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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wait before you pat yourself ! You did not succeed in making me hate Arnav...!

I love him !

Even more so in this update!
Like see he had thousands of reasons to hate himself... But he also felt bad for Sheetal !! Of nearly using her for his own selfish reasons.. Of causing her disrespect...How good he's at heart eventhough he's all rough on the outer !

When you introduced Sheetal I thought it was only for the jealousy factor but then twist ! - Arnav visits her in the middle of the night ! 😲 And the second twist ! - She doesn't want only one night with him ? She built not one but numerous castles in the air... Seriously?? How can somebody be so delusional?
Why am I even talking about her ?

He was angry with Shyam because he tried to take Arya away from him after Lavanya? That's the only reason?
And he was angry with Khushi because she made the conscious decision to have coffee with him and had hidden it for a week and he has a truck load of what ifs going on his mind !

But he has been with Khushi this past one week and if he thought back he would have all the answers...If Shyam had instigated lies wouldn't there be a change in Khushi's behaviour? Did she move away from in anyway ?? Instead she was jealous, insecure about his marriage talks and sad that Arya wasn't talking to her!! She did come and ask him for the story right??

Bottom line: Arnav needs to think before acting in anger which I know is something close to impossible...No downright impossible !!

Your "what was she f**king made of?" reminded me of "Kis mitti bani hai yeh?" from the show!
She knew so much about him...One look at him and she knows he did nothing! And that one knowledge that he would come back to her made her forgive him for his almost mistake !
More than that she was ready to give him more than just her forgiveness without his even asking...Why would she need him to spell it out for him when she has the visual proof of his self loathing in his eyes ??
Loved how he said "This is for you and you only. Samjhi tum?" Who needs sorries, huh??

Like I already told you I expected the "farak padtha hai" with a "dammit" to come from Arnav but it was so very sweet coming from Khushi !
And I loved it that you used the original dialogue from the scene because I remember going hyper when I first heard it on the show ! It is my most favorite dialogue!

Arnav will never find solace in his own personal space until he has Khushi with him!
And he'll probably not find solace until the end of this FF 😆

When is the next update coming??

Ab wo jo adhuri si raat baaki hain !😳



Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes our Kushi rocks...shes not weak, shes bold, naive and beautiful in all sense.

Devi maya ki lakh lakh sukhriya, for giving sense to Arnav as soon as he reached Seethals doorstep. Arnavs back to K...They have lots to sort out and waiting to see how things roll round.

The shower scene was awesome...☺️

Loved the Farkh ...dialogue.

Yes we do miss Payash...😉
Edited by sammymas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
EDIT
ASR IS a changed man. The image that woman created would have affected him before Khushi came into his life but now it caused self loathe that he stooped to the level of running to another woman. He is impulsive, short tempered, vain; while he enjoyed the effect he has on Khushi, he was on the brink of using the very reason of discomfort. But what I appreciate is that he is not immoral, he does not expect Khushi to bear it all and stay with him, does not expect her to understand his nature and forgive in an instant. This is reflective in his question on how she can love and stay with a man like him. His care and the need to come out clear that she was the only one for him was endearing.
Khushi, I have already mentioned I like her character. This update depicted her maturity; she understood he hadn't got back at her and forgave him; I loved that she mentioned she was hurt, makes her an assertive character rather than submissive.
The characterisation of Sheetal was done really well, the way you would expect her to be. Lovely update Saiyu.

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am really sorry
Completely forgot to comment
Arnav returned back from sheetal's house just like that coz he couldn't betray khushis love
When he reached she just by looking at him found that nothing went wrong wowo they have intense connection much more than love
Hope he proposes her soon
Akash will surely propose payal soon 😛
Edited by soniachammu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

~Un res~

Sorry it took so long to respond as I have guest staying over.
Thanks for the pm!😛

As for the chapter, it was just awesome!! 👏Very well written!😊

That's what you get,Sheetal!!😡 For messing with Khushi's love!!karma just comes around!!haha

Arnav's realized that he only belongs to Khushi!!! Yay!!
But he can't believe that he deserves her. But why?? I know khushi is very loving and I guess she is the whole package( meaning she loves him,his daughter,and family)she finally told him what he means to her but she can't put a name on it 😕
Aww😳he wants to sleep with her I guess to make sure it's not a dream!!!😳

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!!😃



Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So you have pulled the rug under Sheetal's feet!😲
Glad that Arnav looked at Sheetal and said, what he said coz, that is what he should have said in the first place if he was not ruled by his anger!😉
See I told you he is changed! 😛
Now I am wondering whether you are the one who writes or me!!!!😆
Whom am I convincing!!🤣
Even if anger rules him he'll not be able to forget his vision of Khushi and her selfless nature and her bond with his daughter!
Well, Khushi offered herself in a platter and he waited for her to confirm her thoughts! Wow! Should I say I said so! (2 updates earlier)😉
Now you can prove I was wrong all that you want and I'll be quite happy!
You see once he realizes that its just Khushi for him everyone else flies through the window!
The interesting thing is what'll happen when she goes back to Lucknow! and rest of the night☺️ that you are itching to write!😳

Looking forward to see how you write your next update and ... see you then!




Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
No, no complaint about the long update, actually thank you for the long update! Iam so happy with many things in this chapter, but most for it that our Arnav babu didn't sleep with sheethal, yeah! And then his was in control even when khushi made it easy for him to loose it. Then for the famous question he asked her, and she gave him a answer with a famous line! Now he knows what khushi feels for him, almost, but what about his feeling? Does he have a answer, I mean a proper one? Then you have to go and stop there? Update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update.. good that Khushi confessed..
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is such a roller coaster ride!!! Are they actually going to do it?!? Ahhh I can't wait for the next update!!

I an glad khushi is not weak... She can think with her rational mind, and place importance to her needs!! Arnav is going to be putty!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
r. yee me in second page..
On ur face sheetal.. buhaha.. 😈so much preparations and plans all went in vain..😃
just as i wished arnav/asr didn't do nything.. dhinka chika dhinka chika..🥳
and thn he repented.. ahaan.. man i so love this arnav, he even felt sry for the sheetal, excuse of a women.. he was not being able to forgive himself for hurting HIS khushi.. aww..
khushi is one forgiving girl aint she..
and the way she showed she forgave him..☺️☺️☺️☺️
thn the farak padhta hai talk.. and she confessed.. tht too in airport ME style hayeee loved the way u showed khushi's feelings too👏
waiting for the nxt update alrdy..

Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago

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