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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

Guys a big thank you for such a lovely dovely comments...and a big sorry because I couldn't replay to all of you...ok so enough of my bak bak and here's part 3-

Everyone else was also very angry because they knew it wouldn't be Tani's fault...it is surely this shittaring...
Shivam was scared looking at everyone's expression...he was sure he wouldn't be able go back walking home if he don't run right now...
He was about to run but swayam and rey caught him by collar and punched him hard...they punched him hard till he fainted while tani was cheering and all were smiling seeing tani's antique...
Suddenly Tani saw ice-cream vender...
Tani(screamed)- ice cream
She ran towards ice cream vender...Gang too ran after her...
Tani- muje na chocolate ice cream chaiye...
Then everyone orders their ice-cream...
Rey was staring at tani...looking loving at her
After tani eats ice-cream...she starts felling dizzy...and is about to fall...
Rey notices tani feeling dizzy and saw that she is about to fall...so he quickly holds her by waist...and she faints in his arms...and Rey carries her...
Rey- guys mein tani ko hotel room mein le jata hu
Swayam- thik hai
Rey takes tani to his car and put her on passenger seat and puts seat belt...they are really close and tani's hair are coming on her face...Rey slowly moves her hair behind her ears...
They are driving back to hotel...tani slowly opens her eyes and looks around...and starts crying...
As Rey hears tani's crying he stops the car...and looks at her worriedly...
Rey-(concerd) tani kya hua tume...Tum ro kyu Rahi ho
Tani( says childishly) bhai kaha hai?
Rey- kya?
Tani( again says childishly) mein ne kaha bhai kaha hai? (Then she asks him cutely)Aap ko Hindi samaj mein nahi Aati?
Rey couldn't help but smile at her cuteness and weirdness...
Tani- muje bhai chaiye( she agin starts crying)
Rey stare at her and couldn't help but smile at her...
Rey- ek ek minute tani Rona bandh Karo...plz
Tani stops crying...
Rey- swayam na Hume hotel pe hi milega...vo kya hai na Tum faint ho gai thi iseliye mein tume le aaya...
Tani- (cutely complaning) aap muje kyu le aaye... Muje ghum na tha... Mein bhai ko bohot daat ne vali hu...
"Oh no isle gadi phir se gumne Jane par atak gai hai..." Thought rey...
Rey- Dekho tani
Tani cuts him
Tani- kya dekhu...(she said pointing outside) yaha dekh ne ke liye to Kuch bhi nahi hai...then takes her cell phone out but battery dead thi...
Tani- ( talks to herself) ab mein kya Karu??(suddenly idea pops up in her head) rey muje aap ka cell phone dijye...
Rey- mera cell phone...par kyu??
Tani- aap na bohot saval karte ho..aap sirf dijye na
Rey gives his cell phone to her
she then goes to contact and writes "bhai" in search box but no contacts come up...
Rey looks at what she is doing and smiles...
Rey- tani swayam tumara bhai
hai, Tum use bhai ke ke Bulati ho par vo mera dost hai or mein use uske naam se hi bulata hu...
Tani- to usme mein kya Karoo?
Rey- to Tum bhul rai ho ki yeh mera cell phone hai...
Tani- are ha mein to bhul hi gai thi...
Then she searches swayam and calls him...
There swayam and gang were about to sit in car..
Tani-(she said angrily) bhai, aap mere saath Aisa kaise kar sakte ho
Swayam- (worried) are Maine kya kiya
(Seeing swayam worried, Sharon takes the phone and puts it on speaker) (GUYS IN MY SS SWARON ARE OFFICIAL COUPLE)
Tani- kya kiya? Mein ne aap se kaha tha na muje bahar ghum ne Jana hai...Lekin aap muje vapas hotel bhej rahe ho...(she said cutely but yet sadly)
Swayam- tani asi baat nai
Tani-(cuts him) to phir kaise baat hai? Bhai mein aap ko last time keh Rahi hu ki muje bahar gumne Jana hai or aap muje nai ke Gaye na to mein
Swayam- to
Tani-( thought for a while) to mein Mami ko phone Karke kahungi ki aap mere wish puri nahi kar rahe ho...
Then she starts crying...
Tani-( while crying) bhai u don't love me anymore...
Rey get sad seeing tears in his angles eyes...
Here swayam also gets sad hearing his sister crying...
Swayam- tani plz Rona bandh Karo mein tume bahar le jata hu...
Tani- (stops crying and smiles widely) sacchi!!!i love you bhai...aap na is world ke best bhai ho...
Swayam- or Tum is world ki best sister ho...
Girls- aww
Whiles boys smiles...

Precap-

Tani- bhai mein aapko ek baat batav ?
Swayam, Sharon and Rey looks at her...what does she want to say..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hey
nyc one
liked the
concept
n yeah shiritating
out...
yey!!!!
loved it
n taani drunk
she is sooo weired
nah...
cutely weired...
hehe
loved ur writing...
thanks for pm
do pm me
next tym
wen u upd
bye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
OMG love this Taani-Swayam relation. It was so cute when she woke up & first thing she wanted was her bhai. SOOO CUTEEE...
I cant wait for the next part now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Lolll, drunk taanis is hilarious, loved the kya dekhu and typing Bhai in the contacts loll.. Wonder what she will say according to the precap, thank for the pm, pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
loved it.
Taani's antique...hilarious
love cute bro-sis relation...
thanks for the pm and pls. do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
the brother sister bonding was lovely
Nukti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Awesome👏
The relation of Taani and Swyam is so cute
Update soon😊
raddhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
hey i luv it yaar nice
i want to see taayam
bond n u r showing it thanks yaar
i luv how swt taani is behaving haaye
i luv it to ton per-cape quite interesting
thanks for PM n do put nxt prt soon n yeah
do PM me kk
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awww. ..taani is so Damn cute man!! I just luv her cuteness..jaldi next part update Karo na m badly waiting from it..ab dekhte h taani mam ko kya kehna h!! Lolzzz she is so funny nd cute na..that's y she is the cuteness diva
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Gosh! Taani was so so.so cute!! Loved it... Update soon!

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