ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed* - Page 63

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sheetal is a wh**e Period. Its a lovely contrast that you have brought about between Khushi and technically anybody other than her who would enter his life as his wife. As of arnav turning up at sheetal's doorstep, hated him for doing that but then when we see his reaction to sheetal, we get a glimpse of the kind of life he had been living when he was hitched to lavanya, and then we get to see that remorse and self loathing in his eyes for treating khushi the way he did, we can't help but sympathize with him. It intrigues me about the resilience we have when it comes to arnav. guess its love.😉 And about Shyam, he doesn't have anything against him he is just insecure, scared of losing khushi due to anything that shyam might have said to her against him.And then coming to Khushi, i am amazed at this connection and understanding that she possesses when it comes to Arnav, the way she realizes he didn't sleep with anyone. And man did i love her in that bathroom, her eagerness to help arnav. And those questions that he asked khushi, that was pretty unfair on his part to dump all the brainwork on her and expect an answer to pop up from her regarding their feelings towards each other, i mean i takes 2 to realize that doesn't it? Now waiting to see how they figure things out. Enough of my yada yada yada. waiting for more.😳
😳Love
Anjali
P.S : Sorry for the length 😳
Edited by acklesmanic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww!!!

Khushi and Aakash? Someone or, should I say a few bunch, are in for quite a surprise!

Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
You are very very very talented the way you write the readers actually get involved in the characters and story. I do not want to miss even a single word of the story I enjoy reading each word comma and full stop of the story. The only issue is that it becomes very very hard to wait patiently for the next update. If you ever decide to write a romance novel I promise to buy minimum 10 copies.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...and just like expected Arnav did go to sheetal but did the exactly opposite...but loved it that he told her they would not have any buisiness.. and the way she decides upon what to do about the whole family...this woman is err...
loved how arnav realised about his fault and his understanding and then his silent apology and the way khushi reciprocates was so sweet...and the shower scene was extremely passionate...
hope they sort out things as soon as possible in this beautiful night...and loved loved loved the reference on farak padhtha hai...i loved how khushi vocalized it..it was truly heartening..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sheetal is another self-obsessed, manipulative opportunist... she sure has a very high opinion of her powers of seduction... to send arya to a boarding school, and that too abroad... am sure arnav and the rest of the raizadas will have something to say about it! her plans for their future were galling, and cold-blooded enough to leave me speechless... can't really be sure, but there seem to be quite a few similarities between lavanya and sheetal! anyway, loved reading of sheetal getting her comeuppance!
lovely to see that, in the midst of his recriminations of himself, arnav instinctively trusts khushi... very typical asr tactics: scared of losing khushi, so treat with brutality and hurt her heartlessly so as to strengthen the chances of losing her... 'act in haste, repent at leisure' seems to be the motto he lives by! damn right that one loses all sense of proportion when in love! can't make out why arnav is so suspicious of shyam... except for that hint about him having tried to gain custody of arya, his actions seem to have been on the up and up... anyway, only the truth about arnav's past could give us a better picture... hopefully, his mistrust of shyam will spur him on to reveal his past to khushi... what a fellow, it's the fact that she can read him instinctively and accept him warts and all, that seems to have scared him into taking refuge in his room... couldn't believe that, rather than facing or comforting khushi, he was so cowardly as not to apologise or to face what lies between the two of them! of course, his sense of guilt and confusion, combined with rampaging desire, may be clouding the issue, preventing him from seeing things clearly!
totally agree with his comment about his disastrous and screwed up thought processes! despite everything his body and mind are finely attuned to khushi's... nice wordplay: It was as if his entire control resided in the palms of his hands...
Shit! The water wasn't cold enough anymore must be the understatement of the century! good that arnav managed to control his rampant desire and calm khushi's too before things spiralled out of control... if they had made love, without truly clearing up their fears and insecurities or understanding why they were drawn to each other, it could have opened up a world of hurt in the future... though seemingly looking for the easy way out, arnav is asking truly pertinent questions that require answers... both need to face and acknowledge to themselves and to the other what is in their hearts
khushi's thought processes were very finely etched... her anger acts as a spur, making her reveal her true feelings... her words brought to mind the airport scene, making me feel quite nostalgic... "You can now use this knowledge to hurt me all over again!" is indicative of the fact that she knows very well how he will react...
"Sleep with me tonight?" will they just sleep in the same bed or is this going to be so much more? -- that is the question! can understand khushi's dilemma... maybe this giving on khushi's part [not in any physical sense] will ultimately inspire arnav to be giving in return!
eagerly awaiting the next update!
Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful chapter
and eagerly awaiting to read the next chapter
Picture abhi baki hai na 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
RAS SP ... YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME WANT MORE OF THIS

YOU NEVER BORE ME ...YOU ARE NEVER DULL

YOUR ARNAV IS BOLDER THAT THE BEAUTY ITSELF

HE KNOWS HIS LIMITS N HE MAKES HER FOLLOW THE RULES TOO

HE WAS ON THE VERGE OF BREAKING DOWN MANY A TIMES

BUT HIS CONTROL IS BREAKING KHUSHI


THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME ALERT FOR YOUR WORK






KKKA


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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope now Sheetal realizes that what she is doing with her life is totally wrong...she was thinking to enter Arnav's life and separate Arya from him..Well then she got what she deserved..

I can never hate Arnav..though the thought of him deciding to sleep with Sheetal did make me wanna kill him but I didn't hate him because I just cant😳

He now knows that how important is Khushi for him and his daughter and this is a development...I agree he acts first and thinks later but he learns from his mistakes...he has changed a lot!

Khushi is adorable..she is bubbly yet mature at the same time...she is so forgiving! she went through hell thinking Arnav might sleep with someone else but when she got to know that he didn't do any such thing and she forgave him? and then went inside the shower to ease his pain..she is so giving..I love her!

I loved the way Arnav questioned her and I loved the way she replied...he knows that he needs Khushi in his life and Khushi needs him...after Khushi's confession he doesn't have any doubt..

I loved the almost love making part...It was HOT..Khushi is getting bolder in her actions day by day and Arnav should love this fact ;) I cant wait to read what happens next..

update soon!
Edited by --Amy-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh how much I love your kushi. As you said she may seem weak but not. That is the thing which matter. Your spoiler make me wait eagerly.

Thanks for the pm and thanks a lot for always recommending other authors work.

Damn whenever i read your ff I always miss my sister. What a unfortunate souls me and my sister who have always shared the same pillow, after marriage being incommunicado. Sorry to say arranged marriage is like forced marriage.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update!! Your Khushi is really something - just love how you have characterized her in your story. No complaints about size from my end - anything you decide to grace us with is gladly accepted!!

Ritu

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