Res.
Edited.
.. And yet again it was a great update.
The way you showed the perfect potrayal of emotions of each of the characters, the dialogues, Arnav's silence, the maturity of the characters and the decisions that were made were Flawless.
The two contradicting Parallel realities were brilliantly shown-
Arnav is closest to Khushi in all possible ways and
the disturbing fact that in the eyes of the world he was nothing to her.
Arnav doesn't feel the fulfilling feeling of being at home because Khushi was not there.
.. Khushi, too, doesn't harbour the warmth of being at home because her heart resided where Arnav resided.
This was perfectly written showing how deeply they missed each other.
I really hope that Arnav does something meaningful to rephrase Anjali's line-
"She is no one to you."
.. And at last the "you" which is unexpected and foreboding, owing to the fact that you said a storm is on its way.. Surely, a dangerous cliff-hanger.
Mama-ji - So, kind and caring Mama-ji got footage in this story.. In the show, he was blatantly ignored. Sigh. His comforting and sensible words to Payal were great.
Mami-ji - She is a sweet,caring and considerate person here.. someone whose depth of thoughts goes beyond colourful make-ups and expensive sarees. Loved her line-
".. We call you Bitiya and mean it.. ". The fact that she considers Payal and Khushi, to be like Anjali Bitiya is great to read. Her dialogues were one of the best.
Nani- She played the role of a matriach aptly by ordering Akash what to do..
Arya- She is her ever sweet self.. The scene where she cries with Khushi was fabulous..
Like Arnav, she seeks solace in Khushi and tries to give it to her, too.. I particularly liked the scene where she said that she won't cry for Anjali and Khushi as they are going, and also the scene where she promised to take care of Payal.. She is much more understanding and thoughtful than she is credited for, apparently.
Loved the line-
"Anything for you Khushi Didi.. "
Akash- He is such a sweet guy.. And I find him funny when he tries to apply cliched Bollywood tactics to woo Payal.. His persistent way of caring for Payal is praiseworthy.. The way he tried to make her feel anything but sorrow, was awesome.. The apology showed that he might be filmy but not at all shallow. He thinks very intricately and makes his presence known (unlike in the show where he used to bask in the shadow of his Bhai's glory).
Payal- Her way of handling emotions and be calm in the times of crisis is Awesome.
So, she willingly sought solace in the ever waiting arms of Akash.
It seems like the day is not far when she would make Akash feel like a lucky man. ;)
Anjali- The characterization of her character is one of the best. I like her strong personality- a balanced character who tries to help Khushi in her sadness, help her brother in business, shower love on her beloved and again take care about Arnav and Khushi's public images.
She was exactly ASR's sister while ordering Aman.I was filled with awe while reading that she is so sensible to stop Arnav at the airport, lest the media might fabricate stories about Khushi.. She made Arnav understand about the aftermath of his affectionate actions.
Shyam- I just like him very much!
Aman- So, the poor man has to face ASR's sister's orders,too.
Khushi- The best thing in this chapter about her was how she convinced Arya to take care of Payal, subtly bridging the gap between the two.. Her way of missing Arnav and the extent of feelings for him was very nicely potrayed.
Arnav- His helplessness at not being able to soothe Khushi is poignant.. His longing for Khushi is heart-breaking to read. Khushi became an integral part of his life. His realization that he can't see Khushi cry is the singular proof of that..
Hope the premonition which he felt doesn't bring something devastatingly humongous in its wake.
Thanks for the PM.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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