Amazing... What an update!!!
There was so much awesomeness in just one update... Completely loved every bit of it... There were so many lines in the update that made me smile and I went back to re-read them and yet many a lines that graced their presence in the chapter after the intended smiles crossed my face...
"And will you dance with a village girl if you were asked to choose?" Lord Arnav stared at her and, to his relief, she continued with her tattle..." Well, he had to stare because he was the one who was planning to ask a village girl, Miss Khushi for a dance or rather for all his dances in the evening... How much I love such situations when you are questioned on exactly the matter you fathom the most to voice/show and you are left perplexed... Or even better, you are left to thank your stars from being spared from adressing that little nuisance, just like Lord Arnav... Delighful indeed...
"A girl of class and elite I will choose, mother, but one who has class and elite in heart and not in her purse." Yes, Lord Aakash speaks well... He knows how to play with words, a worthy trait for a Lord like him... I really appreciate the way he defends the lack of grandeur and riches of Gupta Sisters by highlighting their good traits and mentioning their mighty good hearts...
"What did I do?" Lord Manohar looked at her, worriedly. This one had me in laughing fits... When will Lord Manohar realise that just the mere presence around an infuriated wife is the biggest mistake that a husband can committ!!!
"Well, tell Aman to ask Miss Kushi to a dance. I am certain he will be more than willing." I love Lady Anjali even more in these situations when she knows what exactly to do in order to make Lord Arnav act exactly the way she wishes him to... I love the power that Lady Anjali enjoys on Lord Arnav... The power to see his heart and read his mind... Lord Arnav is indeed very lucky to have a sister like her around him...
Also not to forget the way Lady Anjali approached Ram for a dance... she has such a loving heart and she is such a pure soul... Wish she had bestowed her love and entrusted her heart to a man more worthy than General Shyaam... A man who would have treasured her rather than manipulating her...
If it was a rat, she would scream; if it was a ghost, she would scream even louder'''. This one is my favorite in the chapter... When I read this, I mentally added... If its Lord arnav... No screams at all beacuse you will be gagged... And tada!!! That is what happened for real... Lord Arnav really loves doing that to Miss Khushi all the time... Taking control of her body and in turn, her senses and mind...
"he had lifted her up and was walking out of the kitchen storeroom" and "Yes, Aman?" Lord Arnav paused to ask casually, "Is something the matter?"... So much doing only to make Master Aman realise that Miss Khushi is off his grid!!! It would be rather better for Lord Arnav to just confess and take Miss Khushi into HIS radar rather than warding off others from her... And I laughed when I read "Lord Arnav paused to ask casually"... I mean there is nothing casual in holding a lady in your arms... The lady being the one who is learning swords to fight the man holding her and the carrier... Not even a need to mention what all he does to make the lady's life a living hell... I mean in perfect sense, they both despise each other(At least in "Aman's sense" if not perfect sense)...
"If you don't follow with me, it will only show you are scared to dance with me because you know I will defeat you." Just like Lady Anjali knows to make Lord Arnav do her bidding, Lord Arnav also knows to make Miss Khushi act on his wishes at times... yes, only at times beacuse rest of the times, all he does is only to ensure that the rebel inside Miss Khushi is always active and alive...
"And then suddenly, a face crossed his mind and he realized there was someone else who would be more pained on seeing Lord Arnav and Kushi dancing in each other's arms. " Yes... Of course, Lady Lavanya is in for a massive heartbreak... Its kind of Master Aman to think beyond his sense of loss and feel sad for someone else... It would be nice if Lady Lavanya chooses to give her heart away to Master Aman... He may not be a Lord but he will take care of her heart and will give her the love and compassion she has been craving since ages...
All in all... A wonderful update... Cant wait to read more and get surprised...
P.S: OMG!!! Did you just say that there will be 10-11 more chapters for the night to end? Nothing can be more fascinating!!!
Did you realise that your next update is scheduled on Valentine's Day or did you do that on purpose? Whatever... Waiting for an Arhilicious update!!!
P.P.S: I am thrilled that you like my comments... But the pleasure is all mine... Your updates has helped me resurface that person within me who was capable of expressing almost anything using words... I had lost her somewhere in my mundane job life... Thank You!!!
Edited by moon8387 - 12 years ago
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