Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 5) - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhipriya5

very cute😊

but plz try to update next part asap.
and when khushi is going to tell arnav about akash and his mother's
unacceptable behaviour. apart from the story line i would also like to
mention ur command on english vocabulary and use of words.
EXCELLENT.



Thank you so much. I am a sucker for proper language and grammar. I try to make minimal mistakes. Glad you noticed :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg such a cute and amazing Uodate like loved the time moved on oart and how they started Interatcing like more than friends and closed an gaps thyre morning and afternoon kisses hahahaha nd him asking her to refer as arnav instead she moved arnav and called him Ji was just damn funny... Great Uodate :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next oart :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry, sorry, sorry ...…… for the late comments, the update was brilliant & thanks a ton buddy for the PM 🤗


Of course she tried to keep a few inches of gap in between them, but that was not a problem as Aranv always shamelessly covered that gap as soon as she sat. 😃☺️

Arshi's closeness tearing away the formal gap that existed upto now was very well framed ………..………shifting their place of talks from the poolside to the terrace, goodbye & welcome kisses finding their rightful places as per Arnav's wish & most importantly Khushi feeling elated with the comfortable progress in her relationship with Arnav

'What did you say sweetheart? Come again? 😉

Instead of appreciating her effort, he is being cheeky about it?... ARGHHH. 'Laad Governer' …………………………….not caring about zero inch of gap between them.

Khushi dropping Arnav instead of ji from 'Arnavji' was sweet…………… Arnav waiting patiently for Khushi to drop the 'ji' she stuck behind his name, Khushi finally trying to address him as per his wish as she very well knew that he would get whatever he wanted at the end of the day tactfully & overjoyed on seeing the beautiful smile adorning her fiance's face was lovely to read

Arnav thinking deeply about the kids' future & placing them in his heart as his kids along with Khushi's was admirable

So he always encouraged the kisses by giving his bua his best toothy grin.

Adit's thoughts regarding the satisfaction he got due to the attention not decreasing since he didn't make those new sounds like his sister was fun to read 🤗

She LOVED her cutie pies , which were Adit and Adya not him, just to be clear.

Woah, Arnav himself seems to be a kid trying his best in all ways possible to gain her attention & expecting her to be by his side 24*7 and here he is competing with Adit & Adya 😊

RED, RED & RED – Arnav's really crazy & obsessed………….still planning to get more clothes in red!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 😃

Arnav making arrangements for Khushi's choices & preferences to

have a significant role in their wedding plans was adorable

Human heart is one greedy thing. It never stops desiring for more. Now that he was sure that Khushi's feelings towards him were more then mere liking or concern, his heart wanted a declaration of love from her.

Arnav's worry now having moved from his insecurities about his love being stolen away from him or the fear of being rejected by her to not being lucky enough to hear those 3 magical words revealing her love to him was adorable

Arnav's difficulty in vocalizing his tender feelings & willing to wait for the golden opportunity of those 3 words finding its way directly from her heart to his ears were beautifully portrayed

Waiting eagerly to see whether he gets the chance of hearing "I LOVE YOU ARNAV"

Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing and awesome update, the update was so beautiful. I loved the part where Arnav was teasing khushi when she was not pronouncing his name with out the Ji and its so adorable how he has moved there evening talks to the terrace so he can sit closer too her. Also the kids calling the Arnav and khushi Maa and Paa that was awesome and so beautiful. So Arnav is waiting for khushi to confess her love and say i love you, i wonder how long it will take poor khushi but i'm sure Arnav will have a way he is too clever. Awww they both have got so attached to each other that they both have favorite parts of the day when they want to be together. Please update soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the delay,i have been down with fever,so now only i got the time to check my inbox,because i was sleeping the whole day.Loved the update,they are getting married in 5 days,wow waiting for the wedding.Hmm khushi finally dropped the JI from arnav,it's nice to know that their comfort zone increased.PLS update soon and i'm looking forward for their wedding.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just beautifully written, loved the way the days start with the good bye kiss, welcome kiss and the nights on the swing , their conversation ...loving it all. Just waiting for them to confess!

Loved it, thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update very well written👏
Their comfort level has definitely increased and their bond has becoming stronger day by day I love how khushi drops the Arnav part of Arnavji instead of the ji 🤣 Silly girl 🤪 thank god Khushi finally calling him Arnav 😆 I hope kushi say i love u soon to arnav shopping part was awesome 👍🏼 everything red 😲 😳 can't wait to see more romantic and naughty Arnav 😳 khushi is to cute 😛 can't wait for next part continue soon please and thank you for pm me 🤗
Edited by ASR6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the cute updTe...loved it ...it was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago


🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an super awesome Update.. 😃
From start to end.. it was just superb..
Arnav very well knows how to have his ways..
He made Khushi kiss him mornins & evenings.. for saying Sorry after their first Kiss.. 😳 Banda smart hai.. 😉😆😆
Khushi's fav part of the day.. their chat on the terrace swing.. Awww She is such a darling.. finds her happiness in small small things.. and that only makes her different from others.. 😊
So Many of RED dresses.. 🤣🤣
Khushi is not able to understand her Fiance's obsession with Red.. what will happen when she would find out His Fiance obsession of Her wearing Red.. would she be able to handle the passionate reaction then.. 😉😆😆😆
awww.. Loved how Adya called her Maa.. and Arnav - Paa😃
and Adit just showed them toothy grin.. 😆
I so much loved the way you described Arnav's need as well as wish for Khushi being the first to say those 3 heavenly words.. He is so right to wish that. 😊
and then Arnav's fav part -- tuck her in bed and see her sleeping.. 😳
All in all mind-blowing update😃

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