Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 5)

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

i love ur ss...its so beaitifully written...specially the part where arnav and khushi voice their feelings they are an adorable pair i love these guys n u r doin a fantastic job👏

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

lovely update dear... waiting fr d nxt...😊

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harsha

@harsha..

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

I like how their relationship is proceeding - both are physically comfortable with each other, be it sitting snuggly on the swing or kissing before him going to office and night.

I loved the part where you expressed Arnav's frustation because Khushi didn't confess her love.

Then why did he not get to hear her say 'I love you' and the rest of the whole freaking world does? Loved these lines.

The good part was that it had an element of humour in it which made the update wholesome.

Thanks for the pm

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

A NON Y MOUS...I AM DELIGHTED TO READ THIS

ASTONISHING JOURNEY OF AN AMAZING COUPLE IN 26

CHAPTERS

IT WAS A CLEAN STORY KEEPING ME GLUED TO READ ALL IN

ONE GO

HOW DO YOU WRITE SUCH MARVELOUS CHAPTERS

KEEPING THE FLOW

KEEPING THE ESSENCE

KEEPING THE FLAVOR

KEEPING THE SANITY

KEEPING THE FEEL

KEEPING THE ROMANCE

KEEPING THE PACE

KEEPING THE DIGNITY

KEEPING THE SENSITIVITY

ALL INTACT N SECURE

GIRL YOU ARE BETTER THAN THE BEST

KEEP ME ALERT IF POSSIBLE

KKKA

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Such an amzng udate...
Dy r spndng more tym together so cute...bhvng lyk a cple n d kissess awww...:* damn cute...
Lv it.

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Such an amzng udate...
Dy r spndng more tym together so cute...bhvng lyk a cple n d kissess awww...:* damn cute...
Nd nt to frget d JI...
Lv it.

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khub

@khub

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Just came across your work by chance as I was browsing India Forums. Not sure how I missed it all these days...thoroughly enjoyed reading ...read all parts in one go. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to your next update.

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barfi

@barfi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

just read all 26 chapters awesome work

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

omg can he get any more shameless
i should hope not well he probably would right
after all this is arnav singh raizada we are talking about
oh my things sure have progressed between the two
and khushi or khush as he calls her nowadays sure is getting pretty comfortable with him
didnt think it would happen so quickly but glad it did happen
awww arnie is adamant to make her say his name huh bless
khush dear you know you shall give in so why bother dear
wow he has gotten her started on kissing him and they are chnaging in their intensity i see
hey why not this is arhi we are talking about so it is bound to get hotter
awww adya finally called them as their parents now that must have been the best moments of their lives
but her brother still hasnt made his move yet
am sure he will do so anytime soon
ummm arnie we know you love red and all and it looks brilliant and like you said sexy on her and all
but dont you think it might just be too much red dude
glad she managed to have other colours too
aww he is making sure the new mrs raizada to be gets a surpirse at their wedding reception
he sure is making sure they get as much traditional ceremonies for their civil marriage huh bless him
man is there anything he wont do for her guess not huh
huh no i love you from her and he cant say it himself because of whats happened in the past
worry not she shall eventually say it and at the most opportunate moment too
they shall be getting married soon woohooo man
and could it get any better than this is should think not
well eagerly waiting for their marriage now and cant wait for that to be over right
cheers for pm