ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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Vicks

@Vicks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

If this is you writing when you are tired, then I look forward to you writing when you are fresh and thinking clearly...

I must say a very good chapter, especially the feelings of Arnav, where he feels he is nothing to her...

I really liked the way you have shown his helplessness and also the way Anjali interrupted him...

I think it was extremely thought out chapter...

I like it when authors think of minute things and here,the fact you brough to home, that he is a famous industrialist and can have paparazzi chase him for photos, is extremely brilliant...

Good, the story is catching speed and let me buckle my seatbelts and get ready...

Bring it on, Saiyu :)

-Vicks

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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

Hi,

Thanks for the PM:)

Wonderful update. Loved Arnav's silent support and loved how the family took control of the situation. It was indeed very sweet of Anjali to go along and help her.

Arya and Khushi's moments were beautiful just like Aakash and Payal's. Loving the bond they all share.

I hope Arnav will give a name to their relationship soon. So that he can show his love and care in front of everyone rather than doing it in the hiding.

Pls cont soon...

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veil_of_roses

@veil_of_roses

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

Can't wait for next part... Will mami ask khushi's hand for Aakash? Looking at current scenario khushi's mom n bus would accept it right away...

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

When will Arnav pop the question? His heart seared knowing that to the world he is nothing to her..

Akash and Payal coming close..

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

Another beautifully written update... Saiyu you are an amazing writer you know...???

The relation which shares between A and K is not an easily definable one... And portraying the gradual growth in that relationship is definitely a difficult thing... Saiyu , you managed to do that very well... and That's what the reason I find to appreciate this work of yours...

Arnav's inner turmoil when it comes to what he feels for khushi- was perfectly depicted Saiyu...

Desperately waiting for your next update...

LOVE you Saiyu...

ACHU😳

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

I was feeling really helpless at seeing arnav so helpless cause everyone was making him feel like he didnt mean anything to her and he just wanted to hold and console her
Man!!!
I loved this update

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Denaid

@Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1067

Arnav is slowly acknowledging Khushi's influence on his and Arya's life... This fact is of enormous import.

Khushi and Arya, though not related to each other in any way, feel such strong kinship towards each other... It's really mind boggling... The way Arya responds to Khushi's request... Their love and need for each other is really heartwarming... Khushi's her mother, sister, friend and mentor... All in one.. Arya is ready to do anything for her... Even to give Payal a chance... That's children with their unconditional love... A rare phenomena, seen only in innocent souls...

Anjali's a darling... Helping out at the time of need...

I can imagine Arnav's mental and physical state, after hearing that one word to his inquiry...YOU!!!! Says it all, doesn't it????

Remarkable update...

P.S. Sorry about the late comment... Busy week.. :(

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1068

awesome part!!!! Hopefully some ArHi moments in the next part ? :)

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mannat27

@mannat27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1069

Lovely update!

Finally awaiting Arnav actually doing something worth for Khushi. Please update soon!!!

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1070

See Arnav, THIS is why you need to give a naam to things. That's the only way you can be there for Khushi and support her when she needs you. HOPEFULLY, he'll put things in motion now.