My life! My way!- VirMan SS- 10th chap Updated! - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Virat threw hot coffee on Manvi?... thats really really rude!!
Awesome update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
virat what have you done,
you are dead😆

like the part,

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..~!!! Maanvi;s thoughts as usuall hilarious..~!!! i couldnt stop laughin reading her thoughts shez simply brilliant..Virat is such a bag boy...now he have to face thw worse...eager for the next n Thnks for the PM..~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol i feel like banging my head on a wall becaz i know u wont tell us the reason soo soon 😛 but after reading the update i cant stop myself from saying that u defo have brilliant writing skills girl u make me laugh soo much at some of their comments and hawww he threw hot coffee on her goshh that was extremely rude he owe some apologiesss
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update... loved the flashbacks, virman fights are always super cool... u wrte their clashes awsmly... eager to know what happened btw them.. cont soon nd thanks fr th pm...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!! 👍🏼 Flashback scenes are brilliantly written.. I love reading them.. Manvi and her thoughts are as usual hilarious.. But Virat threw that hot coffee on her!! 😲 That's very rude.. He owes her an apology.. So because of that one year contract she is still working with him.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all i am sorry for comenting so late!
Ok let me come to the update!!
I just love the way you connect the flashbacks with the present! Its just too good to read!
Virat and maanvi in their enemy avtars! Wow! Maanvi chose to work under virat just to take her revenge! Hmmm interesting! 😉
And virat he just lost his control in anger!! But i felt bad for maanvi towards the end! Virat poured hot coffee on maanvi!
And the resignation letter part!! I am just too curious to know about the rest!!
Continue soon and thnx for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh man!!! This was so bloody awesome!!!!😃👏
Despite manvi being such a spoil brat, I still like her nature...lol...you must be thinking that what I am talking about...but seriously man!!!! in this competitive world where everyone wants to win the race...& if you are not carrying such attitude, people will crush you under their feet!!!!! So, I just find appropriate whatever manvi does!!!!!! Though Virat is also not far behind, but as you said this story is more about manvi, so i would like to mention more about her!!!!😊

Okay about the update, it was amazing & gal your every update leaves me astonish!!!!! I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE THEM!!!!!😃😃
Here also manvi was right if you want to take revenge you need to be in front of that person!!!!! Obviously!
By the way, like virat I am also confused, why manvi had tear in her eyes??? I thought she would crush virat under the office table😆 but she on the contrary was crying!!!!!
I was also thinking that seriosuly she was crying because the coffee was hot or what????
Or maybe she had not felt that insulted till now!!!! But, wait a minute, here we are talking about manvi...who takes revenge & doesn't leave her enemies...so why didn't she took revenge & cried & decided to resign????
Please do answer this question in your next update...!!!!!😊 i am so confused!!!!!😕

By the way...the update was great, amazing, awesome & totally terrific!!!😉

Update soon soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOL...yeah I have that power that i can again get a life after death!!!!!!😆😆😆
You say that i am kuch bhi...but i say that you are kuch bhi matlab...lol...you pick small small things & make fun of it!!!!😆😆😆
Lol...now don't get afraid or something, i like this type of what can i say...a laughter dose!!!!😆
You love my comments, I would like to say, thanks for updating so great & awesome stories!!!!😃






Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart


hMmHm thnkss! they are quite famous for their fights, even in the show their meeting started along the same lines, so why not here too 😉 I wanted to create that effect where the attitude is "I'll bomb you the next moment" 😆 so I think it kinda felt serious.
I know both of them besotted with their king size egos here, ego in professions can cause serious damage I believe!
Ahem,, uh-hhuh I got your unsaid words 😆
Thanks will do!
Were you dead, woha, then how come you're commenting here, now I'm afraid of you 😆...haww you want our hottie to be dragged to the court, well I agree, having such hot image is illegal man, many ppl can die with the sheer hotness, just like you 😆

Anyways can I just say Ilove your cmnt 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm ur new reader :) n I enjoyed reading ur story.. Loved Manvi's attitude.. Specially all the covos with virat n those plastic makeup storage (3 girls) ur story is in good track.. Keep it up.. Excited for next part plz do pm me will be waiting
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