ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

dfis was amazin..:)i thot Arnav only knows 2 play business business..n yes..:Dhere he played business business wid Sheetal..wen d chptr strtd..it was lyk..Sheetal z sooo artificial dt evn d barbie wud b ashamed..n her dsprtion..n her views abt Arnav..his daughtr..she dsnt evn no Arya's name..n Anjali..n Maami n Naani..aisa insaan hone lage toh duniya chal padi.:/n den ASR cumin in2 action..realizin evrythin..Khushi..Arya..his lov 4 dem..n evrythin..:D:D:Dden runnin back 2 RM..n his rooom..n Khushi noin he dint do nethin out//dt pissed him again..lolden der bath 2gthr..n a bit of romance..Arnav made her clea wt he feels 4 her..n wt he wants..Khushi 2 wants d same..bt Arnav z nt ready 2 take ds step soo soon,,happy wid his decision..:)i hope PAyal wont catch dem in d mornin..:)loved it,,:)thnx.:)

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#642

I just read the whole FF in one go.

Firstly, I am so glad I broke my own rule for this. (The one where I promised myself that I would read only completed stories)

Secondly, I don't have a proper comment for you. Simply because I don't know quite how to describe the various emotions I felt as I was reading it.

The complexity of the emotions you have described, the intricacy of the relationships, the attention to detail even when it comes to sub-plots, and of course, the icing on the cake, the sheer,explosive chemistry between your leads...all of these are just beyond words.

And I'm not just saying that. I really hope I am able to convey how much I love this story, and this one joins 'Unnamed' on my re-reading list as well.

One thing that stands out, thank you for giving us this version of Payal and Akash, among other things.

And your choice of title is particularly apt. For those of us who are still in mourning over the loss of a beautiful show and a once-in-a-lifetime experience, we will find our solace in stories like these.

My apologies for the inadequacy of this comment. I hope that you know that I have immense respect for the talent you have.

Now waiting for the update. Jaldi likho!

Because I want what Arnav wants. Let them DO IT!!!

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emmskay

@emmskay

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#643

ohhh good lord! dang girl how you write this thing. its just amazing!!!! just love how khushi know whats going on in that thick skull of our very own arnav. its just beautful the way you portray it. amazing amazing amazing and i am falling in love with arnav even more!!! keep up the good work!!!

much love

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

awesome and i love this khushi . forgiving so easily made arnav more hurt and guilty

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Aww... I loved it... It was simply beautiful one... Please do update the next part soon...

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chinu

@nooli

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#646

well it was extremly nice

hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!

PLZ accept my buddy request

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Venicestar88

@Venicestar88

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

wow...loved it loved it ...absolutely loved it! i'm sooo glad that he came back...did a fist-pump in the air when he dealt with sheetal 😉!!

It was indeed very interesting to get an insight into Arnav's feelings and thoughts... sooo beautifully written Rasgulla! thank you :) and you know why!

i'm sooo looking fwd to the next one now :)

thanks for the PM x

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Timm lakk lakk oyeee timm lakk lakk.!!

See? see? He didn't do it.!!!

In your face Sheetal..!!!!!!!!!!!

No amount of seducing will make Arnav betray khushi!!! Ever.!!

Glad to see that Arnav realized that even the fact that he went till Sheetal's doorstep is a big mistake on his part.! And when he thinks about khushi doing the same, I think then he really gets the gravity of the situation and what khushi has been going through.!!

Khushi has been so upset that when she see's he's back she forgives him in an instant.

I was thora disappointed.!!! Yes, he did not sleep with Sheetal, but still, going that way after a fight was wrong.!! But as you said, he learns from his mistake and this will never happen again.!

Again i was ecstatic to see khushi confessing her feelings. Atleast there would be no misunderstandings like in the original story. Arnav had an idea how she felt, but sometimes spelling it out is good! Now he knows for sure that she is completely besotted by him.!!

But then again, who isn't??