ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Awesome update.
I'm so happy that,Arnav didn't do what he planned to do with sheetal.
Shower scene was really hot.
Khushi has become so bold.
I just loved the way khushi said farak padtha he.
Update soon.

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Rasgulla,

Thanks for the PM :)

Wonderful update 👏 Thank you for not making Arnav do anything foolish...muah 😃

I am so so happy that Arnav didn't have anything to do with Sheetal and he actually realized his mistake :D Sheetal is one vile women..she is only in for her profit and doesn't care an ounce for Arnav. Good for him that he didn't fall for her trap.

Arnav and Khushi's scene was hot...more than hot I would say there was an emotional element to their scene. Me too liked how her duppata was seen with his clothes. Hopefully that would become a permanent scene soon ;)

"Faraq padta hai" is my fav scene. You wrote it well and hopefully Arnav gets it clear and well in his head.

Pls cont soon...

P.S. Thank for the long updates...loving it 😉

Edited by melonie - 12 years ago

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

😉 waiting for next part...

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sarb

@sarb

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Love the size of the update and its superb...

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Oh wow, I never knew that your writing will make my ears go hot someday, but after reading this update I couldn't get rid of blushing.

Arnav be damned if he did something so much as touch Sheetal,

All thanks to his stars he did have a good brain.

Missed Payal and Aakash in this update.

Do continue soon please.

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

This update was wow!...

Arnav was on the door of Sheetal but didn't stepped in leave far alone to have se* with her is not that enough to show us that he cares for Khushi, he loves her. I sometime felt to understand him 😕

Khushi other side she knows she can't live without him, she cares him as he does for her and even she is ready to spend the night with him ...

the relationship between them are so complicated...

but yeh as you said the night is still not over..

waiting...for BANG!!!!

"bang bang bang
bang bang zamana bole
boom boom boom
boom boom deewana bole
dhin dhaak dhoom
jhoom jhoom zamana bole
bang bang bang"

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arniepervaiz

@arniepervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Hopefully they will find solace in each others arms

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

This chapter brings out Arnav and Khushi's vulnerability when it comes to each other. Brilliant, brilliant writing.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

good going..well written..update soon..😊

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Awsome update just loved it... thank god he has came back... Sheetal is just arghh disgusting... aww there u go Khushi said all... the bathroom encounter... well do u really think I need to say how it was?? ok so here it is HOT... Khushi took such a courageous step... loved the update