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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 17-

"You don't understand Shyam. There is something between them, that goes beyond attraction, this intrinsic connection, I can feel it Shyam, I know I do and I guess Aakash understands it too. That will keep them together" She answered with confidence.


I love this line you have written, coz this is how I describe love, a connection that is unique to you and your partner. Something that clicks between the 2 there common likes, a pull, an attraction, or even attitudes to life. I also liked how Anjali explained the whole thing to Shyam. we women are so perceptive sometimes, Anjali totally gets Arnav and Kushi's relationship.

The bit with Arya was sweet yet very emotional to read. I have already told you this, you have a fab way of writing interactions with kids. You dont make them too sweet, Arya is just a girl of her age without a mother would be- loving, stubborn and pron to tantrums.

I'm glad Arnav realises why it was not a good time for him to make love to Kushi, he has some such a long way, from someone who wanted to tear her clothes apart to someone who understands her concerns and fears.

And once he heard about Shyam, he did what we expect ASR to do, hurt the person who unintentionally hurt him. I'm still trying to understand the intensity of hatred he has for Shyam, who on the contrary seems like a decent chap. I'd love to see how Anjali breaks news of her affair with Shyam to Arnav.
Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter18-

Glad Arnav's sense kicked in just at time. is that the result of his relationship with Kushi that finally he could think using his heart and not be blinded by anger. I loved how he broke Sheetal's hopes and dreams with one line. Loved the bit of background information on Sheetal. I'm glad you started the update with her history, you know it is things like these, that keeps readers engaged to understand what drives people, why do they behave the way they do.

The scenes in the shower, i wont say much except that you are the biggest tease of all.

How is Arnav still holding on to his control- the hot blooded man that he is? I just dont understand. Kushi literally throws herself at him, yet he is able to stop himself and her. HOW?

And the classic farak padtha hai dialogue makes an appearance. Im glad you have incorporated it in your story, the line to me tells me everything that Arnav and Kushi are- 2 opposite people, who love each other madly, but would never accept or declare it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff... loved the characters esp arya nd very different payal nd akash...update soon plsss...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read the last update again. Sometimes when you read a story multiple times you understand it better. Love this story. Waiting for thursday for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
no new thread how is that possible
hope there shall be a new one soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow! awesome part...
so khushi n anjali went to luycknow...
babuji is fine nw...
payal n akash getting close...
arya is khushi's strength...
arnav poor soul like khushi can't console each other...
yaar u used pool fr arnav's swim good...
1st m reading someone using RM's cool pool...😆
aww khushi crying fr arnav...
kya storm aney wala hai?????
update soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 19

This is one of my favorite chapters of this FF :D
Arnav finally realized that he wants Khushi with him forever and he can't afford to lose her.. He just cant let her walk away from his life..

He realizes that Khushi is the one from whom he can seek solace and she is the only one for him.. He thinks that its selfish for him to want Khushi in his life because he really doesn't deserve her but at the same time he is always concerned about Khushi's happiness and comforts..I love how he has changed so much!

Now they are going to officially date.. I'm so excited for this phase of their life..I wanna know how they will handle things while being in a relationship. I'm kinda worried about the Guptas reaction to the dating because I don't think they would ever expect their daughter to have a relationship with Arnav and specially when its not marriage..Raizadas would be happy for sure except Mami, her dreams of seeing Akash and Khushi together would be shattered :p

I loved how Khushi said ' how long will you hurt me before you let me go?' Arnav has hurt her so many times whether it was intentional or unintentional..

What did Arnav promise Arya that she was willing to let Khushi go? and what happened to Babuji?

and I forgot to add I loved the Payash part...It was cute and filmy :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 20

I love Arya...she is a sweetheart..she started crying because she saw her Khushi Di crying...she really love her a lot and Khushi is a perfect mother to her..

I loved how Khushi explained everything to Arya...now she will give Payal a chance for sure..

I liked how Aakash supported Payal...this was a development for them too..Payal has someone to share her sorrows and I'm happy for them..

What Arnav realized in this chapter that he is nothing to Khushi..he cant support her in front of people and he cant show his love to her openly, he has no right on Khushi while everyone in his family does and this is what affecting... This might make his mind for marriage..

Anjali is such a nice person...I'm glad she didn't leave Khushi alone in her difficult time and was there to support her..

All Khushi needs is Arnav..I hope he will go to her to make her feel better...cant wait to read what happens next..


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Posted: 12 years ago
read this FF after accidently finding your index. Boy, am I glad I found this heartwarming story! I loved all the characters and I simply love Arya! Although the essence of the original is felt, I like it that you given them your own take and let them develop in a more natural way. Waiting to see when Arnav and Khushi are going to utter the L word! 20 chapters and still they haven't done that or it ?😉 Please PM me for the next update. I hope your story will get told and not be abandoned because the show is over!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

I am not on the update page !! 😕

I may as well be on the last :D

Awww ARYA !! :* She's such a darling !!

Loved how she was being a support to Khushi! I don't know how but sometimes kids act more mature than elders in situations like these... They offer you the comfort you require without even knowing what they're doing ! Arya is such an adorable kid ! She is definitely not the overly spoiled motherless child of a rich tycoon !
She is understanding !
She said she'll let them both go and not cry for them ! ANd even accepted PAyal :D I know they'll bond well too...
Now that Payal has every chance of becoming her chachi :D
Akash was so sweet :D

It broke my heart when Arya said She could never imagine her papa not coming back to her!
And that in turn made Khushi realize how deep her feelings actually ran !
Same with Arnav !

This chapter was all about a reality check for both of them !

For all their physical/emotional closeness, both of them realized just where actually their relationship stands !

Both of them know that their feelings run deeper than it seems on the surface! They are so in love with each other and it is not always necessary to say the words, is it ??
They need each other !!

I love how you're portraying Arnav's realization step by step ! You know somebody like him could never have a turn of heart overnight! Only last night he decided he wanted her with him forever and was ready to take the first step towards making their relationship official but now after this he knows just dating officially is not all he wants ! He realized he wants more !! He may not care about others...Khushi may not care either but to the society they're still only professionally related ! And he wouldn't want Khushi's name spoiled either...Will he take the next big step ?? He doesn't want to be Khushi's "meant nothing" in front of society right !

He lives in his house and wishes he could be with her and she wants to call his room hers !! Aww...

And she calls and cries and tells him she wants him ! Was it on impulse that she called him?? How much thought did she put in before calling him and telling him that ! Actually asking something of him...!
How could he deny her the one thing she has asked of him ??

And trust me even before you asked me for the transcript the hospital hug has been playing in my mind ! You've been including dialogues from the show lately and I knew this was coming :D

Anjali is being so supportive to Khushi in everything. She's the only one who actually knows about Arnav and Khushi. And what with the Gurgaon issue ?? If she knows details about it why not hsare it with Arnav ? Is it cos she wants Shyam to resolve it so SHyam could win Arnav ??

And OMG ! Mamaji actually asked a reasonable question ?! And mamiji's words about calling them bitya and meaning it were so nice ! Nani was her usual sweet self.

Did I miss someone ?? Overall I loved everybody in this update !! Whatta family !!

YEs and I didn't talk about Arnav taking a swim in his pool ! You know why ? Because if I went there I would never get around to commenting at all 😳😳

If this is the calm...Waiting for the storm ! Because I can't wait to see what happens after the storm !!

Ab jao likhna shuru karo...jaldhi :D


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