ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#461

I love Khushi...and I hope Arnav realizes the reason behind his feelings for her...

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

That was such a great blow on Sheetal's face 😆

Poor her..she was all ready..dreaming about a filthy rich future..and bam! ASR dropped the bomb!

However, I kinda liked Sheetal's opinions of the Raizada family..especially an OTT aunt 😛

Loving Arnav's ability to control himself..in the Sheetal situation as well as with Khushi..

She was ready to go ahead..but he wanted and waited for her to confirm her feelings..well, I must appreciate his control 👏 😆

All in all, a great update, as usual! Loved it!!

P.S: You are itching to write the rest of the night..what does that hint at? ☺️ 😉

I'm waiting eagerly for it! 😳

Edited by SaRunLicious - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

So he didn't sleep with Sheetal and came back to Khushi. He wants her to own up to her feelings but he himself doesnot do so.

When are they going to do it? In the morning Payal will take Khushi and go to her place and there won't be any opportunity to do so. Love the Aakash Payal couple. Hope to see more of them in the next update. And you really don't need to be apologetic about the length. In fact the longer, the better.

Thanks for the pm. Will read all the ffs you suggested'

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Vicks

@Vicks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Saiyu,

As usual an excellent update.
Sorry for not providing comments earlier. Will be more regular going forward.

Coming to the update - loved it for the following:

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The thought that he would have sex with another woman had ripped her heart apart. But when she had seen him come back to her, untouched, that very heart had soared. She should have ideally hit him where it hurt the most for putting her through all that heartache for the time he wasn't at home. But she was not mad at him. Not mad at all.
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I mean the way you have explained a woman's feelings for her man, this is extremely brilliant.
I think this para is the best piece of writing so far in Finding solace, in my opinion!
This forms the basis for the relationship between them and this para also best explains it!!!

I don't need to say this, but your writing as usual has blown me away!!!
Thank you for entertaining us!!!

-Vicks

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Absolutely amazing, I have read it twice! I loved it! Khushi was fantastic...I loved how she goes into the bathroom ...I loved that they find each other so irrestible and there is so much more between them! I loved how he returns from Sheetals house with his thoughts on Khushi and his insecurity about damaging his relationship with her!

Absolutely awesome!

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Amazinggg update!!
He came back to her and thats what got her to forgive him..nice!

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

wow amazing, you start out with making us believe... Sheetal is buildings castle's in the air...only to have them blown away 😆

Then you give us a Arnav who is full of remorse and regret... 😃

and then a brave Khushi...who knows what she wants and trying to make him feel better and say that she understands him... bravooo ⭐️

Like it, hoping the next update will come soon 😃

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

AWESOME update! I LOVED it <3 Glad Arnav didnt do what he planned to do with Sheetal, there wouldnt have been any chance of forgiveness for him then. Loving the progress in their relationship :)

Looking forward to the next part since the night is not over yet ;)

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Zarahatke

@Zarahatke

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Awesome update yaar
Brilliant writing for their feelings
Plz update soon

Edited by Zarahatke - 12 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#470

i dint say bad words to arnav in last chp i knew ge would cum bak
n d way sheetal was thinking n planning lol asr ki ek line ne muh pe n sapno pe paani fir gaya
yaaay

loved d update
u write so well
dunt sweat on d lenght of d chps as far it is lengty v r frends :-P:-P
n yeah v r itchng to read d nxt chp soon

thanks fr d pm
start a new story soon plsss
dnt stop writtng plsss