know how Kashi is going to react. The last bit was one of the biggest cliffhangers you've ever left us with. It would be great if she says yes and they both get a typical happily ever after, but given Kashi's stubbornness and wit I wonder if she is gonna give him a 'yes' that easily.

Now about the rest of the update- I'm so glad she cried her heart out, she deserved to let go and spill out all the pain. Her silence and calm was starting to scare me. And I loved how you described the scene and its similarity to what happened when they first met, it somehow gave a nostalgic feeling and brought out how a few days changed them so much.

Thank you for the recent updates. I loved reading each one of them.😊

Edited by nj.123 - 12 years ago

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Kshweta

@Kshweta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I gave the fiftieth like on this and there are sure many more to pour in. What is it that makes you write so naturally. I have always been mesmerized by the way your write, gets me totally engrossed. I could actually feel him whisper in my ears the last two words in the update. Simply amazing. Devi you Rock!!

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nam_adi

@nam_adi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This is one of the most awesome updates...they are so made for each other...loved this one!

Congrats on the new thread.

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Sindhu

@sree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Great Update and beautiful.

Thank u

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sowmiya128

@sowmiya128

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Oh my! I think I read EACH line multiple times!! *sigh* So gripping!! Loved Arnav's "proposal!" It was so..."Arnav!"

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

i am flattered... what a exhilarating update Devi.. just mind blowing..

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ashred12

@ashred12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

congrats on new thread...ch.55 reminded me of kashi as d naughty kid n arnav her babysitter...ch.56 was dramatic with their roles changed as lovers.. :)