"You don't understand Shyam. There is something between them, that goes beyond attraction, this intrinsic connection, I can feel it Shyam, I know I do and I guess Aakash understands it too. That will keep them together" She answered with confidence.
I love this line you have written, coz this is how I describe love, a connection that is unique to you and your partner. Something that clicks between the 2 there common likes, a pull, an attraction, or even attitudes to life. I also liked how Anjali explained the whole thing to Shyam. we women are so perceptive sometimes, Anjali totally gets Arnav and Kushi's relationship.
The bit with Arya was sweet yet very emotional to read. I have already told you this, you have a fab way of writing interactions with kids. You dont make them too sweet, Arya is just a girl of her age without a mother would be- loving, stubborn and pron to tantrums.
I'm glad Arnav realises why it was not a good time for him to make love to Kushi, he has some such a long way, from someone who wanted to tear her clothes apart to someone who understands her concerns and fears.
And once he heard about Shyam, he did what we expect ASR to do, hurt the person who unintentionally hurt him. I'm still trying to understand the intensity of hatred he has for Shyam, who on the contrary seems like a decent chap. I'd love to see how Anjali breaks news of her affair with Shyam to Arnav.
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