Behind The Mask- RN short FF updated 14.2.13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Behind The Mask

All Characters in the fic are Fictitious.

Dil luttiya ae mast nighawan

Tera naam japdi phiran soneya

Main tera naam japdi phiran''..

Delhi ki ek baadi Disco main loud music baj raha hai. Log Duniya bhul kar dance kar rahe hai. Raat ke 12 baj rahe hai. Bar counter par ek ladki bethi hui hai, jo aapni drink ki glass main hi khoyi hui hai, uski aas paas yeh mauj masti, dance aur shor se usse koi fark nahin padhta.Bilkul uske peeche ek ladka khada hua hai, jo uss drunk ladki ke aas paas kisi ko bhi aane nahin de raha hai, aur uska nazar ladki par hai, jaise woh uska bodyguard hai.woh ladka ladki ke paas aa kar bolta hai

Ladka- Naina ab ghar chalo, raat ke 12 bajh rahe hai.

Naina uske taraf dekhta hai, thoda drunk hone ke saath saath uske aankho main thoda sa aasu hai.

Naina- ab to peena shuru ki hai, abhi duniya main bhuli nahin, aur abhi tum chalne ki baat kar rahe ho Alekh ( phir thoda muskurake )- oops, main to bhul hi gaayi thi tum to papa ke sab se wafadaar ho, ussi ka order aa gaya kya?? Phir to mujhe chalna hi parega. Warna pata nahin kya ho jayega.

Yeh keh kar naina aapni tool se uthti hai. Thoda balance lose ho jaata hai uska, par Alekh usse samhal leta hai.

Naina- main aaj bohut dukhi hoon. Mujhe Sharab pee kar duniya bhulna tha, kyunki main iss duniya aur yaha rehnewale logo se bohut nafrat karti hoon.

Naina aapne aap kuch bolne lag jaati hai. Alekh usse pakad kar Disco se bahar aa jaata hai. Parking Area main paunch kar Alekh keys nikal kar Car ki door kholne jaata hai. Naina Alekh ki haath se keys cheen leti hai.

Alekh- yeh kya Naina keys do, ghar pauchna hai.raat kaafi ho gaya hai, Sir ka order hai tum itni der raat tak bahar nahin reh sakti.

Naina( thoda smile karke)- papa ki order gaya bhar main, unke paas mere liye koi waqt nahin hai, main bhi unke baat nahin manungi.noo, keys nahin dungi, phir tum mujhe ghar kaise le jaoge??? Main yahin rahungi khub peeyungi, khub dance karungi masti karungi.

Alekh- Naina zidd mat karo. Car ki keys mujhe do, aur chup chap ghar chalo, tum ghar jaa kar chup chap kha kar so jaogi, yeh Sir ka order hai.

Naina koi response nahin kar rahi dekh kar Alekh kaafi strictly bolta hai " Naina agar tum meri baat nahin maani to main Sir se bol kar tumhara ghar se nikalna bandh karwa dunga."

Naina- dhamki har baat par sirf dhamki, tum mujhe dhamki dete rehte ho, yeh sab papa ke wajah se ho raha hai.tum papa ke sirf ek employee ho, par papa ne tumhe sar par chada rakha hai. Honge tum papa ke khaas aadmi, par sirf unke business main, main aise orders aur dhamki bilkul bardhast nahin karungi.

Alekh Naina ke samne aapna haath aage karta hai aur uske taraf dekh kar bolta hai "Car ki keys do"Aisi awaz main Alekh jab baat karta hai to uska matlab hai uska sabar toot raha hai, yeh ek warning hota hai.

Naina- thik hai, ghar chalte hai. Afterall papa ke order jo hai, waise bhi tum mujhe shanti se jeene nahin doge, mujhe to aisa lagta hai jaise main hi yaha ka naukrani hoon. Lekin meri bhi ek shart hai, drive main karungi.

Alekh- Naina'

Naina- soch lo, main ghar jaane ke liye taiyaar hoon, mujhe driving aati hai, phir naa kyun?? Abhi meri dil kar raha hai main khud drive karke ghar jaun, kya problem hai??

Alekh- problem yeh hai tum drunk ho, main nahin chahta koi bhi garbaad ho.

Naina- drunk???? Tumne drink karne hi kab diya, main poore hosh main hoon, waise bhi tum to hoge hi to samhal lena.

Alekh dekhta hai aur koi rasta nahin hai, Naina phir se zidd par aa gaayi hai. Naina ko safely ghar le jaana zyada imp hai, Sir aakhir kaar sirf uss par hi trust karte hai.

Naina drive kar rahi hai. Alekh paas ke seat par betha hai, ek dum alert.Naina drive karte gun guna rahi hai.

Naina- agar main ladka hota to aaj abhi disco main aish kar raha hota, koyi nahin rokta mujhe, koi nahin tokta, aapni marzi ka malik hota main.

Rasta kaafi sunsaan hai, Naina car ka speed bada rahi hai. Alekh aur bhi alert ho jaata hai.

Alekh- Naina gaadi ka speed kam karo, aise speed badaogi to gaadi out of control ho jayegi.

Naina-( zor se)- arre meri zindagi out of control ho gaayi hai( car ka speed aur bhi tezz karti hai) agar main ladka hota to aaj papa ki business samhalti, lekin dekho papa ne mere liye ladka dhund liya, jo ki mujhe bilkul nahin pasand, lekin haa woh bohut baada businessman hai, too?? Mujhe kya fark padhta hai bolo?? Kya sirf Naina Singh Aluwalia yeh naam kaafi nahin hai??? Ki mujhe aur kisi ka naam aapne saath jodna parega woh bhi meri marzi ke khilaf?????

Alekh- Naina car ki speed kam karo.( saath hi speed kam karne ki kohsish karta hai)tum samhal nahin paa rahi ho.

Naina( Alekh ko dhakka de kar aur bhi speed badhate hue)- aur agar main ladka hota to main hi papa ka sab kuch hota, koi naukar ko papa aapne bete ki darja nahin dete. Kyun main papa ki sab kuch naayi ban paayi??( now crying aur saath hi Alekh ki collar keech rahi thi)

Alekh- Naina samhalo. ( Alekh steering samhalne lagta hai, car kaafi tez tha, aur bilkul samne aur ek headlight dikh raha tha. Naina ro rahi thi,saath hi Alekh ke saath maarpith kar rahi thi isliye uska dhyan sadak par nahin tha, jab dhyan aaya, tab bohut der ho chuka tha. Car ek Bike saath takrayi aur Alekh ne jaise taise break lagaya)

Alekh- oh shit.

Edited by sania_58 - 12 years ago

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sania_58

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Posted: 12 years ago

heyy Friends, how are u???

bohut dino ke baad, i am back in this Fan Fic Section.

Well, I know Race, Red Triangle abhi bhi incomplete padi hui hai. par pata nahin achanak kya hua, thik nahin likh paa rahi hoon.

isliye yeh halat ko sudharne ke liye main ek short FF likh rahi hoon, 25 parts hoga hardly. Race ka Next update main bohut jaldi post karungi. Red Triangle ko bhi wrap up karne ka waqt aa gaya hai, lekin plzz mujhe sochne ke liye thoda waqt chayiye, tab tak Enjoy this new short FF on Rajveer Naina ( Rajeev Khandelwal & Priyanka Bassi)

Hope ki yeh accha lage.waiting for ur response.

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Suhana

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Madhu

Nice start..👏👏

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golu_1677

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice beginning...

Waiting for more cont soon...

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey a nice start 👏 👏

I loved the way u started the FF. 😊 😊

Alekh is Naina's bodyguard I think and he is very strict and protective as well for Naina. 😃 😃

Naina is unhappy and depressed about his father's decision and his biased behavior. 😭 😭 I don't know till when gals have to suffer this gender biasness? 😕 😕

I think Naina has not created that big problem or that man didn't hurt that much.

Update soon all of us will be waiting.

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arpita25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow one more FF on Raj and Naina. 👏 That too so nice and with different concept. 😃 Jaldi se aage likho.

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice start... 👏

I feel the story will get cleared when this FF will be updated more. 😃 Do pm when u update.

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 12 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation and the place!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is sad and depressed and therefore drinking to forget the world!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh seems to be Naina's bodyguard and Naina doesn't seem to like him much!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

He is very strict with her and even threatens her as Naina does not want to go home!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh should not have let Naina drive in that state!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina is angry and upset about her father's biased behaviour towards her and her marriage being fixed with someone she doesn't like!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

It is sad that such things still happen in this society!!!!!

Just as I had expected, Naina hit someone on a bike with her car!!!!!

I hope that person is not badly hurt!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

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varshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

One more FF on RN 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Too good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Vaise bhi jitna padho man nahi bharta hai. 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

I think u will update more often.😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Alekh and Naina didn't share any bonding in it I think. 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 Oh that's sad that still we are suffering with Gender biasness. 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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sania_58

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Alekh Car se bahar aata hai, uske baad Naina bhi Car se bahar aati hai.Bike side main gira hai, aur ek aadmi pada hua hai. Kaafi khun beh raha tha uske sar se.Naina poori tarah se shock main thi, aur wohi zameen par beth jaati hai." Yeh kya kar diya maine, maar diya isse" "maine maar diya isse". Naina rone laag jaati hai. Alekh pehle aas paas dekhta hai, koi hai yaa nahin, dekhta hai rasta ek dum sunsaan hai, phir dheere se uss aadmi ke paas jaata hai, aur pulse check karta hai. Phir Naina ke paas aa kar bolta hai " Naina car main betho, aur ghar chalo". Naina ro rahi thi, aur barbara rahi thi "I killed him, maine maar diya isse".

Alekh- Naina yeh aadmi mara nahin hai, zinda hai.jaldi ghadi main betho, aur chalo yaha se.

Naina Alekh ke taraf bina palak jhapkaye dekh rahi thi. "yeh zinda hai??? Phir der mat karo, chalo isse jaldi se hospital le chalte hai.

Alekh- Naina tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai, hum Hospital leke jayenge?? Arre phir kitna bada hungama hoga tumhe kuch andaza bhi hai, Media wale pata nahin iss issue ko kya se kya bana denge, police case hoga, just shut up, & ghadi main betho.

Naina- Alekh iss aadmi ka yeh halat hamari wajah se hua hai.musibaat ke dar se hum isse yaha marne ke liye chod kar bhaag jaaye.tum main insaniyat naam ki koi chiz nahin ho sakti, par mere andar hai.main isse hospital le jaungi.

Alekh- Naina tumhare bakwaas sunne ka waqt nahin hai mere paas, Sir ka badnaami ho jayega, saath hi tumhare responsibility bhi mere upar hai, so mujhe majboor mat karo.isse pehle koi dekh le yaha par humhe, lets go.

Naina ( thodi der chup reh kar aapna aasu poch kar, in a very low tone)- majboor to tum mujhe kar rahe ho, main isse abhi hospital le jaungi, tumhe meri madad karni paregi, agar nahin ki, aur mujhe rokne ki kohsish ki tumhe to main khud police ke paas jaungi, aur keh dungi, ki maine yeh accident ki hai. Phir tum socho.aur isse sirf meri dhamki mat samajhna. Aisa main karungi.

Yeh keh kar Naina uth kar uss injured aadmi ke paas jaati hai, aur usse uthane ki kohsish karti hai. Naina dekhti hai, Alekh bhi aa kar uska madad kar raha hai, dono uss infured aadmi ko utha kar car ki peeche ki seat par sulate hai, Naina bhi wohi beth jaati hai. Sar se khun kaafi beh raha tha, isliye usne aapne scraf se sar ke wound par press karke beththi. Alekh driving karne lagta hai. Driving karte karte Alekh kuch phone calls karta hai. Par Naina ne uss taraf bilkul bhi dhayan nahin diya, woh uss injured aadmi ko dekh rahi thi. Aur dil hi dil main pray kar rahi thi ki isse kuch naa ho.

Alekh ek private nursing home ke bahar aa kar gaado rokta hai. Naina dekhti hai yeh wohi Nursing home hai jaha uske papa har saal ek huge amount dete hai, Charity ke naam par. Naine do baar aayi thi uske papa ke saath but usse yeh donation dena Charity kam lagta hai, aur Income Tax walo se bachne ka rasta zyada lagta hai. Naina ko philhaal koi fark nahin padhta, coz uske paas zyada imp iss waqt yeh hai uss aadmi ka bachna.Naina dekhti hai Strecther ready hai bahar. Alekh woha par kuch aur logo ke madad se uss aadmi ko Stretcher main leta deta hai, aur usse treatment kr liye andar le jaate hai.

Alekh Naina ko bolta hai, " ab ghar chalo, iska treatment acche se hoga, tumhare insaniyat beech main aa rahi thi tab sadak par isse chodne ka naam par, ab to koi problem nahin hai naa?"

Naina- jab tak mujhe yeh nahin pata chalta ki yeh bilkul thik hai, tab tak main yaha se hilungi nahin, yeh baat tum aapni dimag main acchi tarah se bitha lo.

Naina Nursing Home ke andar chali jaati hai, Naina ek bench par beth kar intezar kar rahi thi, thodi der baad Alekh aa kar bolta hai " Naina yeh dress lo, aur change kar lo.tumhare dress par khun laga hai. Aur haa thik se haath dho lena"

Naina- main baad main kar lunga Alekh.

Alekh- baad main nahin Naina abhi issi waqt, don't want any excuses. Main tumhari baat man raha hoon, soo, first, chalo mere saath.

Naina bina kuch kahe Alekh ke saath chalti hai, Alekh usse Staff ke Changing room main le jaata hai. Naina Change karne ke liye an dar chali jaati hai. Thodi der baad Naina change karke nikalti hai. Alekh uske haath se khun laga hua kapda chin leta hai. Phir Nursing home ke peeche ke taraf jaata hai, Naina bhi uske saath jaati hai.Alekh khun laga hua kapda jala deta hai.Naina dheere se bolti hai "saboot mitane ki itni bhi kya jaldi thi". Infact Naina yeh bhi notice karti hai, jis car se usne accident ki thi aur uss injured aadmi ko yaha leke aayi, woh bhi ghayab hai.

Naina phir se Nursing Home ke andar aati hai, aur ek Bench par beth jaati hai. Alekh bhi thodi der baad woha aa jaata hai, aur idhar se udhar chakkar kat raha hai. Tabhi ek Nurse bahar aati hai. Naina nurse ke paas jaa kar puchti hai woh aadmi kaisa hai? Naina sirf haa main jawab deti hai. Aur Alekh ke paas jaa kar bolti hai, "Sir, uske paas se yeh purse, yeh mobile aur yeh Identity card mila hai".Alekh- "Thanks". Woh Nurse woha se chali jaati hai.

Alekh Identity card dekhta hai, aur thoda pareshan ho jaata hai.

Naina- kaun hai yeh aadmi???

Alekh- Rajveer Singh, Taaza Khabar Newspaper ka Journalist.

Naina ( khud se)- Rajveer.

Thodi der baad, Doctor bahar aa kar kehta hai, tension ki koi baat nahin hai. Head injury ko le kar humhe thodi chinta thi, par CT Scan karke humne dekh liya hai, koi problem nahin hai. He is okay, subah tak hosh aa jayega.

Alekh- thanks Doctor.

Phir Naina ke taraf dekh kar,

Alekh- Naina tumne Doctor saab ki baat sun li naa, tension ki koi baat nahin hai, woh thik hai, ab tum chupchap ghar jaogi, & that's final.jao iss aadmi ke saath. Main thodi der baad aaunga.

Rajveer ko jaha rakha gaya tha Naina uss cabin ke paas jaati hai, aur door ke glass se Rajveer ko ek jhalak dekhti hai, sar par bandage hai, saath hi Oxygen bhi chal raha hai. Naina chupchap ghar jaane ke liye nikalti hai, Nursing Home se bahar aate hi, Naina dekhti hai police ki jeep bahar aa kar rukta hai. Police Nursing Home ke andar chala jaata hai, Naina kuch der uss taraf dekh kar car main beth jaati hai.

Naina ghar aa kar aapne kamre main chali jaati hai, uske papa desh ke bahar gaaye hai, Sirish Singh Aluwalia, Famous BusinessMan.Textile busines. Business samhalte samhalte aur usse bada karte karte woh bhul hi chuke hai unki ek beti hai.Zyada waqt business ko le kar desh se bahar rehte hai.Tab Alekh par sab responsibility rehta hai. Alekh Sharma, usse koi khun ka rishta nahin hai. Ek Employee hai, lekin sab se zyada bhorosa karte hai woh uss par.Ghar aur business sab jagah Alekh ki active participation se Naina ko lagta hai woh iss ghar ka beta hai. Naina ko gussa aata hai uske papa ka business par uss main woh hi kuch nahin. Haa uske naam hi hai sab kuch. Lekin phir bhi uska kuch nahin hai. Naina janti hai usse jo shaadi karega business ussi ka hoga. Uska pati uske business ka malik banega, decision lega. Aise chance koi nahin chorega. Naina ki shaadi fix ki hai uske dad ne, Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan se.Kuch Import Export ka business hai, kya??? Yeh bhi clear nahin hai. Par uske papa ke bohut kareeb hai woh Abhimanyu,Business Partner bhi hai dono.Rajasthan ki rajgharane ki bahu banegi Naina.mili hai usse Naina, par bakwaas laga, par usse dukh to iss baat ka hua ki uske aapne papa ne yeh baat nahin samjha. Naina ne jab aapne papa se kaha ki usse yeh ladka nahin pasand, to uske dad ne kaha beta shaadi ke baad pyaar ho hi jaata hai. Matlab usse adjustment karna parega, Naina ko yeh samajh main nahin aaya Why?? Naina aapne mom ke photo ke paas jaati hai, aur khub roti hai. " mom kyun chali gaayi aap mujhe chod kar, I miss u mom, I miss u.dekho naa meri zindagi mazak ban kar reh gaaya, aap hoti to aisa nahin hota. Mom main bohut akeli ho gaayi hoon, plzz mujhe rasta dikhao, aap mujhe bachpan main Angel ki kahani sunati thi, plzz mere life main bhi koi Angel bhejo"

Thodi der baad Naina sone ki kohsish karti hai. Par aankh bandh karte hi Naina ko woh accident yaad aa jaata hai, aur khun se latpat woh aadmi. Naina uth kar ek need ki tablet leti hai, phir aa kar soti hai aur sochti hai aaj uske wajah se kisi ki jaan jaate jaate reh gaaya, kisi ko itna takleef hui, woh chehra nahin bhul sakti. Medicine ka asar hona shuru ho gaya tha, Naina ko need hi halat main sirf ek naam hi yaad aaya "Rajveer"…………