ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed* - Page 49

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silvia1999 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...loved it.
Waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
I. Hate. Sheetal.
Damn. Her. And. Her.
" Bloated Ego" .

Arnav did something really sensible.
He should wallop in self loathing. This is the perfect retribution for his impulsiveness.

Khushi is a real sweet-heart.
Arnav should earn her love.

I was a bit shocked at Khushi's boldness.. But I must say Arnav deserved an award for his self-control!
It must have taken an humongous effort on his part to not to give in to his desires, when being touched by Khushi.

It was emotional when every time Arnav felt he didn't deserve Khushi and realized how unworthy he is for her. But I feel, this singular realization will change him to a good person,who will be worthy of Khushi.

Khushi's anger was justified.. But may be she could give Arnav a piece of her mind.
Her last line was wonderful where she said that Arnav could use the information to hurt her all over again.
Wow!

Arnav's way of asking/pleading Khushi to sleep with him was heartfelt!

This was such a soothing update.. It effectively acted as the salve after the emotionally drained ending of the last one!

Thanks for the PM. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update!!! Totally diffrent from the way I thought it will go! I so love Arnavs love for his daughter and now even Khushi!! Super hot and super cute at the same time! And I really love the way you potryed khushi view! She is weak in love, but strong as a person! great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...that was a superb update..Whirlpool of emotions...Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was hot, emotional and intense... I m dying to read the next part when you are itching to write one...😉 A quicker update will really be appreciated...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, Simply fabulous update !!!
Sheetal got it right in her face and Boy am i glad !
Arnav is such a complex man but then thats the most attractive feature about him.
Everything you put across as his monologue was bang on spot.
As you rightly said Khushi is helpless but not weak, She is certainly the exact opposite of weak.
She gives into him when she wants, she is away from him when she wants and now she is aware of her hold on him so that gives her all the more strength, how she chooses to act upon it is the question.
And yes i love payal and akash in this story !!Want to now whats in store for them !!😃
Waiting for the next update patiently "NOT " !!😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for a looong update Saiyyu.. will be back with comments later.

--------- Kaan pakdke Mafi for making you remind -------------
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76158763

See in my comment on prev chap, I had predicted about your and Lazy's wicked ways. So nothing happened bet ASR and Sheetal but as I said I am still mad at him for even behaving like that.
Sheetal's thoughts about tarpping ASR and other details (abt his daughter and family) were repulsive!
Can't help but compare ASR's actions and the way ASR in MD(by lazy) taunted Khushi when she turned up at the hotel room. What she did there was out of helplessness but ASR there still taunted her as cheap. Even if he didn't touch Sheetal, I think it was a transgression.
Why does he hate/distrust Shyam so much? Just bcos he is Lav's brother?
Khushi was upset about marriage proposals for Arnav but she is yet to tell him about marriage proposals that her family is looking for her. Doesn't he understand that? Her family may try to get her married. How long he wants this relationship to be nameless. Even khushi agreed this time that she can't be with any other man. Then why so much delay?
My Khushi may be helpless but she is NOT weak. Raat abhi baaki hain mere dost. I am itching to write the next part
You better get your itch right and give us what we want! waiting...




Edited by shree10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God you stopped there???????

so intense and hot

Last update I wanted to kill Arnav for going to Sheetal😡

But thankfully he could not go through with it

Now Khushi has gone to him and he has asked her to sleep with him

they know that they cant be with anyone else

cant wait for your next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat didnt he say he wanted to take things slowly... what happened... instead of confessing his love for khushi he asked her to sleep with him... arnavvv
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am rooting for Payal and Akash - they both have spunk!

As for Arnav: I really, really hope he gets a clue, because he's destroying the heart of the woman who is perfect for him and his family...

Sheetal was too funny; the man hasn't reached the door yet and already she'd planned the wedding and the next several years of their lives...😆

'A lady's imagination is very rapid; it jumps from admiration to love, from love to matrimony, in a moment.'
(Jane Austen, P&P)

Very appropriate here I think!

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