ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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priya

@silvia1999

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#901

awsum update...
Loved the way khushi explained abt payal to arya.
Last bit is lovely

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Don't know whyyou are apologising. This is one of the best chapters of this ff. I loved it. Loved Anjali and how she has become a sister to Khushi, going with her to Lukhnow and managing everything for her.

The mystery with Anjali, Shyzm and Aman and the files continues. Hope one day you will tell us what is Anjali doing.

Loved the closeness which is developing between Arnav and Khushi. Arnav has started feeling that Khushi is an integral part of his life and poor Khushi is missing him. Loved the ending.

The Aakash Payal conversation was sweet. Aakash tried to perk up her spirits with his silly conversation and then consoling her was very cute.

So for me it was one of the best updates so far. In any case you excel yourself each time you write an update. Each one is better than the last.

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#903

Ohhh it was a great update! They may not be together... but they r always together...they are in love..n how! I just love this story for d way u write their longing! d way they find peace in each other...how they are each others home! they belong to each other...supern line.

the way u wrote..

He meant nothing to her...everytime as a conclusion... it was almost like a poetry line ending wid rhyme... but prose ending wid d same thought here!

my fav part has to be d ending... d way she said you was just awww

lastly payash scene was cuute... the r witty.. 😊

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#904

This update was so emotionally engaging at all levels. Firstly I love the way the Raizada family got into action to help out Kushi and her Bauji. Bonds of the heart are stronger than those of the blood. Secondly the little chat between Kushi and Arya was so beautiful. The way you have written this Kushi as someone who can reach out to a kid, is beautifully explained in this chapter. I loved the way she convinced Arya to take care of Payal. heartening movement Saiyyu, really.

And then finally the realisation of love...main ab kya kahoon. Is love only love that is declared. Because to me this is equally a strong love story. They way they complement each other, take away each other's pain, the way they reach out to each other, the way they say everything without saying anything at all... sigh.

And the best part of it all... they have been able to disengage their hormones and think and feel with their heart.

Love what you are doing to this story.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

The storm will hit? What's going to happen?

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Very nice chapter! I loved how Arnav was determined to take care of her every little need. Their distance has made them crave each even more! I loved how Anjali has stepped in as a big sister to Khushi, taking care of her every need. Along with Arnav who is inquiring about the smallest of details.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#907

😃

Arnav realises that their relationship needs to move to the next level ...

as what they share right now is not accepted in society ...

Anjali makes him realise the inevitable ...

"Chotay listen to me well. You are Arnav Singh Raizada and journalists wait for opportunities to catch you in compromising positions. I know you want to… you want to… to hold Khushi. But this is a public place. One picture or video will lead to a scandal. Do you want Khushi's face to grace every newspaper and news channel across India? She is dear to you. But to them she is no one to you. You are understanding what I am saying, aren't you?" ...

The ending was really cute ...

"Are you alright? You need something?..."

Khushi finally answered one question, stopping him from asking anymore.

"You" ... ❤️

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#908

lovely chapter
hope her father is ok

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ace13

@ace13

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#909

beautifully written chapter..
it defines the relationships very well .
now we got the calm before the storm,we need the storm sooner

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ducky_anne

@ducky_anne

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#910

Don't let babuji die! Please no!! And what about Payal and Arya? I was hoping some relationship would be formed between them..are they thinking about getting her married? Oh God. I'm stressing out!!!!