My life! My way!- VirMan SS- 10th chap Updated! - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..Superb, Amazing..~!!! and most important Hilarious...Damn this girl is one third of Virat n still irks n give him back what he deserves..Maanvi's thought in start for Virat is Wow...but then y will she admit...out all their challenge..this has become 1 xciting game...waiting fr the next n Thnks for the PM..~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm update with flashbacks... loved manvis funny thoughts nd talks..:D.. waiting fr th reason of their break-up.. pls serve it to us in th next update...pls.. thnks fr th pm ...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update!! 👍🏼 The way you have included the flashback parts in the update is just awesome ⭐️.. So Manvi wrote something about him in a magazine and he made her boss throw her out of that job!! Interesting start of a relationship 😛.. Loved the pizza hut scene.. Its hilarious 😆.. Their dialogues are very well written 👏👏.. Eagerly waiting for the next part now.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
oww we cant find out why they broke...😔
but liked the part😊

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay firstly, I loved your title "pieces of our past"!!!! It could not have been better!😃

I just knew it that the start of Virman's love story will be always with fight, always!!😉
But didn't knew that it would be this serious!!!!
Ouch!! Manvi directly aimed at hitting Virat's professional life as well as his ego, so the revenge had to be this dangerous, obviously!
Two people with full of attitude & ego will always clash like anything!!!!! Whether in work, friendship, love life or hhhmm...uumm(coughs)...& you know what!😉😆

The start which you have given to narrate their past is amazingly awesome blossom!!!!!😉
It was THE BEST, in the flow & flawless as ever!!!!!!👏

Do update soon...will be waiting!!!!!

P.S. when you described Virat's physique, Pictures of Kushal from his UK trip struck my mind...man he is looking damn sexy & hot in white shirt & black hoodie jacket...man I was dead at that moment only...!!!!! Uff!!!!!! He should be dragged to court for looking so hot!!!!!!!!😉☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vamps1996

omggg i enjoyedd this update like hell goshhh i was laughing like crazyyy each and every line was bang on thnx for the pm and update soon


Thanks vamps 😛! Will do...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandana123

Wow!! Manvi really f***ed his happiness...

Virat and Manvi met when she wrote something about him in magazine... and for that he made her lose her job!!! Awesome first meet...
Continue soon


That's an appropriate word..more of it would be told in the next update..
Yeah, you got it right. Scandalous meeting..😆 they had
Will do...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

Wowww the dialogues and thoughts of both were jjst soo crazy those were just hilarious...
Manvi being the tigress is soo much fun love eading her thoughts and views...
An awesome update ...
Was waiting for the breakup part bt still have to wait for them...
Update next part soon


Thanks kullu 😆 (my nickname for you, hope u don't mind)
Manvi is defiantly the tigress but Virat is no less..
Yeah actually, I had to first give some intro. The reason for their break-up, you'd get it once the flashbacks progress
Okay..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sindhu4karanika

awesome again!!!👏hmmm so super hawtt fight at da very first meeting itself!!! n yeh i like dis idea of urs like giving details b4 da breakup.i really would love to read abt their relationship progress may be u can include some virman romance in between too😳!! so u r equally balancing both their pov dats nice.n pls update soon.n 1 thing i love abt u is dat u r a frequent updater👍🏼.so pls update asap!!!!


Romance 😆 it'd be better if u don't ask me for it, I mean I can just write "the boy kissed the girl" parts but nothing beyond that. I prefer reading those scenes when some one writes 😆
I will! thnkss...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love that hobby of yourss!!! 😉 it makes me read more and more and fantasize! 😆
that disease is a part and parcel of my life it seems! 😆
Hey i am not gonna leave you untill u are over with the story! 😉 so the question of loosing interest is thousands of kms away! 😉
Ok so now the new update!
Now you brought back some memories!! Fights!! And those were really heated fights!! Did they even love each other?? 😛 ok that question just poped out of no where i guess! :P
But i love the way you put flashbacks in between the present storyline!
It makes me feel like a movie is going on and i am watching it!
U mentioned about pizza!! i really wanna have one!! i am a pizza fan! 😆
Ok now all i want is the next update! as always! :P i end up saying this after reading each and every story! :P Greedy me! 😉
Continue soon and thnx for the pm!!! 😃

I thought someone would ask that question and I'm gonna write how they fell in love in like say, 1-2 updates...Pizza..tsk tsk tsk you shouldn't have said, I'm hungry now. Will do tnks..😊

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