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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

it is beautifully written piece

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I'm not a writer 😛 Though I do enjoy writing when I am bored.

Thank you SO SO SO much for the compliment. It truly does mean A LOT to me that you think so highly of this OS. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much that you gave this OS the honor to follow their stunning consummation scene. That means the most!

Thank you again!

Originally posted by: Number.one.fan
My first question, Are you a writer?

This was so beautifully written, undoubtedly the best I have read on Arnav and Khushi's consummation. And trust me, I have read my share of such one shots. Everybody has their own way of writing, but yours had a very pristine touch to it. If I ever imagine 'what happened in the farmhouse after the screen blurred' - it will be your version.
Hats off.
And its NOT gutter-y, infact very tastefully written. 👏

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Kash ek morning scene dekh pate...

nice..😊

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

beautiful os
very well written

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wow! This was so beautiful! Exceptionally well written!👏

I'd love it if u could give a similar account of the night thru Arnav's POV!

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Swetal

@Arshi2gthr4evr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautiful! Wow! What a lovely OS! It was great! Once again, beautiful<3

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MaryJane13

@MaryJane13

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ..Smita..
Wow! This was so beautiful! Exceptionally well written!👏
I'd love it if u could give a similar account of the night thru Arnav's POV!

I agree!😃

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Well this was...really really good and well written 👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

awww that was just beautifully magical
and from khushi pov too
ahhh the shall be together and in love with one another forever

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

god willing, they will be!

thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: chavvi16
awww that was just beautifully magical
and from khushi pov too
ahhh the shall be together and in love with one another forever

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