ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#921

so anjali went with khushi...

this update had a lots of thing in this...

payal akash relation...

arnav understood that for society khushi and him are nothing to each other...no matter what they feel for each other...

and khushi managed to make bubbly understand what payal is for her...

loved the update...thanks for update n pm :)

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#922

saiyoo

it was fabulous

right emotions at right place filled with right words wow

u r amazing dear 👏

dont ever say u were not 😡

perfect lines i cant express

it was touchy really

very sensitive feelings were expresses normally

i owe anjali and u too for this chap

i want Arya - payal bonding in the next chap

akash-payal was gr8

last line stole the update "you"

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#923

Oh wow! this was so well written...especially the last part...i had goosebumps reading the last word...

I'm sure Arnav is gonna be there before the sun even rises...ok maybe a little after sunrise :P But i really do hope that nothing happens to her babuji...Payal would be devastated!!

Great chappy this one!

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9424976

@9424976

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

AHH THE LAST LINE! Too perfect! i loved it a ton!

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#925

Why is khushi crying... Hope everything is going to be fine...

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#926

d last word 4m Khushi was d best..👍🏼it was lyk..i dint read his convo..wen she was colin..i jumpd 2 d last lyn..n thot did he do nethin wrong dt her Dad got heart attck?is he newhr at fault?bt den read her questions..do yu need nethin..YOU!!wow..:Dtooo cute..:)Aakash n Payal's part was amzin as well..:)\i loved dway Khushi xplnd Arya abt Payal..n hw Payal's amma n bauji had adopted Khushi..Payal bein der real daughter cudnt go n meet her father..whreas Khushi was able 2..:)Arya's bond wid Khsuhi was amzin..:)she has strtd cnsdrin Khushi as a part of her family n lyf..:)loved d Raizada's concern 4..dese Strangers..tho Arnav k office me Khushi wrkd..yet dey wer close 2 her..n nw her family too..:)Anjali too went wid Khushii..she knows all d probs dt z abt 2 cum in d business..i hope evry1 specially Arnav wud soon cum 2 c d real syd of Shyam..:) bein sooo nyc..:)loved it as alwz...(need nt 2 say..)thnx.:)PS i dint find d updte short..:D

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#927

Very well written!

I loved how Arnav realized that no matter what he wants and feels for her, in front of society he is not able to offer her anything. I hope he makes a decision to bring Khushi home for good.

The ending was just perfect, all she needs to feel complete is him.

Thanks for the PM.

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#928

Aww arnav, u r realising very wel wt 2 do wit ts relatn i tnk . . And anju too hav clearly joind ur dots n formed a line, showg wr u stand, bubbly s cute. .
Payash . . Wow !
N s she missing hm. . ?
Storm ? Thanks fo d pm waitg fo nxt